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mauroz In reply to ??? [2013-06-17 02:55:39 +0000 UTC]

all in due time XD

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Count-Author In reply to mauroz [2013-06-17 03:45:24 +0000 UTC]

I got ya.

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Hugo-Seven In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:36:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh mauroz, you have yet to disappoint me. It was a little refreshing to see characters interact other than the protagonist. Rainbow Dash as a street jumper; original and fascinating. Out of the series so far, I would say this this one is my favorite. So far. I got a feeling you will top this one off. Oh, and with Applejack, I got a feeling that the Flim Flam brothers are the reason for her cynicism.

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mauroz In reply to Hugo-Seven [2013-06-17 02:50:00 +0000 UTC]

^^ thanks

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LupineGamer In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:34:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh the Foreshadowing is killing me!!!!! mooooooooaaaaarrrrr!!!!

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mauroz In reply to LupineGamer [2013-06-17 02:49:21 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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zWolffangz In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:34:39 +0000 UTC]

YEAH!!! RAINBOW DASH HARDCORE PARKOUR!!!!

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mauroz In reply to zWolffangz [2013-06-17 02:49:07 +0000 UTC]

XD yeah

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LordVurtax In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:34:39 +0000 UTC]

Rainbow Dash, ISN'T a LESBIAN!!!!!!!

10/10, glad to see a comic as great as this keep to the far more realistic perspective as given to us by stuff we've seen from the show itself in terms of Dash's sexuality, rather than the mass assumptions made by the community. I feel it makes for a much stronger story and a far more compelling Dash than if she was otherwise.

Well done on the art once again, the sheer dedication on your end always astounds me (even if i saw the same art of AJ used three times in 3 panels, I'm not complaining) and I'm really enjoying Fluts's expressiveness. It's charming.

I'm also loving the idea of the Wonderbolts being a team of elite Free-Runners rather than going down the avenue of pilots or some other cheap avenue like that.

Anyway, loving the passion you put into this, by all means, continue.

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mauroz In reply to LordVurtax [2013-06-17 02:48:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks XD do not understand why they do that to dash u.u

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KatanaKaze In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:30:18 +0000 UTC]

What's a 'parkour?'

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mauroz In reply to KatanaKaze [2013-06-17 02:47:52 +0000 UTC]

XD yeah

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Count-Author In reply to KatanaKaze [2013-06-16 02:52:53 +0000 UTC]

It's REALLY HARD! And painful to fail at.

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Riku-of-Darkness In reply to KatanaKaze [2013-06-16 02:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Parkour is a style of running where you go over any obstacles in your path, like attempting to climb up walls. ^_^

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zWolffangz In reply to KatanaKaze [2013-06-16 02:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Parkour is basically doing things like jumping roof to roof, vaulting over fences, back flips and other stuff to get around obstacles quickly. (and epicly)

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seba2298 In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Muy bueno, yo ya le di fav a la version en español, pero queria avisarte que hay pequeños errores ortograficos en la traduccion como "Admin" (administrador) en ves de "admit" (admitir) y cuando Spike dice "Holds a spirit of harmony" deberia (bueno, no deberia, pero suena mejor) decir "like my sister" en lugar de "as my sister", fuera de eso la traduccion es perfecta, y no creo que haya duda en cuanto a los dibujos asi que, bueno, eso. xD

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TrueMadayar In reply to seba2298 [2013-06-17 13:48:39 +0000 UTC]

Your "perfecta" makes my day...I'll try hard to get those small typos out, missing a "d" or a "u" occassionally is so embarassing...but I always try to translate fast so the comic gets online for all the english speaking folks. Tried really hard to give AJ southern US style quotes, too.

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seba2298 In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-06-17 17:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, you did a realy good job giving AJ a southern feeling, and the overall translation's ok.

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TrueMadayar In reply to seba2298 [2013-06-17 20:56:56 +0000 UTC]

Trying to preserve as much of his original ideas as possible is hard at times, as in the beginning of this strip (where I also made the most typos - too much correcting my sentences back and forth). But it's his comic, I want to preserve as much as possible, his ideas.

Once I was able (and dared) to stray from the original, especially with AJ, it became more fluent and the errors basically disappeared. And I subscribed to a southern sayings tumblr just because I needed AJ style. ^_^

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seba2298 In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-06-17 22:08:06 +0000 UTC]

Could you link that Tumblr? sounds interesting.

