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Thanks!! (the translation into English) ^^


here special halloween: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…

here the introduction: fav.me/d5gq1b1

MLP1 part 1 here: fav.me/d5m5n26
MLP1 part 2 here: fav.me/d5onjh7

MLP2 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP2 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP3 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP3 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP3 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…


MLP4 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP4 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP4 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP4 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP4 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP5 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP5 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…   
MLP5 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP6 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP6 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP7 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP7 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP8 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 3 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 4 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 5 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 6 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP8 part 7 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…

MLP9 part 1 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 2 here: mauroz.deviantart.com/art/Frie…
MLP9 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP9 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…

MLP10 part 1 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 2 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 3 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 4 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 5 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 6 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…
MLP10 part 7 here: www.deviantart.com/mauroz/art/…



second part of the fourth chapter  hope you like it 


merry christmas!!

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Comments: 736

Path0of0cloud [2013-12-27 01:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Damn, attacking the joints and muscles to temporarily paralyze her legs was a well thought out strategy. Fantastic movements and fairly realistic fighting, excellent chapter. Can't wait, but I will, then I'll have to wait for an English transition -_- CRUEL WORLD!

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mauroz In reply to Path0of0cloud [2013-12-28 03:14:38 +0000 UTC]

XD sorry and thanks ^^

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hs11-art In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 22:54:40 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, the story is getting more complex. I can't wait to see what's AJ's backstory. Great work.

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mauroz In reply to hs11-art [2013-12-28 03:11:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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hs11-art In reply to mauroz [2013-12-29 00:05:12 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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Dulcesdecolores8 In reply to hs11-art [2013-12-27 00:55:13 +0000 UTC]

ah am waiting for AJ's backstory too

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SciFiPonyGirl In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 21:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Quick question: why do all the girls have extremely short skirts? Is it an anime trope?

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mauroz In reply to SciFiPonyGirl [2013-12-26 22:16:45 +0000 UTC]

fluttershy is wearing pants, RD also o.O


well right now (in the story) is summer

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badbloodkiller In reply to SciFiPonyGirl [2013-12-26 22:03:30 +0000 UTC]

You couldn't tell by the style? It is anime-like.

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TrueMadayar In reply to SciFiPonyGirl [2013-12-26 21:55:30 +0000 UTC]

I see this as a request to lengthen the skirts, maybe make them pants, too.

It seems to be part of the Magical Girl Manga genre, true. Also, it's way easier to kick people like that.

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AMBADI In reply to TrueMadayar [2013-12-26 23:32:53 +0000 UTC]

Extremely short skirts can be okay, but make them follow laws of physics please. Also some variety in skirt length is also appreciated.


I'm not a girl so I don't know for sure, but people can fight in long skirts, an example is in Attack on Titan.


Though honestly, I like clothing in comics the best when it follows real-life standards. No school in the real world allows skirts that short to be worn, unless the administrators are total pervs...  

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TrueMadayar In reply to AMBADI [2013-12-27 14:40:08 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, but it's *mauroz 's time to hold the orb of "physics? what physics?" right now. Especially when he wants to get a comic done before christmas.

I'm sure he's gonna give it back to Pinkie Pie next year sometime. Unless time is scarce and people want new comics.

Attack on Titan is also not real. And skirts are rather shitty to fight in if they're too long, and your technique includes kicks. Pants FTW, which are what Flutters and RD wear, too.

And as we all know, administrators in manga series tend to be exactly that.

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TheWarriorpony In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 19:42:43 +0000 UTC]

This was really great!! Those were some seriously good fighting scenes but damn that was quite a bit of fan service wasn´t it? And when AJ was calling RD small all the time it really reminded me of Ed from Fullmetal Alchemist XD

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mauroz In reply to TheWarriorpony [2013-12-26 22:14:40 +0000 UTC]

I do not like to use this resource but sometimes it is unavoidable


and thanks ^^

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TheTimeTraveler In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 18:41:07 +0000 UTC]

This is great! Nice job!

Merry belated- Christmas!

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mauroz In reply to TheTimeTraveler [2013-12-26 22:12:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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TheTimeTraveler In reply to mauroz [2014-01-20 21:21:31 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Mincho94 [2013-12-26 17:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, upsk- *slap*
No, no don't think that way.

...


....

dat upskirt tho DAMNIT.

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mauroz In reply to Mincho94 [2013-12-26 22:12:46 +0000 UTC]

XDD thanks

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Mincho94 In reply to mauroz [2013-12-26 22:47:38 +0000 UTC]

Wondering... do you have any... saucy/NSFW images because your style would be nothing less that perfect for that kind of thing. Then again you probably don't want to. Just wondering.

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ApprovingAbnormality In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 17:08:20 +0000 UTC]

Very nice! I love the storyline, although I'm looking forward to some Fluttershy-story c:


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mauroz In reply to ApprovingAbnormality [2013-12-26 22:11:55 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks ^^

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ApprovingAbnormality In reply to mauroz [2013-12-27 16:06:33 +0000 UTC]

No complaint though, it's just that she used to be my favourite character for a long time. Keep on the good work!

