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Published: 2009-11-18 16:00:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 2216; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 95
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Description The full title is "Marwan Talks About Animation".

I was meaning to finish this animation as early as September. Unfortunately, my family having to inspect and maintain our soon-to-be new house, and other family-related issues, prevented me from finishing this in time. And I really, really wanted to upload this in my gallery as soon as possible.

Full description is already in the SWF itself.
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Comments: 50

JWJlink94 [2017-04-10 11:26:41 +0000 UTC]

And btw, I apparently did animations all frame by frame just so you know.

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Came64 [2016-04-16 19:42:03 +0000 UTC]

I really like the animation but there are some parts where he doesn't moves his arms at all. It would be nice if he would atleast lower his arms or so.

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Charis-O-Matic [2015-07-02 22:53:14 +0000 UTC]

The lip syncing is very awesome! ^^

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to Charis-O-Matic [2015-07-07 22:57:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Well, not really. Anime-style lip-sync is often considered as "cheating" and being lazy to animate the lip animation properly among Western animators. Though, at the same time, among anime fans, this is also part of anime's charm, which was originally a way for the Japanese animators to cut animation costs by limiting the amount of frames to animate with.

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charliedulol [2015-05-11 16:33:23 +0000 UTC]

IM SCRAMING OUT OF TIME TO TELL YOU YOU CAN CONTINU WORKING ON THIS!

now, lets head back to the future!

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Frostuin [2013-10-09 18:34:05 +0000 UTC]

"I have a confession to make...

You DON't suck at animtion!"

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eragonmerlin [2013-05-21 01:06:50 +0000 UTC]

Aww your voice suits marwan so well xD

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to eragonmerlin [2013-05-22 05:02:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. After all, a cute character doesn't need to have a very cutesy voice.

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eragonmerlin In reply to MarwanGreenCritter [2013-05-23 06:02:42 +0000 UTC]

exactly

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texaveryjr [2012-07-24 11:29:11 +0000 UTC]

I had a really hard time animating, almost to the point of suicidal. :S
Although I had some books about it, I got on pretty well. I really wanted to make my work just like Kenneth Muse's work for Tom and Jerry, since I really didn't want cartoons to suck so hard nowadays.

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to texaveryjr [2012-07-25 09:16:48 +0000 UTC]

I understand how you feel. Every animators want to save the animation medium from being a crappy medium. Myself, I always wished that cartoons should not be just kids-only, which is unfortunately the attitude of many countries nowadays when it comes to cartoons. (Maybe except Japan, but that's another story.) For example, keep in mind that those old Looney Tunes cartoons that today are enjoyed by kids everywhere weren't even meant for kids in the first place.

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texaveryjr In reply to MarwanGreenCritter [2012-07-25 14:48:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, at least its good to have a passion in your life.
I do really love how adult cartoons really were back in the 30's and 40's, they were even racist, especially Tex Avery's cartoons that are just really funny as hell.
You know, I think Disney in my opinion is the only studio that knows great of making great animation in general, but I wish they did really use the kind of humour that Looney Tunes had. But I think the early scenes of Tom and Jerry done by Ken Muse are honestly the most best piece of animation ever made outside of the old generic Disney pinnacle, although he did work for Disney before the 1941 Disney animator's strike, you just have to feel sorry for all those ex-Disney animators, and Disney was much more different since then.

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chefcheiro [2010-07-10 15:57:56 +0000 UTC]

here a bit critique.

you done great work, good expression, some pose and i like when you tapping the hand part (that was the best part) also you doing good at the lip sync .

I think you need give some enhance the animation a bit like giving some antics and cushion (just like the taping hand part).

But the most of important of animation is actually about the acting part. This part is not really easy to make. Most of all the body just stay still. Add some movement in every "pressing" word. Such as "WELL OF COURSE" you can make your body moving towards to the camera a bit.

And also when we talking about animation, there always talking about exaggeration. Just a bit exaggerate won't be harmless.

Hope you understand. I'm looking forward for your proggress



PS: if you don't mind may i re-make it in my version.

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JonnyAMax [2010-01-28 15:41:32 +0000 UTC]

Okay I have to say thats probably one of the cuter things I've seen on DA. You did a very good job with facial expressions and variations with the eyebrows. Plus its the first time I hear Marwan talk, I like his accent

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to JonnyAMax [2010-01-28 18:29:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Many foreigners commented that they like my accent. That's my natural voice, by the way, with no pitch alteration whatsoever. As for the facial expressions, the face is quite important in conveying emotion, which is why both the eyes and the mouth are equally treated.

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JonnyAMax In reply to MarwanGreenCritter [2010-01-29 02:05:12 +0000 UTC]

I know right? Sometimes I wonder what my accent sounds like to others. Still yours is very charming

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Machu [2009-12-26 13:06:40 +0000 UTC]

That is so true, and I can tell you from experience I liked the part when your character bashed its fist against its other palm in frustration

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to Machu [2009-12-26 23:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks. The "palm-bashing" part, I wasn't really frustrated, I merely wanted to add my point to aspiring animators that animation can't be learned in just a short time; you really do need years of practice and experience to even barely reach professional-quality animation.