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TrueMadayar In reply to seba2298 [2013-06-17 22:15:26 +0000 UTC]

Sure: [link]

They've been inactive for months, but over 200 proverbs means lots of AJ material for now.

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mauroz In reply to seba2298 [2013-06-17 02:47:45 +0000 UTC]

muchas gracias por tu ayuda ..creo que ya corregi los errores mas persectibles

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STITCH62633 In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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mauroz In reply to STITCH62633 [2013-06-16 02:29:32 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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STITCH62633 In reply to mauroz [2013-06-16 03:00:50 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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AJInu-Okami In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:23:32 +0000 UTC]

Best MLP comic on DA! In the 7th panel, shouldn't RD say the second speech bubble and not FS again?

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mauroz In reply to AJInu-Okami [2013-06-16 02:29:12 +0000 UTC]

thanks... I did not understand XD

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Hikari-no-kaze In reply to mauroz [2013-06-16 03:38:02 +0000 UTC]

Lo que quiere decir es que en el séptimo panel la segunda burbuja de diálogo es de rainbow dash, no de fluttershy

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mauroz In reply to Hikari-no-kaze [2013-06-17 06:24:53 +0000 UTC]

gracias por la explicacion ^^

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Hikari-no-kaze In reply to mauroz [2013-06-21 05:38:30 +0000 UTC]

no hay problema n.n

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AJInu-Okami In reply to mauroz [2013-06-16 02:34:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome
What? It's like when FS said something about "Doing it for (insert Wonderbolt folks)" the next speech bubble should've been for RD if she is going against what FS said. Instead, her mouth is just open.

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mauroz In reply to AJInu-Okami [2013-06-17 06:24:27 +0000 UTC]

oh ok already corrected thanks ^^

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AJInu-Okami In reply to mauroz [2013-06-17 06:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Ok thanks

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yaluckyboy09 In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:22:11 +0000 UTC]

Applejack reminds me of those old Western movies where the dark, mysterious stranger arrives and saves the people before disappearing and refuses to form bonds or relationships

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mauroz In reply to yaluckyboy09 [2013-06-16 02:27:40 +0000 UTC]

XD yeah... is a tribute

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yaluckyboy09 In reply to mauroz [2013-06-16 03:42:31 +0000 UTC]

good job

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MVerseDFender In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...three for one special? I like. Would like to see the characters in their alternate outfits in standalone pics if you don't mind. Rainbow's training gear is pretty cool.

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mauroz In reply to MVerseDFender [2013-06-16 02:26:44 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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MVerseDFender In reply to mauroz [2013-06-16 02:30:27 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Can't wait for the final three elements to be active.

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Sol1dF3rr3t In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh yeah.

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mauroz In reply to Sol1dF3rr3t [2013-06-16 02:25:53 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Sol1dF3rr3t In reply to mauroz [2013-06-16 03:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Man, best comics ever. You have a talent.

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Songbreeze741 In reply to ??? [2013-06-16 02:20:49 +0000 UTC]

"Four day have passed..."

shouldn't it be "days"?

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mauroz In reply to Songbreeze741 [2013-06-16 02:25:49 +0000 UTC]

XDD yes

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Songbreeze741 In reply to mauroz [2013-06-16 02:30:50 +0000 UTC]

gotta read it over carefully

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TrueMadayar In reply to Songbreeze741 [2013-06-17 13:50:40 +0000 UTC]

*hangs head in shame* The fourth typo in this one...sorry.

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Qydra In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-07-25 02:52:48 +0000 UTC]

I'll skim the pages and give you the rundown on all the rest of the errors, if you want.  I've noticed several over the past few pages.

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TrueMadayar In reply to Qydra [2013-07-25 05:17:57 +0000 UTC]

You can send any corrections to Mauroz at any time, I'm sure he'd appreciate it.

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Songbreeze741 In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-06-17 17:36:42 +0000 UTC]

I've read the others, and there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes through out them

I don't remember where though

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TrueMadayar In reply to Songbreeze741 [2013-06-17 20:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Yah, I started correcting the third to last strip, then translated the second to last from scratch. I always haste too much, so I can get it online quickly, and when I try to preserve as much of his original text as possible, I overcorrect my sentences - as in the beginning of this one, where I made all typos (four in total - so far) in just 12 panels... *headdesk*

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