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Published: 2016-10-27 12:22:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 1453; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 2
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Oops. I tried to improve the pacing for this comic by having a maximum of 6-7 panels per page, but it wouldn't work for this page sadly.
Wait, how did Froggy even get there? Oh well. NOT IMPORTANT :^)))))
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Comments: 38
This one was a little more cluttered, I think the first two panels is what confused me a bit when it came to Dino being frozen. The next few panels I understood, Dino being unfrozen by coffee and frozen again to convey Rabbit's annoyance at halloween. But yeah I don't think increasing the number of panels really helped with this one in the long run. Even cutting out the first two panels it still would have flowed better.
ALso I didn't notice this before but "Ice physics platformers that make me pull my hair out" is the best ever. x'D
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Good point... I made a small change, does this improve the flow a bit?
I think I might know where some of the problems come from. As I wrote the story I imagined it more as a cartoon than a comic, and while those are similar in some ways, quickly shifting between locations doesn't work as well in a comic.
Glad you noticed that joke X)
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Yeah, smash cuts are HARD to do in a comic , which is probably why in comics like Mega Man and Sonic the Hedgehog they usually do "Later" or something. But yeah to be able to make an effective comic, looking at tutorials, and not really thinking the comic as a cartoon helps LOADS.
It does help though. Ye. <3
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Good! Thanks again ^^
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How long does each page take you? Professional quality every time!
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Thank you so much! Eh, let's see... I made most of the sketches and the script far in advance, the lineart for one page takes a bit less than an hour, coloring it and adding backgrounds... much longer
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I'm posting a journal soon that will explain that reference
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"Not celebrating Halloween this year"
"Not celebrating Halloween"
"Not Halloween"
Rabbit I swear you have the same effect as ice physics in platformers
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... Heeey, glacier scalers! OOhh, Snowboarding sucks extreme 4! I played Snowboarding sucks extreme two and three, and loved them!
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He'll be fine! They said so! And I hope they're right <: D
I didn't really like them myself, and I know this may be a bold statement, but don't you think Snowboarding Sucks eXtreme.... kinda sucks? Weird thought, I know.
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-Have you carved those pumpkins yet?
-*in Rabbit's mind* (Y/N)............N
When i saw the nitrogen i laughed pretty much xD
I find surprising how Froggy appeared. Sadly that Rabbit throw him through the window, that was cold! But i guess we shouldn't worry and stay chill. He'll be cool outside
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Glad you liked it XD
STOP IT. SNOW more of these ice puns please!
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LOOK! YOU HAVE JUST DONE AN ICE PUN! YOU'RE INFECTED!!
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AND I'M THE A SOURCE OF THE VIRUS
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OH GREAT, A NEW EPIDEMIC
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Yeah increasing the panels didn't do much for the pacing, but it's still a good page. :3
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Thank you very much! ^^
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LOL. The dynamic between these two is so entertaining. It's almost like they're a modern day Ren and Stimpy. Though maybe not QUITE as psychotic. XD
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Haha, thanks a lot, that's a big compliment
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Well I didn't except such a cold reception.
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I guess there's something about Halloween that triggers him... :^)
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Ooohh I guess we are going to know what soon :^}
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*COUGH*BRACEYOURSELFFORPAGE6*COUGH*
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