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Machu In reply to MarwanGreenCritter [2009-12-27 01:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it takes a lot of practice since it deals with time as well as emotion and shape. Those who take the time to learn and have the patience to do so can be good at animation

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lynaithan [2009-12-01 01:54:57 +0000 UTC]

You see Marwan?

You DON'T suck at animation.
(yeah i remembered that XD)

keep it up keep it up.^^

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to lynaithan [2009-12-01 03:03:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yeah, I remember that. Actually, in the incomplete uncut version of this animation, I did, in fact, reference that old animation in my gallery.

Maybe someday, I should go ahead and just try to finish this animation.

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lynaithan In reply to MarwanGreenCritter [2009-12-02 01:22:00 +0000 UTC]

that would be cool, I'd like to see it.

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spookowl [2009-11-24 05:29:34 +0000 UTC]

I remember this like I said last time awesome work!

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to spookowl [2009-11-24 10:05:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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spookowl In reply to MarwanGreenCritter [2009-11-25 07:34:50 +0000 UTC]

welcome!

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ShanetheFreestyler [2009-11-19 18:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Pretty nice so far, looks professional, and I like your voice. XP

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to ShanetheFreestyler [2009-11-24 10:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for not replying for so long. Anyway, thanks. I don't exactly consider myself that professional, though.

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Cryomundus [2009-11-19 09:25:05 +0000 UTC]

You definitely have some skill, though, it was a little choppy at the beginning, that could've been my computer. It's been acting a little off today.

I don't think I'll ever get tired of hearing your voice. For some reason, you sound like some sorta squeaky toy to me. Dunno why...

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ElGuason [2009-11-19 06:51:12 +0000 UTC]

Great animation, dude? Oh my god, so that's how you sound like. Very funny.

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to ElGuason [2009-11-19 12:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, thanks!

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AlexRaccoonGlider [2009-11-18 23:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Increadible and informative! ^_^ I still have the original flash you have me but...this is very smooth and clean, professional grade work Mar-mar ^^

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to AlexRaccoonGlider [2009-11-19 12:24:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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HybridProjectAlpha [2009-11-18 22:54:38 +0000 UTC]

You have an adorable accent

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Shadychaos [2009-11-18 21:31:32 +0000 UTC]

that voice is so cute!
the animation is really smooth to

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to Shadychaos [2009-11-19 12:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Shadychaos In reply to MarwanGreenCritter [2009-11-19 18:37:10 +0000 UTC]

bp ^^

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Digisushi [2009-11-18 20:52:09 +0000 UTC]

I still like your voice :3

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Trotim [2009-11-18 20:03:22 +0000 UTC]

Your accent is smexy.

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to Trotim [2009-11-19 12:21:17 +0000 UTC]

You think so?

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ErikMcClure [2009-11-18 19:46:45 +0000 UTC]

reminds me of my repeated attempts at finishing my game lol

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Ander-BloodEyes [2009-11-18 18:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Eeer, In my memories, this animation contained more elements... Why did you reduce it

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to Ander-BloodEyes [2009-11-18 19:29:52 +0000 UTC]

Because of the lack of time. Blame it on my soon-to-be new house. For long periods between September to November, my parents dragged me along to that new house, usually to inspect the house together, but the real reason is to take over my father's place, because he couldn't leave his office job, and my mother needs me just so she won't feel lonely while being there.

Also, animation job opportunities are continuously shrinking in Malaysia. I need to prove to those employees out there that I can animate, and now is a very critical time to do so.

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chefcheiro [2009-11-18 18:12:32 +0000 UTC]

wow, clean framing!

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to chefcheiro [2009-11-18 18:33:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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chefcheiro In reply to MarwanGreenCritter [2009-11-19 19:55:59 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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DCLeadboot [2009-11-18 17:54:44 +0000 UTC]

Heh, well... it's coming along nicely there!
So are the bits you showed me previously.

Hope you get to get this finished soon!

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to DCLeadboot [2009-11-18 18:33:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. Yeah, I hope I can finish it soon. Actually, I only need to prove to my would-be employers that I can animate; it doesn't have to be a finished animation... I hope.

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DCLeadboot In reply to MarwanGreenCritter [2009-11-18 21:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah well... still, animating is fun too!

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BillyMT [2009-11-18 17:05:12 +0000 UTC]

Heheh, I still have the previous version of that XD Did you cut out most of it?

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MarwanGreenCritter In reply to BillyMT [2009-11-18 17:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, I saved that one with a different filename, so all those animation I've been working so hard on for many months are not lost. Also, I always back-up my files, including all Flash files, once every month, so they won't be lost.

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