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LalaMcfashion In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 08:47:36 +0000 UTC]

MUST GET NEXT PART BEFORE 2014

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mauroz In reply to LalaMcfashion [2013-12-26 22:11:20 +0000 UTC]

yeah XD

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EpicMusicSoul In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 06:05:51 +0000 UTC]

I loved it! Can't you make the blondie be grabbed by the front of her shirt as well?

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mauroz In reply to EpicMusicSoul [2013-12-26 22:10:58 +0000 UTC]

XD thanks

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spogo In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 04:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Moar?

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mauroz In reply to spogo [2013-12-26 22:10:18 +0000 UTC]

soon >.<

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djthomp In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 04:17:38 +0000 UTC]

Ooooo, go AJ! So glad to see that trinket ripped off of Dash.

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mauroz In reply to djthomp [2013-12-26 22:09:48 +0000 UTC]

XD yeah

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Alancar2 In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 03:01:42 +0000 UTC]

Very nice fighting scene. I kinda figured AJ was taking hits on purpose, otherwise RD would have been way to strong.

I didn't like the dialogue from that hooded guy from the Shadowbolts. I thought it was unnecessary. You don't need to spoon feed your readers everything. For example: The scene where he blocks Twilight's magic. Imagine that scene, except he had no dialogue.

It still totally gets the point across, but he would seem a lot cooler and mysterious.

And the second scene where he kinda goes on about how strong RD is and that is why Luna wants her and on how AJ has dominated the start from the get go...do we really need to hear that? Wouldn't it be much cooler if he just stood there? And the only lines of dialogue we get from him in the entire strip would be the final ones he says to AJ?

I dunno. A little criticism, take it for what it is. On a side note, the concept that the hooded guy would have his own agenda separate from the other two was a very pleasant (and unexpected) surprise. I shall be looking forward to see where that goes.

Other than that minor complaint, loved it, like always. And nice (I assume) One Piece reference.

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mauroz In reply to Alancar2 [2013-12-26 22:09:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much and especially constructive criticism you really take into account ^^

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MidnightWave In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 02:55:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow, just in time for Christmas. I agree with Nilac, best Christmas present ever. Mauroz, you're the best.

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mauroz In reply to MidnightWave [2013-12-26 22:06:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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MidnightWave In reply to mauroz [2013-12-31 01:51:17 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome. ^^

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Nilac6 In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 02:12:50 +0000 UTC]

Best. Christmas Gift. EVER!!!!!
Applejack is SO AWESOME!!! A REAL badass! I cannot WAIT for the next one! I love this SO much! GAAAAAAAHHHHHH (Fanboy strokeout)

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mauroz In reply to Nilac6 [2013-12-26 02:37:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much for watching ^^

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bruiser128 In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 01:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Is the undressing habit based of off Gray Fullbusters from Fairy Tail?

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NellzDaBlackKing In reply to bruiser128 [2013-12-26 03:16:38 +0000 UTC]

Lol no silly it's Dragonball Z logic. The more clothes you take off or that is torn, the more powerful you are XD

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spogo In reply to NellzDaBlackKing [2013-12-26 04:35:10 +0000 UTC]

REALLY??????

(starts running around naked) I AM THE KING OF THE WORLD!!!!

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bruiser128 In reply to NellzDaBlackKing [2013-12-26 03:22:34 +0000 UTC]

REALLY!?

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NellzDaBlackKing In reply to bruiser128 [2013-12-26 03:33:07 +0000 UTC]

Wait was that sarcasm or you're being serious?

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bruiser128 In reply to NellzDaBlackKing [2013-12-26 03:38:48 +0000 UTC]

Hmhmhm both

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mauroz In reply to bruiser128 [2013-12-26 02:36:32 +0000 UTC]

XD noo

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bruiser128 In reply to mauroz [2013-12-26 03:17:04 +0000 UTC]

Okay okay I didn't mean for you to take it personally.


Also like the manga series fellow brony.

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SniperTeam4 In reply to ??? [2013-12-26 00:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, this is basically what I gathered from the Spanish version. Really looking forward to seeing what you're doing with this third Shadow Bolt. Double Agent? Backstabber? Planning to overthrow Luna himself, and therefore is trying to track down the 'strongest' Bearer?

A good read as always.

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mauroz In reply to SniperTeam4 [2013-12-26 02:35:59 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^


everything will be known in due time XD

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DangerCloseArt [2013-12-26 00:07:31 +0000 UTC]

I love how you give the characters a different outfit every "day" in the context of the story.  And what the hay is this other dude up to???? I sense a double agent...


Merry Christmas btw!!! ^_^

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mauroz In reply to DangerCloseArt [2013-12-26 02:34:39 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much ^^

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