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Published: 2006-10-20 15:41:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I tried so hardto let it all go
I tried so hard
to learn to take it slow
But there's a space on the inside
that fills me up whole
There's a strange, constant fear
that's taking its toll
Too many emotions
but nothing to say
Too many words
but they cant find their way.....
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Comments: 7
deepdarkdesires [2006-10-27 12:22:54 +0000 UTC]
i think, i can feel what you are feeling. that should mean that this is a good poem!
take care!
hope things are better now!
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masterdevil In reply to deepdarkdesires [2006-10-31 14:45:20 +0000 UTC]
yup...things r better...just tht sometimes things get frustrating...hope u doin fyn!...tc!
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deepdarkdesires In reply to masterdevil [2006-11-01 15:51:00 +0000 UTC]
i am doing great.....
take care too!
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Dezy [2006-10-22 19:10:35 +0000 UTC]
sometimes, it is possible to sacrifice a bit of grammar for a better flow.
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masterdevil In reply to Dezy [2006-10-24 05:45:13 +0000 UTC]
yes sir...ill take care of tht the next time
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innocentdevil [2006-10-21 20:35:14 +0000 UTC]
well, short and sweet... direct to the point poem...
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