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One of the Poll Winners for Injustice RWBY: Elseworlds!Alternate RWBY Designs and faction choices by my art rival Korra Xiao Long as well as myself.
Ilia = Insurgency
Vader = N/A
More Injustice x RWBY VS Dialogues:
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avenger09 In reply to ??? [2020-03-25 19:41:49 +0000 UTC]
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Sun: (steps forward, Twirling his Gunchucks) Alrighty. We tried the path of the open palm. Now it's time for the closed fist.
!Fight!
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Illia: (steps forward her "freckle's" turning an agressive color) Typical Human.
Jango: There's nothing typical about me.
!Fight!
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Sun: By the way, your Helmet rocks. Just thought I'd say that.
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Illia: Ready to play nice?
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Jango: (on a knee breathing heavily) Alright. (gets up) You kids have spark I'll grant you... You could be useful, but only if you do as your told.
Sun: Sure. What was your friend taken for?
Illia: Our's where fighting the Regime before this mess started.
Jango: (pulls out a holo of Zam) Her name's Zam Wesell, at least that's what she calls herself. She's a changeling, can take on any humanoid shape.
She got smart and thought she'd try stealing some blueprints for some experimental Droids their developing here. Powered by some local commodity.
Illia: Dust?
Jango: That's the one. As you can it went swimmingly.
Sun: Well then, do you have a way in?
Jango: I'll make one.
(cut to a interior section of the precinct as one of the walls are sliced through and collapses inward, letting Jango and the Faunus through)
Sun: That was pretty- (touches part of the recently cut metal) Ow!
Jango: (shakes his head)
(the trio walk among the upper levels, stopping when they arrive at a balcony that circles around where all the paths join up. Where a hunched over cyborg a horned masked faunus and a helmeted bounty hunter are talking escorted by droids)
Illia: That must be Grievous. Urg. Who'd do that to themselves?
Jango: Someone who really wants an edge against the Jedi. Whose he talking to? Some kind of Zabrak subspecies?
Sun: Nah. That's Adam Taurus, leader of a nasty cell of White Fang. Not a nice person.
Illia: The worse... What about the other guy?
Jango: Not sure. Must be a Bounty Hunter they hired. Strange, there's something... familiar about em...
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Idea: When they free Zam, Nora and Ren. They also free another prisoner. An older uniformed man who speaks politley and graciously but with an undertone of menace in his words. Whose sharp features made Sun think "He looked like he used to hunt vampires for a living at some point."
The prisoner explains that his shuttle was caught in the time crash, and introduces himself.
Grand, Moff, Wilhuff, Tarkin.
Who of none of them know of, so they let him go.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-12-20 18:41:47 +0000 UTC]
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-12-20 20:14:46 +0000 UTC]
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-12-20 21:44:47 +0000 UTC]
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-12-20 22:29:06 +0000 UTC]
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-12-22 00:51:44 +0000 UTC]
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-12-22 01:04:52 +0000 UTC]
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-12-25 16:13:39 +0000 UTC]
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avenger09 In reply to ??? [2020-03-13 00:49:09 +0000 UTC]
Didn't know if my reply went through, so sent another with some added stuff... Now my first reply shows up)
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(Weiss lets loose a fire glyph at Rey who dodges it and counters with a force push, which Weiss slides away from. Rey gives chace, the two trading blows as Luke and Ruby approach each other)
Luke: I can tell your far too good natured for this work. Why put up with it?
Ruby: It may not be nice, but if I I'm not beside my friends and they get hurt without me to help... I've already lost too many.
Luke: I understand that feeling, but if you respect them or their choices you'll have to learn to let them be. Or risk your connection becomeing possession.
!Fight!
Luke: (bringing up and flexing his right hand) I prey you learn that lesson, less painfully then I did.
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(Luke jumps over Weiss, leading her away from Rey and Ruby)
Rey: Look, your very adorable-
Ruby: Oh thanks, so are you.
Rey: Yes, well. If you can just put down that... Gun-blade? I'll show you how my lightsaber works. Promise.
Ruby: That would be so cool, but I really have to bring you in. Sorry, I hope we can still be friends!
!Fight!
Rey: Me too little girl.
Weiss: Ruby!
(Weiss rushes over to the knocked down Ruby Rose, her opponent rejoining their fellow Jedi.)
Ruby: (spiral eyes) Did you se the laser swords, Weiss? There really pretty Weiss... (unconscious)
Luke: We are sorry for hurting your friend.
Rey: Trust me, we took no joy in it.
(Weiss stands up and angrily steps towards the Jedi. Coming to a stop and resuming her combat stance)
Weiss: I'd never admit this while she's conscious. But you don't mess with my Bff.
CHOOSE YOUR FIGHTER
Luke <--- LS ---> Rey
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(Luke simply steps back, while Rey gives a "why me" sigh as she volunteers to face the wrath of the bff.)
(Rey, bows out with a "Master Skywalker." Luke reluctantly igniting his green saber again.)
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-13 01:19:57 +0000 UTC]
I already replied. Maybe edit yours and I'll do the same with this one?
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-13 01:57:47 +0000 UTC]
No yours is better. I just tried adding a couple laughs, I'll work on a continuing it when I can.
