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Published: 2016-11-20 14:19:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 2093; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 1
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The last page is done at last! I know I haven't properly introduced most of those other characters yet, but I couldn't think of another way to end it.I didn't want to let them end up alone on Halloween, that was kind of an important plot point.
Although you can probably tell what their personalities are by how they behave, here are some quick descriptions of who these guys are:
-Business Shark: you've seen him before in 'New Jawb '! He's the bossy businessman, as you can see he's dressed up as... things he considers to be scary
-Henk the stone: just your average angry anthropomorphic rock
-Corvus: an extravagant, rich, famous bird who likes to sing (poorly) and annoy the heck out of Rabbit... which explains his costume
-Stan Cakes: Russian (?) ex-hitman who owns the pancake restaurant below R&D's apartment
-Froggy: you've probably seen him in this comic for the first time, he's one of Dino's pals. Although he doesn't talk much, he's always happy to help. Probably?
BUT WAIT... THERE'S ANOTHER PAGE?!
First page Previous page ...Next page?!
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Comments: 48
You should publish this somehow. Professional quality! 
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Wow thank you so much! I wish I could XD
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No problem plus thanks for the llama
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Thanks! Did you like it?
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Awesome, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Is there anything that could be improved?
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Okay, thanks anyway ^^
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The costume of Bussines Shark XD.
I also have noticed the Wander's hat and that Froggy's costume is Witch Kitten !
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Yup, I was waiting for someone to notice his costume!
That's not Wander's hat though, just the one from the previous pages
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Yeah like you said, properly introducing the characters would have maybe helped, but I'll let it slide since you wanted eleven comics. Rabbit looks tired of everything though, lol. x'D I LOVE Business Shark though. I need more of him in my life.
Such a cute, fast paced, quick comic! I think the main issue you had was pacing and possibly issues with some of your jokes being missed, which I can slide since I read a lot of Ian Flynn's work. If you want great examples of sight gag comics, Far Side, the old Archie comics, and Asterix are great references for those.
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Yeah true, I wish I had more time so I could introduce them all in separate comics.
I agree, pacing is probably the main issue.
Oh yes, I'm a big fan of the Astérix series!
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Maybe one day you will!
Yeah the pacing definitely is a main issue, but you made the comic and you learned from it which is the important thing. I always tell people that to keep doing it you'll learn more from it.
xD I think one of my more favorite comics though is The Far Side. I love the dry, hilarious, witty humor in it. x'D
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Exactly! It's better to try and fail (AND hopefully learn) then to not make anything at all.
Eh they have different names in my country, what was this one about?
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xD Indeed!
Uhh I think The Far Side is a surrealist comic made by Gary Larson. Dunno if there's a name change, but it's a little more obscure, compared to Asterix or Calvin and Hobbes. It's still just as incredibly witty and amusing.
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Ah I hadn't heard of it before, it looks funny indeed!
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Rabbit's life is a never ending series of unfortunate events.
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It really is. With at least 99% of these events caused by his acquaintance
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His acquaintance who he lives with, because he's a masochist.
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Naww that was a cute read, I liked it. <3
Speaking of shiver it's like only 62 degrees and I'm freezing my butt off. I'm definitely a southerner. :/
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I'm glad you like it!
Ow, good luck with surviving that! Stay safe
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Haha I'll survive. It's just funny cause I talk about being cold and everybody who lives up north just looks at me incredulously. Then again they think 70 degrees is t-shirt weather...
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Haha alright
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Wow business shark, nice costume.
Good to stress out the rabbit
Did he just say.. Another page coming soon? :00000
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Yup! Just an extra page though, the story is done
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But ey, it's a page! :\
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Technically yes!
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"You can die of dehydration in the Arctic"
nice to know
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Hahaha, that was cool. You definitely know how to write some pretty clever dialog.
And for some reason, I picture Business Shark with a gruff Vince McMahon-ish voice; mixed with Nappa from DBZ abridged. I don't know if that's what you had in mind. XD
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Thank you so much! That's something I wanted to improve on
I imagine him having some kind of grouchy cartoony voice, like a mix between Grunkle Stan and Lord Hater.
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Yeah, I can picture any one of those growly voices.
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Business Shark = Best costume!
Geez, this ended randomly. I really like it.
I had fun reading this comic, looking forward to your future ones if you will ever make one!
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I'm glad you liked it! Thanks a lot dude, and yes, I'll make tons more
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OMG, recession! I won't sleep tonight! I love business shark btw xD
So this is a happy ending...or ist it?! o.o
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HAUNTING YOUR FINANCIAL DREAAAMS
Glad you like him XD
It is! But there's an extra page coming very soon
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Good to know, I'm glad you liked it! ^^
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