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foxesdemonica In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 13:12:32 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh, so much action I love it!

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mauroz In reply to foxesdemonica [2013-06-17 03:39:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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Laurentiusje In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 12:45:41 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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mauroz In reply to Laurentiusje [2013-06-17 03:39:09 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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Laurentiusje In reply to mauroz [2013-06-17 11:18:56 +0000 UTC]

:3

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McConnell48 In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 12:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Love it! Cant wait for the next one to come out! Super huge fan! You are an amazing artist, and i look forward to viewing your work in the future! Keep creating master pieces!

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mauroz In reply to McConnell48 [2013-06-17 03:39:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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sportsguy28 In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 12:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Their is a speech bubble error in panel 7

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mauroz In reply to sportsguy28 [2013-06-17 03:38:12 +0000 UTC]

already corrected ^^

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VampirateLycan In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 11:35:18 +0000 UTC]

A couple of translation errors, but aside from that. An amazing story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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mauroz In reply to VampirateLycan [2013-06-17 03:37:56 +0000 UTC]

already corrected thanks ^^

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TrueMadayar In reply to VampirateLycan [2013-06-16 12:02:04 +0000 UTC]

What errors do you mean? I partly went away from a literal translation, especially with AJ, since in English you can actually rock her dialect.

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VampirateLycan In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-06-16 16:13:12 +0000 UTC]

It was mainly spelling I think. For example 'four' years instead of 'for' in reference to the wonderbolt academy.

And 'never would have imagined I'd have a friend like you'

They're only very little things and don't detract from the story.

In regards to AJ I thought it was pretty good. Loving the dialect and how you made bucking look natural on a human.

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TrueMadayar In reply to VampirateLycan [2013-06-16 17:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Mauroz made the bucking! ^_^

The spelling error of "four" I already sent him, that was fully my mistake. The "friend" sentence...well, didn't want to fiddle too much with what Mauroz wanted to say there, since I already was altering AJ so much. It's still Mauroz' comic, he's the god here.

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VampirateLycan In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-06-16 17:57:59 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough. Sometimes it happens. The amount of times I write words twice in a sentence sometimes. haha

The friend sentence was from RD. But I do understand your sentiment, sometimes things get lost in translation

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TrueMadayar In reply to VampirateLycan [2013-06-16 18:27:33 +0000 UTC]

Lost in translation, like right now, hehe. Since I know that the sentence is said by RD, but my point was that I wanted to keep Mauroz's original idea for the sentence. And no matter how often I look at it, I can't find a sentence that has the same meaning with the same or less words - they have to fit the bubble, too.

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VampirateLycan In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-06-16 18:29:34 +0000 UTC]

haha fair enough. It's a good job regardless, translating is probably a difficult enough job without me nit picking.

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TrueMadayar In reply to VampirateLycan [2013-06-16 18:35:59 +0000 UTC]

AH! NOW I SEE IT! There's a d missing! "Although I admit I never would've imagineD to have a friend like you." What a STUPID mistake by me...I'll send Mauroz a note immediately.

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VampirateLycan In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-06-16 19:34:50 +0000 UTC]

haha glad you saw it.

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mpz28 In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 10:22:01 +0000 UTC]

fantastic work, well worth the read, can't wait for the next chapter

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mauroz In reply to mpz28 [2013-06-17 03:37:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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eric-emanwu In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 10:21:57 +0000 UTC]

Huh. And so the plot thickens. It appears that Little Spike is about to take on a much bigger role in this story. Not only is he in on the reincarnation bit, but he also now has made a link to 2 of the 3 remaining bearers. He rescued Fluttershy, and made contact with AJ. He's going to be the message bearer for them about how this applejack bucked some bullies out of sight. Speak of rescuing fluttershy. And if things go as I suspect, he'll be the one to strike in and show how RD's hanging out with the wrong crowd if they're going to threaten her friend fluttershy. Also, totally calling it. RD's going to have lightning powers!!!!!

Further, it appears AJ was hurt by someone in the past which made her into the dissonant aj we see here instead of the jolly country gal who gladly shook twilight's arm in the time before time.

Keep em coming!

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mauroz In reply to eric-emanwu [2013-06-17 03:37:20 +0000 UTC]

^^ thank you very much!!

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TheIflame In reply to eric-emanwu [2013-06-16 12:19:33 +0000 UTC]

Ok, if RD's power will be lightning, what about Flutters and AJ then?

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eric-emanwu In reply to TheIflame [2013-06-16 21:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Alright, so if twilight is general magic, Pinkie is water, Rarity is earth, rainbow is lightning, then fluttershy would be wind, (Irony for the pegasus who wasn't the best at flying!) and I think AJ would be fire. Either that, or Fluttershy would get the most important element of them all: HEART!!!

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TheIflame In reply to eric-emanwu [2013-06-16 22:44:28 +0000 UTC]

OH NO YOU DIDN'T! DO NOT BRING HEART UP AS A POWER! I'M WARNING YOU!
Also AJ with fire is BADASS!