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spider-man999 In reply to avenger09 [2024-02-18 08:31:37 +0000 UTC]
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-13 18:56:16 +0000 UTC]
Okay, sounds good. I figured after defeating Agent Marek, they encounter the darkness they sensed earlier as the final fight of their chapter: Kylo Ren. After Kylo loses and retreats, Luke and Rey find out Marek slipped away during the battle. Luminara and Aayla meet back up with them, having found a way out of the caves in the meantime. Ruby, moved by their rescue of Weiss, lets them go. The Jedi wish Ruby and Weiss well and leave, emerging from the caves and being picked up by the Hawk soon thereafter.
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-13 19:43:07 +0000 UTC]
Sorry, was busy writing my thing and didn't see this. Hope you like it though.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-13 20:05:16 +0000 UTC]
No, that's actually a much better alternative! Great work! It's refreshing to do something like this with another Star Wars fan. I'll work on my follow-up soon.
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-13 20:56:02 +0000 UTC]
Same here. Its been a blast.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-14 18:00:39 +0000 UTC]
BTW, while we have this separate thread here, I was thinking about arcade endings, you know, where the character narrates over their circumstances after beating the final boss in the arcade mode -- in this case, I imagine Salem. Like this, methinks:
(Salem is knocked back after being defeated, stumbling as she catches her breath, looking up at her opponent)
Salem: (Huff...huff) You...pathetic fool. Did you forget?! (Her eyes glow a brighter shade of red) I CANNOT DIE!!! (Charges in a rage, only for the player character to, in their own unique way, swat her away. Salem flies back and into whatever MacGuffin that has allowed time to break as it has, like the hourglass in MK11. It glows as she comes in contact with it, forcefully holding her against it) W-What?! WHAT IS THIS?! (It shines brightly as her body begins to crack, releasing rays of light from the breaks) WHAT'S HAPPENING?! WHAT DID YOU DO?! (The cracks reach her head as her eyes stare ahead, open wide with panic, before they too begin to glow as the Dark Queen lets out one last scream) NOOOOOO!!!!!!!
(The time merging artifact erupts into a blinding light, prompting the player character to cover their eyes as the light overtakes the screen, leading into the player character's ending cutscene)
For example, with Anakin:
Anakin: (As he stares out at the artifact in front of him, with Salem on her hands and knees next to him) Salem broke apart my galaxy's timeline, merged it with Force knows how many others, and threw Remnant to chaos, all so she could finish us off after we were all done fighting each other. But her big mistake was not accounting for my power overcoming hers. She and her monsters are beaten...but...what do I do now? (Cut to Anakin staring holding out his hand at the artifact, with it reminding him of his future as Darth Vader) The easy thing to do would be to just restore the timelines to their original course. But what then? I'll still turn to the dark side. I'll still become Vader. I'll still exterminate the Jedi, kill Padmé, Obi-Wan, and countless innocents. But above all that...I'll hurt my children. Luke and Leia. (His contemplative expression turns into one of determination as he grabs the artifact) They deserve better. (Cut to a scene with him on Naboo, a light stubble on his face, as he sits smiling with a boy Luke on his lap as he holds Leia on his shoulder. Padmé stands next to them, beaming with joy. An older Obi-Wan, Ahsoka, and Rex watch from nearby, all smiling at the scene) It took me a few tries, sure. I didn't get it right the first time, the second, or even the third. But I did eventually. And it's perfect. Darth Vader will never exist. The Jedi will never be destroyed. The Republic will never become the Empire. And I'll live the rest of my years on Naboo with Padmé and our children, raising them to become every bit the Jedi their father is. I'm not sure how the future will play out after I'm gone, or what Luke and Leia's fates will be. But I'm not worried. After all, we're Skywalkers. Changing destiny runs in the family.
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I imagine Salem uses an artifact from the days of her and Ozma's kingdom to split apart time, bringing forth the Star Wars characters knowing it would incite chaos and disunity. While all the factions exhausted themselves fighting each other, she would strengthen her Grimm armies. Then, she attacks while they're at their weakest. At that point, the only salvation lies in unity. Cue epic final battle between Remnant and the Star Wars galaxy against Salem's Grimm.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-18 18:06:28 +0000 UTC]
Also, been thinking about match intro dialogues between characters before they fight. Here are a few ideas if you're interested.
Boba Fett: (Flies down to the ground and lands before adjusting the settings on one of his gauntlets)
Leia Organa: (Steps forward with an unloaded E-11) Look what the sarlacc spat back up.
Boba Fett: (Cocks and readies his EE-3) You could say it found me somewhat indigestible, princess.
Leia Organa: (Loads a power pack into the E-11) Not surprised even it couldn't stand you.
Leia Organa: (Two Rebel soldiers point their weapons forward, before Leia brushes past them, patting their shoulders as she keeps her eyes on her opponent)
Boba Fett: (Steps forward with his blaster cradled in his arms) Solo's latest catch.
Leia Organa: (Signals her men to fall back, which they do) The Empire's favorite lackey.
Boba Fett: (Unfolds his arms and lifts his fist, firing a burst of flame from his flamethrower) I'll be anybody's lackey if they pay me enough.
Kylo Ren: (Stomps forward before pulling out and igniting his saber)
Darth Caedus: (Steps forward with his hands behind his back) I alone am the heir to Darth Vader.
Kylo Ren: (Points his blade forward) That legacy is mine to claim, not yours!
Darth Caedus: (Pulls his saber from behind his back and ignites it) The true claimant will be the one who lives.
Darth Caedus: (Steps forward as he pulls his saber with a flourish and angling it at the ground)
Kylo Ren: (Steps forward with his mask in one hand and his inactive saber in the other) You are my counterpart from another timeline?
