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Thanks!! (the translation into English) ^^
here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1
MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7
MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
second part of the fourth chapter hope you like it
merry christmas!!
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Comments: 736
TeamInTheDarkness In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 05:41:57 +0000 UTC]
Plot twist Again!!!, come on AJ don´t be so stubborn.... but we are talking about AJ here... Even the Stormy from my stories is stubborn but not this much ewe, Excelent comic mauroz XDDD
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TeamInTheDarkness In reply to mauroz [2013-12-25 01:39:24 +0000 UTC]
No problem buddy, ^^ , i like this series so much, if you ever need help with a dialoge or something, let me know ^^
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PsycoJosho In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 05:25:07 +0000 UTC]
THE PLOT THICKENS!!! Again.
I usually notice a bunch of odd things that I figure are from translations, but I can't seem to see anything this time. Nice work!
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kacript In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 05:01:00 +0000 UTC]
There is one question I gotta ask, why didn't Twilight just make a grab for the amulet right from the start. I don't think its possible to dodge telekinesis.
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mauroz In reply to kacript [2013-12-24 05:26:04 +0000 UTC]
twilight at the moment is very inexperienced in the use of magic
requires a lot of concentration in some spells
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123lionclan In reply to kacript [2013-12-24 05:25:08 +0000 UTC]
Maybe her powers aren't strong enough to use them instantly, as it looks like she needs a bit of time first, time that Rainbow could have used to attack.
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Frostbite900 In reply to kacript [2013-12-24 05:24:47 +0000 UTC]
More than likely she couldn't focus on a fast moving object. Twilight had to wait for Rainbow to stay put long enough to use telekinesis.
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Hugo-Seven In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 05:00:49 +0000 UTC]
Whoa! Finally got some action in this series.
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kacript In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 04:57:21 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, what's Applejack's problem, saves Twilight then comes up and says she doesn't want anything to do with her.
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kacript In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 08:40:09 +0000 UTC]
Well while they are still characters from the show its actually pretty interesting to see that there are also some differences from their pony persona's as well.
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devilassistant In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 04:57:09 +0000 UTC]
Very good part as usual. There being some grammar mistakes here and there but they can be over looked any way the fight was well pasted and good. Though I hope Soarin is the one who helps Rainbow dash and not Twilight.
The one complant I have with the part is that since this is the first time we have seen Applejack actually fight against a tough opponent it seems very unlikely that she planned everything out but this of course might me just nit picking a bit.
Still an awesome comic though.
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mauroz In reply to devilassistant [2013-12-24 05:22:06 +0000 UTC]
AJ in this story is the strategist of the group
thanks ^^
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devilassistant In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 13:01:47 +0000 UTC]
It's probably just because we only have seen her fight once and the fight kind of looked like she did nothing but attack.
Also as a suggestion I know this is probably stupid because your the creator so whatever you say goes but don't let Twilight and friends find Luna's lair by following the shadow bolts since it looks like the shadow bolts are smart enough to not let them be followed by them. If they were to be followed let the one not carrying Rainbow fight so we can see how they fight and what they can do in battle and let his partner get Rainbow to Luna
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tehferg In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 04:55:57 +0000 UTC]
Once again, well done, Can't wait to see the next one. Although I'm not a fan of pankira and the such, it made sense in the way that it was shone in this comic though, because of the of the length of her skirt, which would be easier to fight in than a longer skirt, and even many pairs of pants are harder to fight in than a skirt. the range of motion is easier.
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mauroz In reply to tehferg [2013-12-24 05:20:06 +0000 UTC]
I do not like to use this resource, but sometimes it is unavoidable
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tehferg In reply to mauroz [2013-12-25 03:24:41 +0000 UTC]
like I said, it was natural, and not a, "come read my comic cause you can see AJ's Panties!" In the way it was presented it reminded me of a book I read, the dragonlance series. In it, one of the party members that is picked up along the way cut her skirt length in half so that she can move easier in battles. It fits well with the story, so don't worry about it harming my opinion or any such, if you were at all.
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sailor8484 In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 04:36:40 +0000 UTC]
This story just keeps getting better and better. This is how a true "Equestria Girls" series should be done(it should be on TV or at least on DVD). Thank you for doing this and keep it up! I can't wait to see how all this goes.
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eric-emanwu In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 04:30:12 +0000 UTC]
Whoa! Element brawl. I guess AJ and Rainbow will always be testing each other. Now, if only AJ was honest enough to let someone in.
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midnightterror1 In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 04:22:08 +0000 UTC]
omg that fight was amazing!! lol i mean as a boy id love to see two babes fighting it out on the streets pulling on each others clothes XD (getting off track) but im glad to see some of the shadow bolts ability's!! and with pure strength AJ can crush a rock woah O.O and im starting to get a good idea who eclipse might be keep up the good work man
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midnightterror1 In reply to midnightterror1 [2013-12-24 04:26:22 +0000 UTC]
and maybe hazes to
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vindurza In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 04:20:13 +0000 UTC]
and the start of rainbow and a.j's great rivalry begins as the great stories plot grows thicker and thicker, also loving the angel of doom vibe the shadowbolts have with their wings out
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GreatnPowerfulBNKing In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 04:12:50 +0000 UTC]
Very Awesome as always!~ Good work mauroz and feliz navidad Y Año Nuevo ^^
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mauroz In reply to GreatnPowerfulBNKing [2013-12-24 05:11:03 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much ^^
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GreatnPowerfulBNKing In reply to GreatnPowerfulBNKing [2013-12-24 04:14:10 +0000 UTC]
Disregard the link, Link Failed XD
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KeroberosCelestia In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 04:05:00 +0000 UTC]
GAH!!! I wish I had a TARDIS so that I could go to the future and read this without the wait!
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KeroberosCelestia In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 05:37:47 +0000 UTC]
It is okay. Actually, that comment is one of the highest compliments from me ^-^.
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WickedSilly In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 03:50:36 +0000 UTC]
You're so cool!
Lovely comic! Brilliant as always
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Necromagenvion In reply to ??? [2013-12-24 03:44:30 +0000 UTC]
Maaaaurooooz!! Why you do this to me? It's like waiting with anxiety for the finale of a series that gets intense every single time (like Breaking Bad).
Don't leave me hanging sir, I'd like to see how this ends, but no, I think it won't end, it will go on.
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mauroz In reply to Necromagenvion [2013-12-24 05:08:15 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry, but I have little free time to do the comics. why it took me every month >.👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Necromagenvion In reply to mauroz [2013-12-24 05:28:19 +0000 UTC]
No worries dear gentleman, the story is certainly reaching supreme levels, I'm simply adding a bit of radical suspense from time to time to the cliffhangers, just like the natural reaction that any fangirl would do, lol.
Don't pressure yourself, keep it on your timeframe and remember, your work is and will be awesome.
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