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mastermindalien — Jill Redone

Published: 2010-06-29 21:05:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1611; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 13
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Description I haven't drawn an actual picture of Jill in ages, so I looked at my art and my requests from , and , combined the looks and here she is redrawn in a much better way.

Jill - Me
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Comments: 11

bubbles46853 [2013-06-26 20:08:50 +0000 UTC]

Awww, she's so cute!!!!!

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Cybernator27 [2010-10-17 06:55:39 +0000 UTC]

hmm. since you wanted some con critique Ill give my honest view of the image. *looks at artwork*
It seems youve done this traditionally then scanned it and digitally colored it.
in your future subs try to work with your pencil lines in darkening them but also taking your time to get it right. her shoulders dont have any bone on em but are rounded a bit too much. Her belly button seems to be missing on her tummy area.
There also seems to be no shading to depict where the light source is coming from.

Just keep drawing and taking your time referencing body structures and light and stuff and youll do fine
hope this helps you fellow artist

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mastermindalien In reply to Cybernator27 [2010-10-17 19:11:49 +0000 UTC]

It does, though I've never really been good with shading so I've never tried it on a picture I've uploaded.

But in future picts I will give characters more shoulder bone structure, and I didn't figure to give her a belly button at the time because I assumed that her fur would cover it up. Though later on I decided to add one.

Darker pencil lines would benefit as well.

Thank you for your critique.

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Cybernator27 In reply to mastermindalien [2010-10-18 01:08:36 +0000 UTC]

try out a ebony lead pencil when darkening your lines . if you want try to use a lamp or small light and aim it in any angle of a action figure you have and study where the light goes.

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JOE-Awsome [2010-07-01 03:01:41 +0000 UTC]

hehe cute ^^

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mastermindalien In reply to JOE-Awsome [2010-07-01 05:34:37 +0000 UTC]

Finally someone commented on it, and thank you.

Quick question should I make her chubbier next time?

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JOE-Awsome In reply to mastermindalien [2010-07-01 13:18:51 +0000 UTC]

what do you mean finally? =/

well its your choice dude not mine but i guess sure

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mastermindalien In reply to JOE-Awsome [2010-07-01 13:53:52 +0000 UTC]

Well I had 5 favorites and nobody commented on it all day. (personally I like comments more than favs).

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JOE-Awsome In reply to mastermindalien [2010-07-01 21:50:39 +0000 UTC]

why?

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mastermindalien In reply to JOE-Awsome [2010-07-04 06:35:32 +0000 UTC]

Because comments tell me things, to me favs just mean that a person liked the picture and wanted a shortcut to it without having to look through your gallery.

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JOE-Awsome In reply to mastermindalien [2010-07-04 14:56:04 +0000 UTC]

well hey thats how some poeple are here and yea it sucks but...it sucks

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