Darth Caedus: (Lighting crackles in his hand before he shuts it into a fist) And unlike you, I will succeed in my ambitions.
Kylo Ren: (Places his mask on and ignites his saber as he brings it up) So sure. Let us test that theory.
Maris Brood: (Sits in a meditative pose as her expression tightens with discomfort before she opens her eyes with a gasp. She sighs, sits up and pulls her guard shoto sabers)
Rahm Kota: (Steps forward with his arms crossed) Maris. Ready to begin?
Maris Brood: (Ignites her sabers) You sure, master? I mean, your eyes...
Rahm Kota: (Pulls his saber from his back and ignites it with a flourish) I'm blind, girl. Doesn't mean I can't spar.
Rahm Kota: (Holds out his hand with his eyes closed as he senses someone approaching. His blind eyes shoot open as he faces his opponent and pulls his saber from his back pouch)
Maris Brood: (Twirls her ignited sabers in her hands before getting into a combat stance) I still have nightmares about Felucia.
Rahm Kota: (Ignites his saber and points it forward) To let go of your darkness, you must be able to forgive yourself.
Maris Brood: (Twirls her sabers one more time) That's easier said than done, master.
Let me know what you think. Looking forward to your follow up with the time-merging story.
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-18 23:07:36 +0000 UTC]
Vader: (A close up of Vader's helmet from behind as it's lowered onto his scarred head, clicking on with a hiss. We see Vader sitting in his chambers, before his chair turns around, the Dark Lord rising out of it an onto the stage, his hands on his belt)
Luke: (walks into the stage wearing a cloak and hood. Like at Jabba's palae he lowers it and places his hands together in a downward angle) I will neither kill you nor join you father.
Vader: (Calmly grips his lightsaber and ignites it, his other hand making a fist in the air) Then you will meet your destiny.
Luke: (shrugs off his cloak with grace that would make Obi-Wan proud) You will only destroy your last hope.
Outro's
"Thy Bidding Done" (with a flourish of his cape, the scene transitions to Vader walking onto a pad on the floor. Kneeling anf bowing his head as the cackling face of a hologram Palpatine flickers to life.)
"Back to the Stars" (A X-Wing lands behind Luke, piloted by R2. Luke steps on the ladder and looks off heroically accompanied by R2's beeps)
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-19 22:49:18 +0000 UTC]
Luke: (Kneels in front of the parts of his lightsaber with his eyes closed, bringing them together with the Force before grasping it mid-air and standing)
Vader: (Stands at the other end of the stage with his saber in his hand. Without an inch of movement, he ignites the blade) Join me, and we can destroy the Emperor.
Luke: (Ignites his saber in a defensive stance) I will not turn, father.
Vader: (Flourishes his cape back) It is the only way, my son.
Sev: (Scrapes his hand across the ground as he kneels down, bringing up to his nose and inspecting it before looking at his opponent and standing)
Scorch: (Rappels down from an offscreen LAAT) Let me tell you, ner vod, this planet gives me the creeps.
Sev: (Attaches the sniper attachment for his DC-17m) You kidding? This planet is a dream come true.
Scorch: (Extends his wrist-blade) Okay, now you're giving me the creeps, Sev.
Scorch: (An offscreen explosion sends several battle droid parts flying apart. Scorch walks up to a droid's head and picks it up with a chuckle)
Sev: (Rappels down from an offscreen LAAT) You did what to my trophy room?!
Scorch: (Tosses the head away over his shoulder as he brings up his DC-17m with grenade attachment) Sev, buddy, I swear it was an accident!
Sev: (Extends his wrist-blade) I'll show you a blasted accident, you little Fierfek!
Galen Marek: (The Rogue Shadow passes the stage overhead, with Galen dropping from it and landing with a shockwave. He looks up at his opponent and stands)
Rey: (Steps forward and enters a combat stance as she ignites her saber) You've grown since we met in the Mountain City.
Galen Marek: (Ignites his saber and holds it in a guard stance) Thanks to you and Skywalker, I'm no longer Vader's puppet.
Rey: (Holds out her hand as she angles the saber forwards) Let's see just how much you've improved.
Rey: (Sits at a campfire, eating Polystarch portion bread before she notices someone approaching. She stands up, eats the remainder of her bread, and looks at her opponent)
Galen Marek: (Tosses his lightsaber up and down casually) Once a scavenger, now a Jedi.
Rey: (Ignites her saber as swallows her bread) Once an enemy, now a friend.
Galen Marek: (Catches his saber and ignites it) The galaxy is full of oddities indeed...
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-20 14:31:54 +0000 UTC]
Boba: (his gloved hand grabs the side of a sand Dune, pulling himself up with a grunt, shaking off slime from the Sarlacc's innards as he walks forward)
Han: (Runs down a hall firing at his pursuers, before coming to a halt in the stage) Your married, Boba?
Boba: (Wipes his Pauldron, and bares his flamethrower) Was. We where two dumb teens who rushed into it.
Han: Young love... (shoots a pursuer off screen without looking) It never lasts with the likes of us.
Din Djarin: (walks onto the stage casually, the floating pram with the child next to him. He holds a hand out in front of it, beckoning the child to back away)
Jango: (lands bending his knees before drawing his pistols, spinning them before holding them guns akimbo) What Clan are you from?
Din Djarin: (steps forward and pulls out his rifle, as the child's pram seals itself) My Clan scattered. For now it's just me and the little one.
Jango: (aims both barrels at his opponent) From one father to another; Trust no one.