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eric-emanwu In reply to TheIflame [2013-06-16 23:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Ah, come on. Don't you know Heart's a badass power that allows you to control nature's fury? Or subtly influence other's decisions? Or become the most famous planeteer ever precisely because your powers are so different.

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TheIflame In reply to eric-emanwu [2013-06-16 23:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Well...I do guess Heart fits well with fluttershy, but it would be an ironic twist if her element was Wind.
And still...AppleJack with fire...even if it doesn't make it into this comic I want to see a picture of it....NOAW!

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DDBridge919334 In reply to TheIflame [2013-06-16 13:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm....
We don't know. JUST WAIT FOR THE NEXT COMIC AGAIN! -makes a tent and a campfire- I'm all set.

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TheIflame In reply to DDBridge919334 [2013-06-16 13:17:12 +0000 UTC]

-Sits down beside you with a couple of sticks and a bag of marshmallows- So am I!

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DDBridge919334 In reply to TheIflame [2013-06-16 13:29:26 +0000 UTC]

Good thing you got the marshmallows. I almost forgot them. I am very impatient when it comes to really good comics. I read the spanish one so I would have an idea of what it'll be.

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TheIflame In reply to DDBridge919334 [2013-06-16 15:02:54 +0000 UTC]

The thing I do is I half forget about them but still check them once in a while, so when a new page comes up I get much more surprised and happy

And shame on you for forgetting about the marshmallows.

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DDBridge919334 In reply to TheIflame [2013-06-16 18:30:01 +0000 UTC]

Don't shame me.
You wouldn't shame AppleBloom. Or me.

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TheIflame In reply to DDBridge919334 [2013-06-16 18:41:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh god...those eyes....they stare into ones soul...and slowly tear it apart as you try to resist the massive D'AAAAAAAWs coming from it.......

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DDBridge919334 In reply to TheIflame [2013-06-16 18:48:25 +0000 UTC]

STARE INTO HER EYES~!!!!!

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TheIflame In reply to DDBridge919334 [2013-06-16 18:49:58 +0000 UTC]

NO....I..I CAN RESIST THE D'AAWW!

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DDBridge919334 In reply to TheIflame [2013-06-16 19:02:03 +0000 UTC]

LOOK INTO HER EYES!!! -ties you up and forces you to look at her- :iconsadapplebloom: LOOK INTO THE EYES.

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TheIflame In reply to DDBridge919334 [2013-06-16 19:58:19 +0000 UTC]

NO....-Tries to break free- NO..I..I CAN..CAN'T......D'AWWWWW IT'S JUST SO ADORABLE!

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DDBridge919334 In reply to TheIflame [2013-06-17 00:15:44 +0000 UTC]

YES! YES! WE WILL WRITE AND YOU WILL STARE INTO HER EYES UNTIL THE NEXT COMIC COMES OUT.

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Likaon1995 In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 10:00:44 +0000 UTC]

This is definetly the best MLP-based story I've ever managed to read! I... I'm just speechles how much I love this one <3

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mauroz In reply to Likaon1995 [2013-06-17 03:35:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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Likaon1995 In reply to mauroz [2013-06-17 15:32:00 +0000 UTC]

Well I thank YOU! Funny fact here: Do you know that your story inspired me so much, that I tried to draw your Human Applejack?
Here's a link! [ [link] ]
Maybe you'll tell me what do you think 'bout it... I mean... If that's okay with you...

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mauroz In reply to Likaon1995 [2013-06-25 02:11:12 +0000 UTC]

cool *o*....gave me happiness

PD: sorry for the late answer xd

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DeadCobra In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 09:34:02 +0000 UTC]

This is coooool
God dam what happen to AJ?

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mauroz In reply to DeadCobra [2013-06-17 03:35:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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Rhysw13 In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 09:22:21 +0000 UTC]

Nice job! I really loved the parkour scenes being someone who trains in the discipline. One thing though, instead of "I'll be the world's best parkour" it should be "I'll be the world's best tracuer." An understandable mistake though since you don't speak English and hardly anyone knows that someone would does parkour is called a traceur. But apart from that, AWESOME!

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mauroz In reply to Rhysw13 [2013-06-17 03:34:44 +0000 UTC]

yeah already corrected ^^

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TrueMadayar In reply to Rhysw13 [2013-06-16 09:37:05 +0000 UTC]

I did translate it into traceuse (I speak no spanish, but some french, hehe), but mauroz chose to keep the discipline in. It's way more known, and probably the readers would have to google "traceuse" in the middle of the comic, which would interrupt the experience. And hey, as long as he does these comics, I'm willing to go with whatever he wants. He's just too good.

I just suggested "at parkour" to him, so the sentence makes sense.

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Rhysw13 In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-06-16 22:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough, do you do parkour?

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TrueMadayar In reply to Rhysw13 [2013-06-17 13:40:22 +0000 UTC]

Hah. I wish. If I would jump against a wall, there's a certain chance the wall will give in. No, I admire the sport, but I fear I'll be lucky if I get some movement again so I play a better basketball.

Maybe next life.

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