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Published: 2011-12-01 02:03:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 17372; Favourites: 800; Downloads: 112
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Description
Old stuff...Somewhere between
the typical mirror
reflection
is little more than a disorganized mass
impossible to sustain soon
to disintegrate
its
death is a
long war. This Rivalry
of
faces and
echoes
is a pale reflection
of every phenomenal form
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Comments: 191
ShiverTheNamelessone In reply to MD-STAR [2023-12-07 15:07:57 +0000 UTC]
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TigerEgern [2023-12-04 10:08:02 +0000 UTC]
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MD-STAR In reply to TigerEgern [2023-12-04 11:22:49 +0000 UTC]
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TigerEgern In reply to MD-STAR [2023-12-04 11:41:56 +0000 UTC]
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ariya-sacca [2021-05-04 22:52:49 +0000 UTC]
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FridgePoetProject [2015-05-11 03:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Excellent! Β You excavated some fantastic stuff from this page of prose. Β I love "its death is a long war," in particular. Β Nice!Β
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Aryiatia [2012-05-06 08:36:39 +0000 UTC]
Very nice found poem I love the style you did to portray these powerful words - amazing work!!!
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sidetrack1 [2012-05-06 05:48:35 +0000 UTC]
Arrgg..I 4get from english class there's a name 4 this kind o'poetry.."found poetry" is it?
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Juror-of-Courage [2012-05-06 04:31:56 +0000 UTC]
This is quite a lovely poem, my friend. It looks like it took awhile to carve out from the page. But the results do seem like they where worth it.
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Yurinoki [2012-05-06 04:02:47 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful and creative of you! I wonder how you think of these!
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boink6662000 [2012-05-06 03:33:16 +0000 UTC]
At first I thought now that's some interesting poetry, then I read the whole paper. Now it has a WAY deeper meaning then simply circled words. Very good job and congratulations on the DD.
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boink6662000 In reply to MD-STAR [2012-05-07 01:58:00 +0000 UTC]
No problem you earned it.
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Inkweaver22 [2012-05-06 02:15:51 +0000 UTC]
Art with a deep meaning...I love your work.
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MissLunaRose [2012-05-06 01:40:36 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful.
Good luck with all your comments! I see you're keeping up with them... That's quite remarkable.
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MD-STAR In reply to MissLunaRose [2012-05-06 01:41:22 +0000 UTC]
lol, it has been a challenge. Thank you
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transparent-soul [2012-05-06 01:25:48 +0000 UTC]
I keep trying to decipher whether there is a certain shape/pattern to the circled words.
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MD-STAR In reply to transparent-soul [2012-05-06 01:35:45 +0000 UTC]
I didn't try to make a shape or pattern, just highlighting the words
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transparent-soul In reply to MD-STAR [2012-05-06 01:50:02 +0000 UTC]
Now you tell me. XD I saw a rather lamp-like alien with its arms held out and being blown in the wind.
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MD-STAR In reply to transparent-soul [2012-05-06 01:57:24 +0000 UTC]
lol and now you've told me that I see it to!
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