Revan: (camera pans across a close up of Revan's mask, panning back, reveals him holding it in front of him, before turning it around and putting it on, and looking towards his opponent)
Din Djarin: (rides in on a Blergg and dismounts it. Petting the creature) That mask his Mandalorian, I recognize Beskar anywhere.
Revan: (actives Saber and holds it up to the side of his head in a, On Guard, stance) It belonged to a warrior cut down by her own clan for speaking against their slaughter. I wear it to honor her actions.
Din Djarin: (Smacks the side of the Blergg, sending it away) Noble... Let's see if you deserve it.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-20 19:22:10 +0000 UTC]
Han 1: (Chewie roars at the opponent angrily as Han comes up next to him, pats his shoulder, and looks forward at his foe)
Han 2: (Runs down a hall firing at his pursuers, before coming to a halt in the stage) I'm flattered.
Han 1: (Motions for Chewie to back away, which the Wookiee does) Who said I was imitating?
Han 2: Great... (shoots a pursuer offscreen without looking) I guess we're Han Duo now.
Ben Kenobi: (Tusken Raiders point their gaffi sticks at the opponent threateningly, only for them to hear a monstrous cry behind them. Panicked, they turn away and flee as Ben comes onto the stage where they were, his hood over his head)
Obi-Wan: (Steps forward with his classic cross-armed beard-stroking pose) Well...hello there.
Ben Kenobi: (Pulls back his hood as he pulls his lightsaber and ignites it) Hello there, yourself.
Obi-Wan: (Ignites his saber and points it as he did with Grievous on Utapau) I have a feeling this will be interesting.
Regime Ruby: (A clump of rose petals flies through the air before landing on the stage, reforming into Ruby, who's kneeling down with Crescent Rose in scythe form. She stands as her opponent comes forward)
Past Ruby: (Twirls Crescent Rose as she sets it down) How could you - erm, I - serve a dictator like Superman?!
Regime Ruby: (Angles her weapon to the ground) When you go through what I did, you'll understand.
Past Ruby: (Pulls her weapon up into a fighting stance) I understand mom would cry if she could see you now.
Ahsoka 1: (Runs onto the stage as she pulls her sabers off her belt and tosses them into the air. She somersaults, grabs them as they come down, and ignites them before she lands on one knee. She looks up and smirks as she stands)
Ahsoka 2: (Walks up, taking her sabers off her belt and getting into a combat stance) Clones I get, but this...
Ahsoka 1: (Angles her blades in a combat stance) This reminds me of a dream I had after too much blue milk...
Ahsoka 2: (Ignites her sabers) No way! I had that same dream!
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Ah, Jango Fett and Din Djarin. The meeting of the two most badass sorta-fathers in the galaxy. Also, nice to see Han and Boba having a "friendly" conversation for once.
Also, the Ruby conversation is putting the "Past RWBY and JNPR" idea I mentioned further up the thread into form, in case your curious. Time Merger and all that.
Looking forward to your thoughts on these mirror matches I came up with, as well as your follow-up with the story mode. Good work!
BTW, how are you enjoying DOOM?
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-22 05:52:57 +0000 UTC]
Oscar/Oz: (jumps into the stage with a twil. anding on his feet, he spins his cane)
Sion: (his decapitated head lays on the ground before his remaing eye opens suddenly as it's pulled across the floor by red and black smoke, re-attaching to his scarred body, which floats back to his feet, with a cacophony of cracking bones, fists clenched.)
So, you too are denied death?
Oscar/Oz: (stops spinning his cane, and holds it at the ready) It's an experience I've learned to manage. Why haven't you?
Sion: (stepping forward cracking his neck with a quick head motion) Your pain is brief! Mine is undending!
Lando 1: (walks forward escorted by cloud city security, Lobot by his side.)
Lando 2: (swaggers on the stage while shuffling a Sabaak deck between his hands) Why hello hansome.
Lando 1: (steps forward as Lobot turns and signals the detail who walks off stage with them) Hello yourself, gorgeous.
Lando2: (slides the deck into his sleeve and draws his blaster) Han, may have a point about our ego.
Meetra: (kneels alone in a dark realm, strings of light leading to her which vanish as she opens her eyes)
Sion: (floats in a bacta tank as it's drained, jumping out of it through he glass onto the stage) For a moment I was free. Finally rid of this place.
Meetra: (stands up saber in hand) The time merger stole it from you.
Sion: (ignites saber and raises it In Form 5 stance) I will do anything, destroy anyone to experience that precious moment again! Even, you.
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Doom is great. Really expands on the mytho's.
I see your Han mirror match, and raise you a Lando. Also Boba and Han run in the same circles, or used to. On occasion you pick up a thing or two to talk about, in the rare instance your not at each others necks.
Good example, in Battlefront 2. www.youtube.com/watch?v=J9S4yf…
Ps. The interaction between Yoda and Vader needs to happen here at some point. I'm thinking a slight recreation of Yoda meeting Dooku in aotc. With Vader turning to the sound of a familiar cane tapping the ground. After saying each others names Vader's troopers point their guns at him, only to be pushed to the side, Vader unmoving as they continue their talk.
That image of the Exile in mediation was based on this epic piece. The symbolism works so well.
copyplays.tumblr.com/post/1840…
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-22 20:27:52 +0000 UTC]
I'm not surprised that Lando would casually flirt with himself. And yeah, I know that Boba and Han come from the same kinds of places -- it's just that most of their interactions involve Boba trying to claim a bounty on Han's head and Han trying to keep Boba off his tail. Good idea for Yoda, by the by. We could put that into a chapter with him and Mace Windu. Also, here're a couple of things focused around one of my favorite characters.
