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masterdevil — never there
Published: 2005-08-31 10:43:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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when i needed uu were always there
but when u needed me
i was unaware
blissfully ignorant then i was
unaware of the intensity of pain i had caused
in the power of a force that had blinded me
ur fake smile was all i could see
ur love and sacrifice can never be repayed
i realise now with ur heart i did play
so here i quit this game called life
coz i no for sure with me ull never survive
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nice one you have there! but i agree with Dezy, you should consider full words...
i'm surprised that he did not comment on you grammar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
anyways...i am going to read the rest of the poems...
this one's title just caught my eye...
also, kinda like the theme you have there...
interesting...
guess, it is just a girl thing to write stuff like this...don't see the guys doing this ever so often!
emotional wrecks that we are!
anyways...
keep 'em coming
take care!
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haha...thanks....the 'full words' , yup im working on them. and the grammar...i know it sucks....im trying to work on it too!
and thanks for reading my poems; i really appreciate it!
ive written one in 'scrap' too...i have HARDLY got any comments on that one....hope you like it.
probably why my poems have got that 'girl thing' is coz i've written them when i was down.....n u know how we girls get when we're depressed....can be really embarassing sometimes!
anyways thanks again!
cheers!
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yeah, i spotted you on merzhin's page and thought i should check your page too, considering i am not 'churning' out any new deviations as of now. i am only checking out other people's work. hence, i have ALL the time in the world!!!!!!!!
yea, will read your scrap work, too.
i think we all write our poems when we are down. that gives the honest touch to them. makes them feel real!
yep, i know all about depression! we girls have a way with it. seems attracted to us like magnet!
anyhow, do take care!
keep in touch!
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Your poem should be typed out properly...use full words if you are actually serious about what you are writing.
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k...ill do tht in ma nxt poem...thnx
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ouch!...... i seriosuly dont understand such poetry...... it is way beyond my bouncer level.....
nice work anyways!
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thnx....wait 4 da nxt 1 .... i almost strted crying while ritin tht!!....no kiddin!!
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