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Published: 2016-11-21 14:36:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 1899; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 3
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EDIT: Critiques has been enabled! If you want to let me know what you thought of the comic in general (however detailed you may want it to be), now's your chance!It would really help me to improve future comics ^^
Here's an extra 'epilogue' page! I want to make one of these every time I finish a comic, it's nice to have your characters break the fourth wall XD
Rabbit and Dino originally started as a fourth wall breaking comic, but I toned that down a lot. The more you know
Seriously, thank you so much for reading this, I hope you enjoyed it!
First page Previous page This comic is over, but just click this link if you want to read another spooky one!
GHOOOST! More Rabbit&Dino Facebook page with concept art & more!
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Comments: 65
Wow, thank you so much! That really means a lot to me!
It's my first big project involving my own stories and characters, so I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
I'm especially glad you liked the chemistry between the main characters, that will be very important in future installments of this series.
You're right about page 3, although the context can tell the reader who's saying what, I should've made it a bit more clear.
I've added some color to the text, does that help?
Again, thanks a lot for writing such a detailed comment and giving me constructive criticism, I really appreciate it!
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Yeah! Adding colored text, like in page 7, does help distinguish who's who. Happy that you actually took my criticism, and applied it to your work. I really appreciate you for doing that.
You're welcome!
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HAhaha, that face when he's drinking from the wineglass XD.
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This adventure has been a bit too adventurous for him XD
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That was a pretty good comic overall. Great use of colours and lines. I really liked the flying whale and the fact that Rabbit was constantly reminding Dino that he was cold-blooded. I hope to read more of your comics soon!
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, I hope I'll be able to make more of these in the future ^^
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A so great ending for a great comic !
About a critique...well, i'm not a person of critiques but i'll try:
The entire comic was pretty great. The idea of a Halloween story in the Artic is pretty original (and if there are other story of Halloween in the Artic that i don't know i don't care because i doubt that that story is as unique as this). The humor is fantastic as usual, with many crazy things that give good laughs but without taking away the importance of the plot like your logo cameos.
The visual quality is pretty good! And finally about the characters... Well, Dino and Rabbit are a so great combination! The Skeledude was unexpected but a nice surprise too. I think my only complain is the apparition of those other characters with the exception of Bussines Shark and Froggy since the first appeared in other comic and Froggy feels more familiar since he appears in the first page but this little things doesn't take away that this comic was overall great !
Also I would like to see more of these new characters (i know the rock isn't as new, i have seen him before in your gallery) in future comics ~
Keep up with your awesome work 
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Thank you very much for the feedback! I'm glad you liked the setting and characters
I completely agree, I wish I had more time to make comics and introduce all these guys.
I can however add them to the character reference sheet with some better descriptions, I'll do that soon ^^
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You're welcome!
Nice
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Haha, thank you so much!
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I enjoyed the comic! It was wild and fun and really nice. I'm not sure I'm good with constructive criticism though, since right at the moment I'm completely worn down from classes. One day I'll go back, but I'm by no means a comic expert.
Also a blow dryer would work a little bit better at getting your assets stuck off of anything.
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Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed it! That's fine, any feedback is really helpful ^^
...yeeeaaaah maybe they should do that instead
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Hey! Look who watched Gravity Falls! Awesome!
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Yup! It was a great show
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Wrong perspective successfully ignored.
It was a great adventure! And yeah, breaking the 4th wall is fun when it's not too much and it matches the humor.
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GOOD, I'M GLAD YOU DIDN'T NOTICE IT
Thanks a lot! Yeah, I agree
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it ^^
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Wow, Rabbit's got class!
In the first panel it's like his eyebrows are off his eyebrows <: D
Hold on Dino no Dino you dingus Dino Dino no
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His eyebrows aren't connected to his head, they just kinda... float XP
DINO. NO. STAHP.
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Oh, okay XD
He just HAD to go pee in that freezing weather
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Hey, when you gotta go, you gotta go...
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Maybe somewhere with fire in the room or
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THIS IS THE ONLY WAY
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THE ONLY WAY!
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WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO IMPLY
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...Nothing.
Not like I tried anything or whatever.
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You sure about that
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THAT ISN'T A VALID ANSWER
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I CANNOT UNDERSTAND
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Please understand
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OMG, the 3rd panel!!! 
Lol, I liked this bonus page man.
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Rabbit is just jealous XD
I'm glad you did!
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Do you want me to colour it? ^^
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Oh, eh sure, if you want to!
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Commas. They're important.
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