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Jango: (Taps a few buttons on his wrist gauntlet as he strolls forward, before unleashing a torrent of flame from it and making a firey circle with his movements)
Zam: (Is kneeling as she inspects her rifle when she notices her opponent and stands) Thanks again for pulling me out of the fire back in Odessa.
Jango: (Draws and spins his pistols as he brings them up) Like I said then, Zam, that's the last time.
Zam: (Aims her rifle) Right up until you owe me another favor, anyway.
Zam: (Approaches in the form of the opponent before she shapeshifts into her human form with a smirk)
Jango: (Lands, bending his knees from the impact, then drawing his pistols and spinning them before holding them guns akimbo) Got a new job. Wanted to know if you want in.
Zam: (Pulls her pistol and primes it, keeping her eyes on her opponent) Split the reward 50/50?
Jango: (Aims both barrels forward) Hmm. Let's make sure you're still worth that price.
Boba: (Flies down to the ground and lands before adjusting the settings on one of his gauntlets)
Jango: (Lands, bending his knees from the impact, then drawing his pistols and spinning them before holding them guns akimbo) You've grown, Boba.
Boba: (Cocks and readies his EE-3) All to honor your name, dad.
Jango: (Aims both barrels forward) Show me by how much.
Jango: (Taps a few buttons on his wrist gauntlet as he strolls forward, before unleashing a torrent of flame from it and making a firey circle with his movements)
Boba: (Steps forward with his blaster cradled in his arms) Dad.
Jango: (Draws and spins his pistols as he brings them up) Show me you're worthy of the Fett name.
Boba: (Unfolds his arms and lifts his fist, firing a burst of flame from his flamethrower) I won't disappoint you.
And a little something else:
Jango Fett
"I'm just a simple man trying to make my way in the universe."
Symbol: True Mandalorian insignia
Bio: Farmer. Soldier. Leader. Mercenary. Army. Throughout his remarkable life, the bounty hunter Jango Fett has been all of these. During the Mandalorian Civil War, Jango was adopted as a boy by Jaster Mereel, the leader of the True Mandalorians, after the former lost his family to the splinter faction known as Death Watch. After Jaster's death, Jango went on to lead his army, only to lose them all during a fateful battle on Galidraan and be forced into slavery due to the Death Watch's manipulations. Escaping, Jango went on to take revenge against the Death Watch's leader, Tor Vizsla, before turning to bounty hunting. He fulfilled many a contract before taking one where he hunted down Komari Vosa, the dark Jedi who led the Bando Gora cult. Upon his success, the contractor and Vosa's former master, Tyranus, recruited him to become the genetic template for the Clone Army that would wage a brutal war ten years later. Though he met his end at the hands of Mace Windu, the time merger has brought Jango back from the dead and into Remnant -- all with the goal of finding the clone he raised as a son: the equally famous Boba Fett.
Moveset: Like his son, Jango is a walking armory, the weapons of which he utilizes to the fullest. In addition to his trusty pair of WESTAR-34 blaster pistols, Jango is armed with a flamethrower, poison dart launcher, wrist-mounted missile launcher, and his Merr-Sonn JT-12 jetpack -- all of which are incorporated into his moveset. That said, he's not afraid to get into close-quarters combat, in which he punches, kicks, and strikes his opponents with his pistols and retractable blades.
Character Trait: Mandalorian Rage: Jango's Mandalorian training sparks his determination, making him unflinching for a short period of time. He'll take damage from attacks, but he won't stagger.
Grab: Jango grabs his opponent, stabs them with his retractable blades, and shoots them point-blank, sending them back. If he throws them behind, Jango grabs the opponent, pulls them behind him, stabs them in the back with his blades, before blasting them in the back of the head.
Super Move: Fett's Flurry: Blue light glows behind Jango as he twirls his blasters with a battle cry. He fires both his pistols at the opponent; if they strike, the opponent staggers, allowing Jango to follow up with a series of pistol-whipping that ends with a roundhouse kick. As the opponent stumbles, Jango fires his whipcord, tying their arms to their body. He then hooks their jaw, forcing them to turn around, and sticks an explosive charge on their back. He jetpacks away, twirls one of his guns as he lands, and aims while his rangefinder comes down. The opponent cranes their neck quickly enough to catch the explosive on their back and looks up at Jango in horror, just in time for Jango to fire, detonating the charge and sending the opponent into the air.
Victory Animation: Jango twirls his guns as he coolly slides them back into his holsters (think Attack of the Clones after he killed Coleman Trebor) before looking up and firing off into the air with his jetpack straight towards the camera as time slows.
Defeat Pose: Jango drops to one of his knees, with one hand on the ground supporting him as the other clutches at his side.
Taunt: After depleting one of his opponent's healthbars, he hovers with his jetpack as he twirls with his pistols.
- "You're gonna make me rich."
- "You'll need to do better than that."
- "Try not to die. You're worth more alive."
- "I trained you better than that, son." (Boba Fett)
- "Still as reckless as ever." (Zam Wesell)
- "This time, you're staying dead." (Montross)
- "How's it feel, not being top akk dog anymore?" (Cad Bane)
- "If you think I'm afraid of you, you're delusional." (Durge)
- "And you call yourself a hunter." (Bounty Hunter character)
- "Dinuir ni a veman akaanir, vod!" (Mandalorian character. Translates to "Give me a real fight, brother/sister!")
