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The Story of the Tortoise and the HareBased on the fable by Aesop
Drawing and Writing by MCsaurus
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Timmy the young and nice Tortoise likes to eat apple and make new animal friends at school. All except Hank the faster Hare who always bully at school all day. If Hank wants to race, Tim challenges him for races.
Do you think Tim can beat Hank for races?
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Once about a young and nice Tortoise, named Timmy, who pack his lunch and stuff in his bag for first day at school. Tim walks the round to school and saw all animals in there, too. When animals see Timmy have arrived, they want to say hi.
“So, you’re new kid in school, huh?” said a female deer named Daisy.
“Yeah, this is my first day at school.” Tim said. “And nice to meet you.”
“Whoa, you are a Tortoise with green skin and brown shell,” said a little mouse named Dixie. “And you’re big, too. Really cool.”
“Well, thanks. But I’ll be big as my parents when I’ll grow up something.” Tim said.
“Say, will you play soccer with us?” said a black cat named Sylvester.
“Okay, it sounds great.” Timmy happy said.
Timmy was glad because all animals like him at school. But just one problem...
“Ow!” Timmy shouted. “Who throw a ball on me like this?”
“Uh-oh.” Said a frog named Froggy when someone shows up at school. “It’s Hank the Hare.”
Animals know about Hank the Hare is a bully all days. He just makes fun on all animals at school, especially Timmy the Tortoise.
“Well, well, well… a chubby Tortoise has first day at school, eh?” Hank mean said. “And look at yourself. You’re slow and fat when you eat too much food, huh?”
Hank start laughs at Timmy, but animals don’t like it when Hank hurt Timmy’s feel.
“You’re slow creature I’ve ever see, because I’m best faster Hare than all animals in the school.” Hank said.
Timmy was sad then upset when Hank says that. But he know what to do to Hank one for all.
So you’re faster than us like that, then I challenge you for a race.” Timmy said. “If I win, you have to stop bully on us at school.”
“A race, eh?” Hank said. “Alright then, but where we start for race?”
Timmy and Hank think where for race, but their teacher Mr. McFox show up and hear about they want to race, and he got idea.
“I want you two in my classroom for think about a race.” Mr. McFox said. “And then you two start a race after lunch.”
So all animals get in the school.
In Mr. McFox’s classroom, animals start to math. Timmy likes to do math because he’s really smart. But Hank really don’t like math, he think it really hard. After math is final, Mr. McFox shows Timmy and Hank and look at map for race before starter.
“You two start on route to finish at school.” Mr. McFox said. “I’ll see you on race after lunch. But remember: no cheater.”
At last, after lunch arrived. All animals came to watch Timmy and Hank race. Timmy’s new friends say good luck for him.
“Be carefully, Timmy.” Daisy said and Timmy asks why.
“Hank always trick on us.” Sylvester said. “And he’s always love to faster, too much.”
Timmy understands like his friends says and be okay for race.
Soon it was time for the race to begin, Timmy and Hank at the starting line.
“You’re going down, chubby shell.” Hank teases said.
“We’ll see about that.” Timmy bravest said. “And don’t call me that.”
Mr. McFox says they’re ready to the race.
“On your marks, get set, GO!” shouted Mr. McFox.
Hank raced off and fast when Timmy was shocked then saw him.
“Whoa! Sylvester was right.” Timmy said. “Hank is really fast.”
And now, Timmy start runner to catch Hank, but he’s too slow.
Timmy runs to catch Hank, but he need rest and hide the tree and wait to see Timmy is coming. Hank is up to something.
“I use a banana to eat,” Hank said and eat banana. “And then pull a peel on the route. I can’t for have a fun on the chubby tortoise fall down.”
So Hank continued run to race before Timmy catch up. Timmy still runner until he saw something.
“A banana peels on the route? But how...” Timmy said with thinking. “Of cause, Hank prank on me just like my friends was talking about it.”
So Timmy pull a peel to a trash can and then still run to race.
Hank still runs to fast to race, until he can stop on route.
“I... need to... catch my breath...” Hank tired said.
Hank was very tired and settled down on the tree and in the shade. He can’t wait for back to race before Timmy is coming.
“I’m not worry about the chubby tortoise.” Hank said. “He’s problem slow down on route when he fall down by a banana peel.”
Soon Hank was asleep.
Meanwhile, Timmy was still walk on the route.
“I wonder what is Hank’s up to.” Timmy said. “Maybe he got tired and need a rest.”
When Timmy is hungry little to need a snack and pick an apple on ground from the tree, he saw Hank on the tree.
“What I know? I was right, he was asleep.” Timmy said. “I’ll be quite to walker careful before he wakes up.”
So Timmy walks careful to eat an apple for the race to the school.
“At last, my friends wait for me at school.” Timmy said.
Timmy finally saw a finish line for winner.
Hours later, an apple falls down from the tree on Hank to wake up.
“Ow! That’s hurt.” Hank said and then believes his eyes saw Timmy. “That chubby Tortoise almost gets finish line?”
Hank said impossible how Timmy so fast.
Now Hank’s really mad and then race off very fast.
“No one, like chubby Tortoise, can faster than Hank the super speed Hare!” Hank shouted.
Timmy almost gets the finish line when Sylvester see whose coming.
“Uh-oh, its Hank the Hare and he’s really mad.” Sylvester said and cheer on Timmy. “Hurry, Timmy, you can do it!”
Timmy run faster to the line before Hank gets it. Mr. McFox sees it when they’re coming to the line.
“The winner is...”
“Timmy the Tortoise!” shouted Mr. McFox.
Hank runs too fast, but he’s very tired to fall down and can’t believe Timmy had won.
“Hurry for Timmy the Tortoise!” cheering all animals.
“Alright!” Dixie said. “Now, Hank will never bully on us again.”
“I knew it about you had won as faster Tortoise than slowly Hank.” Sylvester said.
Hank is really mad when Timmy’s win.
“I can’t believe how so fast you are?!” Hank angry said. “I through you am slowly creature in the race!”
Timmy stands up and said. “So you’re the one who pull a banana pill on the ground make me fall down, and I bet you’re cheater.”
Now Hank is going punch Timmy on his face, but someone stop him and said not so fast. Hank is scared by he know who.
“P-P-Principal Grumbear the bear.” Hank scared said. “I-I-I can explained.”
“So you’re cheater at the race like a new kid said, eh?” Principal Grumbear said. “You’re going to the detention and I call your parents will hear about what you did.”
Hank is very scared and get in the detention.
So, Hank in the detention room and Principal Grumbear tell his parents about Hank did. On the playground, Timmy play soccer ball with his new friends.
“This is my first day of school is best, even.” Timmy said.
And so after school, Timmy headed back to his and tells his parents about its greatest day at school.
The End
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Story of the Tortoise and the Hare is my favorite storybook.
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Comments: 12
Ben10FanLoony [2018-04-19 03:06:57 +0000 UTC]
Hey bud what happened to my thing was it too inappropriate or something?
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Ben10FanLoony In reply to MCsaurus [2018-04-19 03:13:38 +0000 UTC]
Huh that’s odd then why can’t I undo it?
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coolboy2007 [2013-09-13 17:34:41 +0000 UTC]
Great Story & Like Lesson Said Slow & Steady Win The Race.
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coolboy2007 In reply to MCsaurus [2013-09-13 17:42:45 +0000 UTC]
Your Welcome & Keep Up Good Work.
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