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the blue in the background is overwhelming the picture. it has to be a bit darker. you might puzzle a little bit with the composition between the clown and the masked man.
I think that will improve it, but I already like it I must say
But there is just one 'click' missing, I hope my critique will help with that. Thanks and go gon please 
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Darkened the sky. Isn't it too dark?
Moved the clown, but he still looks like he has no idea why he's there.. I dunno what to do. Maybe I should make him even smaller? But I don't think it would look good then.
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Ok, wait, I think I now something:
Play with the background. If you look at Untitled I:
The woman is more in the background, because she's standing in the black place of the backgroudn. The clown has to be less in the attention. You might mix some other backgrounds with others, especially for the blue place. Want to see new result soon!
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He's darker, blended and desaturated a bit.
I think I should start again. This looks bad anyway.
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mmm yeah I think the clown doesn't fit. pity, because he has got something. but you indeed player very well with the background, but still it needs a little editing, something to 'break' the composition, the rythm, see your untitled I. it has a mix of dark black and dark red of the stones.
and it doesn't look bad, it's a good start
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I've found another background. Maybe it will fit better and include clown
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I know there's no clown yet, but I think it's prettier.
I'll make it more sketchy when I get the clown inside.
What do you think?
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My mouth just fell open
It's stunning, really great keep ghostmaskman and the perfect background. No tips now for you.
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I'm soo freakin' happy you like it
I have the 'clowned' sketchy version, wanna see it?
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It's a bit weird and the clown still doesn't fit, but.. it's much better.
Isn't he too low?
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yes, he is somewhat to low. you might let some bodyparts of the clown disappear, maybe it will make him look better in the picture?
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his whole head, so only the clothes and the hair. could you give it a try?
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Head disappear, hair and clothes stay, right? No prob.
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ok that will look good I hope
sadly enough my parents want me to go to sleep
so I have not much time left I hope I will see it today
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I might get anohter 5-10 min no more, my parents aren't very kind. How's it going with the clown?
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Pretty well. But I won't have final version today. The very close one should be in less than 10 minutes
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Ok, that's nice, can't wait to see the close-to-final and final pic tomorrow
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How about this version? I'll add this part of the clothes that was behind his head, but I dunno how much time will it take.
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looks better! You might let the clown do something with the chair. But as I already said I must go speak you tomorrow and see the final version!
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Here's the at-last-almost-final-version
I aso have the same, but with the sugar cane leaning on the chair. It's like the clown is already there and the maskman invites you to come too. The chair is for the viewer. What do you think?
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I think it's awesome
The clown finally fits the pic completely, great work!
This is a good compostion, the depths and lengths are very well chosen
Like the idea that the chair is for the viewer.
So I already like this version very, very much, but can I see the version with the sugar cane too?
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Sorry, deleted it 30 minutes ago x/ I was trying to improve it and got a bit frustrated
Think it's ready?
And thanks for all these compliments ^^
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Yeah, I think it's ready
I'm going to fave it for sure!
It is the same art as Untitled I, if you like to make this kind of art I will encourage you to make this you style.
Thank you very much for making this, I'm in love with this mysterious, dark style!
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That's great 
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Yeah I really do
When you put it in your gallery I can fave it
By the way, I want to do something back for you, because you make me very happy with this art
So, what do you suggest?
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Posted!
Something back? You may find out if it has to be corn starch for fake blood, or it will work with potatoe starch as well xP
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Corn and potatoes are both starch holding binders, so I know almost sure potatoe starch will do too
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Have you already got an idea for the animation?
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*runs away*
Only one and it's mature content for sure, so I'll try to find a better one
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That sounds very dirty
Ok when you have a better one I can learn you how to animate with GIMP.
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Well, the idea was worse than it sounded, believe me
Thanks ^^
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You are making me curious now ^^
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Haha
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Haha, that's ok.
But you can tell me if you want to
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Have you ever watched House M.D.?
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The hospital serie which you skipped yesterday?
I've heard about it and maybe I saw a small part of an episode, but I don't really watch it.
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And today in the morning
Well, then I don't think you would get the joke really.
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Ok
You already have an idea for the animation?
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No, I'm makin' anti-twilight icons to get my mind relax a bit
Maybe tomorrow?
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Haha you made me laughing at loud!
Anti-twilight icons will surely rock!
Of course it can tomorrow, or about 3 days, a week, that's up to you
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My pleasure
Do I see a fellow spirit? Say no to sparkling vampires!
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'Do I see a fellow spirit? Say no to sparkling vampires!' XD
There is to much fan art of that much-to-american-movie, and I already hated the movie when they published their cast:
Kristen Stewart for Emily Browning! (That's like between McDonalds and a French dinner by candlelight, between Paris Hilton and Mona Lisa, the brainless and the stunning philosopher)
I hope your anti-twilight icons will take over the world as fast the twilight movie did
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Posted the icon-set. You're really right and I share your hope
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I screwed him again.
I think I'll fix it when I'm back. In about 30 minutes. I haven't done the washing up and my mom's freakin' out a bit
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