Idle Animations:
- Jango twirls one of his guns from several different angles before stopping it and getting back into his stance.
- Jango cracks his neck before rolling his shoulders to get his blood flowing and getting back into his stance.
- Jango checks his wrist gauntlet's settings briefly before getting back into his stance.
Ending:
Jango: (He stands over Salem's defeated form, aiming one of his pistols at her, with her hand raised up at him, as though to beg for mercy. The camera slowly focuses on Jango as he narrates, with Salem gradually slipping out of view) Salem tore apart time itself, and pulled me out of a well-earned warrior's rest in order to incite chaos and weaken her enemies. She thought none of us could be a threat. It's clear she never met a Fett before. After I beat her, she begged me for mercy. I had none to give. (DOW!! Jango fires at the now offscreen Salem. Fade to him looking at the Relic of Time) With that witch out of the picture, the relic she forged was up for grabs. But what to do with it? Hmm. Tough call. Sell it to the highest bidder? No, far too vain. Restore the timelines to what they were? Maybe. But I still lose my army, my friends, and eventually my head. Suddenly, I realized. I had the fortune of landing on a planet full of warriors of the highest caliber. Imagine what'd they be with Mandalorian training... (Cut to him standing in a battlefield atop a small mountain of bodies with his weapons drawn, alongside Boba, Team RWBY, Team JNPR, Team CFVY, and Team SNNN, all donned in uniquely styled Mandalorian armor. Boba holds the limp body of Pre Vizsla up like a trophy) So that's what I did. I made it so that Remnant is a part of our galaxy. Specifically, a sister planet of Mandalore. Under my wing, I molded the Huntsmen and Huntresses of Remnant into a new breed of Mandolorian Supercommandos. With my son and I at the helm, we crushed the Death Watch and Clan Vizsla under our heel for what they did to Jaster. Not even the Jedi can stand up to my warriors. Let the galaxy know and fear the name of Clan Fett -- the galaxy's greatest warriors. If you need us, we'll be there. If you cross us, you'll die. If anyone thinks they can take us down, you're welcome to try. Eventually, someone might manage to do it. But until then...best you be prepared for the fight of your life. I know we'll be.
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For reference:
Mandalorian Team RWBY
Mandalorian Team JNPR
Mandalorian Team CFVY
Mandalorian Team SSSN
Feel free to make your own Star Wars character moveset like this. I'd love to hear what you think of this.
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-22 21:29:25 +0000 UTC]
Excellent ending for Jango.
I'm not that good with fighting game minutiae, beyond using them. The mechanics kinda overwhelm me, so I think I'll pass.
Back to endings.
Revan: Savior, conqueror, hero, villain. (Revan looking into the time artifact as images of his life pass by)
I have been all of these things. Regrets fill my life, as much as my glory's, looking at it now from Salem's artifact....
I see how tragic it really was. (image of him saber aloft rallying the Jedi to figh with Alek smiling at his side)
From a young knight defying his masters to do what was right- (the image transforms into one of him in his Sith robes,
arms behind his back, the cheering Jedi replaced with at attention Sith, Malak beside him, metal jawed, arms crossed and frowning)
-to a ruthless deluded by the Dark Side. With the artifacts all those moments could be corrected, the wrongs righted.
But without them, I would never have met my friends... (Scene of him aboad the Hawk haveing a good time with his companions)
or her. (scene of him and Bastila together watching a sunset)
No. My past will remain as is, that I can live with. My future though, that's another story.
(scene of Revan with his companions an army of HK-51's, Republic soldiers, Jedi, and Mandalorians) I know how that the smallest
choice can have consequences, with the artifact allowing me to foresee each, I can choose, maybe not the right ones, but the ones that do the least damage.
We face Vitiate's Empire when it comes, and united we drive them back, shatter their forces. Sending them back into hiding.
(Revan places the artifact in an escape pod and jettisons it near a Sun)
I take the Artifact out of the picture afterwards... Whatever future my choices made from then on is not for me to see. My role was just one of thousands,
(shot of him standing happy with his team and Meetra's) just knowing that our chapter of it is closed is more then enough for me.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-24 19:41:31 +0000 UTC]
In addition to Yoda's set, here are some other intros I thought of.
Tyber: (Walks up to an Imperial officer and his two stormtroopers. The officer points at the opponent's position, to which Tyber tosses him a clump of credit chips as he continues walking up to his adversary and the Imperials fall back)
Roman: (Stolls forward, taking a drag of his cigar as he looks at his opponent) What say you, me, a couple of banks...?
Tyber: (Raises his Rawk chopped special) So you could make off with the take behind my back?
Roman: (Ashes his cigar) Aheh. You're smart, I'll grant you that.
Ironwood: (Steps forward with a pair of Atlesian soldiers. He holds up his hand and silently orders them to fall back. As they do, he pulls one of his revolvers and inspects it)
Tyber: (Comes forward with his Rawk chopped special in his hands) Tell me, General, do you think I'm a fool?
Ironwood: (Holds up his revolver) For opposing the Regime? Yes.
Tyber: (Cocks his blaster) And yet I've managed to outwit you at every turn.
Yoda: (Floats forward in hoverchair with his lightsaber laid in front of him)
Oscar: (Walks forward holding his cane unassuredly) You've been a great help, Master Jedi.
Yoda: (Leaps of his chair and ignites his saber) A pleasure, it has been, to work alongside you both, Professor Ozpin.
Oscar: (Body glows green before Ozpin speaks) Please, Yoda. Call me Oz.
Dooku: (Walks forward with his hand behind his back as a sinister grin makes its way to his face)
Yoda: (Grunts as he walks forward with his cane) Count Dooku...
Dooku: (Holds his hand out, allowing his saber to fly into it. He does a fencing salute as he ignites it) Once more we meet this way, my old Master.
Yoda: (Drops his cane and pulls his saber to his hand before igniting it) Escape this time, you will not.
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-24 20:42:56 +0000 UTC]
Malgus: (Stands alone his hood covering his eyes before lifting his head up slightly to reveal his scowl)
Tyber: (walks in with a holo displaying his profits rolling in. Casually spinning his blaster in the other hand) To what
do I owe your interruption?
Malgus: (Ignites his blade and pushes back his hood) The victory you stole from me in Vaceo.
Tyber: (pockets his holo) Ah, that little caper.
Victory Animation
"You where deceived" (Malgus turns from his opponent. The shot cutting to the front of him as flames consume the stage, the Sith pulling up his hood before time slows down)
The Emperor: (Two red preatorian guards unlock their staffs as Sideous walks between them wooden cane in hand, letting out a cackle)
Malgus: (stands up from his throne and jumps down to the stage) Your military's prejudice against Aliens weakens them.
The Emperor: (Tosses away his cane, and lighting begins to crackle in his palms) It is of no interest to me. Only their servitude, matters!
Malgus: (points at opponent) What weakens the foundation, can collapse the structure.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-24 23:47:34 +0000 UTC]
Regime Jaune: (Kneels with his sword stuck into the ground. He looks up and sees his opponent before standing and pulling it from the ground)
Past Jaune: (Walks forward with his weapon sheathed in its scabbard, one hand gripped onto it) What happened to Pyrrha doesn't justify any of this.
Regime Jaune: (Holds up his fist as he holds his sword with the other) You say that now. Wait until you lose her!
Past Jaune: (Unsheathes his sword with one hand and holds up his other one in a fist) Even then, she wouldn't want me doing this to myself!
Past Pyrrha: (Twirls her spear around her body before pointing it at her opponent)
Black Lantern Pyrrha: (Walks forward in a puff of black smoke) Take a good, long look at your future, Pyrrha...
Past Pyrrha: (Pulls out her shield as she gets into a fighting stance) If you are my future, I'll accept that fate with my head held high.
Black Lantern Pyrrha: (Cracks various parts of her body, complete with ugly-sounding bone crunches) Why wait that long?
Plo Koon 1: (Steps forward before spinning in place and igniting his lightsaber with a flourish)
Plo Koon 2: (Walks calmly towards his opponent with his saber in his hands in front of him) Is this the work of the dark side?
Plo Koon 1: (Holds his saber out in a guard stance) Perhaps it's Master Filoni's vision made form.
Plo Koon 2: (Ignites his saber) Whatever the explanation, our meeting must be the will of the Force.
Anakin 1: (Anakin's starfighter flies overhead before he lands on the ground and looks up with a determined expression as he stands)
Anakin 2: (Ignites his lightsaber, twirling it idly) Obi-Wan always said I was my own worst enemy.
Anakin 1: (Ignites his saber and holds it at his side) Yeah, but I never imagined this is what he meant.
Anakin 2: (Stops twirling his saber and holds it up over his head) Does this mean we're the Chosen Two?
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-25 00:12:01 +0000 UTC]
Hehe. Master Filoni.
Yoda tried reading that particular Jedi's mind once. This was his response.
youtu.be/ihskUz0obzY?t=19m44s
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-25 01:16:04 +0000 UTC]
Ha. Yeah, that's a reference to Dave Filoni being an avid Plo Koon fan. The line actually comes from the Clone Wars Lightsaber Duels game, when you have Plo fight himself.
Say, back with the story mode, instead of Durge in the Sun and Ilia chapter we left off on, maybe it could be Montross in his new cybernetic form, revealed in the same way as Frost in MK11. Sun, Ilia, and Jango drop in after Finn's distraction draws Grievous away, leaving Adam, his men, some battle droids, and Montross to guard the prisoners. While Jango wraps Montross up with his whipcord before fighting the White Fang soldiers, either Sun or Ilia fight Adam as the other supports Jango. Cue fight, Adam is beaten, and Montross breaks free, just in time for Sun, Ilia, and Jango to face him down, at which point the disgraced Mandalorian reveals his horribly scarred face, giving Jango a shock.
What do you think?
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-25 03:52:42 +0000 UTC]
That sounds both cool and effcient. I was picturing Montross wearing a helmet or something anyway, one that disguised his voice.
Another Note: I think a brief moment where two of the Droids about one of the Prisoners would be good.
B1 Droid 1: General. May we please change shifts with another squad?
Grievous: What's the matter? Too simple a task for you to be incompetent at?
B1 Droid 2: No sir. It's one of the prisoners, the one with red hair.
B1 Droid 1: She hasn't stopped talking since we locked her up! It's wearing down by audio receptors.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-25 06:35:01 +0000 UTC]
That sounds great. I assume the redhead is Ruby. Could be a good way to introduce her past version, methinks.
By the way, we should maybe get back to the story itself again. I think we got a little distracted here.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-25 07:39:13 +0000 UTC]
Ah. You should probably change that to "the one with orange hair," in that case.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-23 06:50:08 +0000 UTC]
Nice. It definitely sounds in character with Revan. It's okay if you don't want to do movesets yourself, but I enjoy doing it. How's this?
Yoda
"Named must your fear be, before banish it, you can."
Symbol: Jedi Order Crest
Bio: Having lived for centuries, the renowned Jedi Master Yoda is as wise and he is powerful. The Grand Master of the Order in the last centuries of the Galactic Republic, Yoda oversaw the Order before, during, and after the devastating Clone Wars. His small size and age may give off the impression of a frail and easily cowed old man, but make no mistake. Yoda's powers aren't limited to just his wisdom. He is a master of every form of lightsaber combat, as well as the Force, being on par with the likes of even Mace Windu and Count Dooku. Despite this, or perhaps because of it, Yoda believes most firmly in teaching the next generation, never missing an opportunity to ensure his students learn from his experiences. At heart, the kindly old Jedi is a teacher first and foremost, having a hand in the training of nearly every Jedi in the Order during his tenure. The time merger presents a new experience, but Yoda has accepted it with his head held high, for he knows the Force will guide him and his allies. For it is his ally, and the Force makes for a powerful ally.
Moveset: Yoda's size and age are nowhere near indicative of his ability. With acrobatic abilities, powerful Force attacks, and devastatingly precise lightsaber strikes, Yoda is easily the match of many an opponent.
Character Trait: Size Matters Not: Yoda calls upon the Force to guide him, allowing him to freely combo break attacks without depleting his power bar.
Grab: Yoda reaches out his hand and grips his opponent with the Force, chuckling as he does so, before making them hit themselves three times in the jaw and tossing them either behind him or in front of him, depending on his position in the stage.
Super Move: Liftoff: A green light shines behind Yoda as he focuses on his opponent with a soft growl before he blasts the opponent away with the Force. If they're hit by the attack, they stumble back as Yoda puts away his lightsaber and sits cross-legged with his eyes closed. The opponent looks at Yoda curiously as they recover their balance, before the Jedi Master holds out his hand, lifting them into the air with the Force. In rapid succession, Yoda then strikes the opponent with several pieces of debris as Yoda continues to hold out his hand. Finally, after eight pieces of junk collide with the suspended opponent, Yoda opens his eyes and slams them down into the ground before getting back to his feet and reigniting his saber.
Victory Animation: Yoda sighs softly as he deactivates his lightsaber and puts it away. He turns his back to the camera, sits, and closes his eyes as he meditates, with the Force ghost of Qui-Gon Jinn appearing before him as time slows.
Defeat Pose: Yoda falls back onto his rear, placing one of his hands on his head as he groans.
Taunt: After depleting one of his opponent's healthbars, he lowers his saber and shakes his head disapprovingly.
- "Control! You must learn control!"
- "Judge me by my size, do you, hmm?"
- "Do. Or do not. There is no try."
- "Restraint you must learn, young Skywalker." (Anakin Skywalker)
- "Your humor, welcome it is, but limited it must be." (Obi-Wan Kenobi, Lando Calrissian, or Kit Fisto)
- "Sense your frustration, I do, Master Windu." (Mace Windu)
- "If a true Jedi you are to become, control of your fear, you must learn. (Jedi Padawan characters like Ahsoka Tano and Kira Carsen)
- "Much to learn, you still have." (Jedi Master characters)
- "Sadden me, you do, my fallen apprentice." (Count Dooku)
- "Lies with you, hope for the future does." (Luke Skywalker and Rey)
Idle Animations:
- Yoda spins his saber a few times before getting back into his stance.
- Yoda holds out his hand and closes his eyes briefly before getting back into his stance.
- Yoda seems to sense something and looks around before sighing and getting back into his stance.
Yoda: (Salem is on her knees and looking down at the ground in front of Yoda as the Jedi Master looks at her calmly) Fear, anger, and tragedy -- the tools of the dark side, are they. Consumed by all three, was Salem. True to form, become the epitome of darkness, she did. (Scene shifts with Yoda holding out his three-fingered hand as Salem looks at him in surprise) But stay that way, she did not have to. (Fade to Yoda and Salem talking in front of the Relic, with Yoda in his hoverchair as Salem stands) As with Vader, overtook her, the desire to control death did. Explained I did, that, while tragic, controlled, death cannot be. For all, does fate eventually come. To enjoy the time we have with that which we care for, the meaning of being alive is. Otherwise, loses its appeal, life does. (Fade to Salem looking away sadly as Yoda speaks to her) Failed to realize this, did Salem. Now, the ability she has, to set a wrong right. (Fade to Yoda and Salem using the Relic to restore time) Together, put time back to the way it was, we did. Soon after, fade away, she did. (Salem disintegrates as a Grimm would) But not without thanking me, for showing her the path to freedom. (Fade to Yoda walking out of the room where Salem kept the Relic before collapsing it with the Force) As for the Relic, buried it, I did. The altering of time, nobody's right, is it. The Force, I shall let flow through the timelines naturally, as was always intended. (Fade to Yoda meditating with his eyes closed in the Jedi Temple's Garden) What comes next, the Force's will, it is. (A small black and white bird lands next to him. As it does, he smiles) In her final moments, realized that, did the Dark Queen of Grimm. Farewell, Salem. (The bird flies away) May the Force...accept you.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-15 06:26:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm trying to imagine the arcade endings of other characters. Here's my idea for Obi-Wan.
Obi-Wan: (As he looks over the artifact in his famous beard-stroking pose of contemplation) Well. That was rather invigorating. Ozpin and his faction weren't kidding when they said Salem was immortal. So unfortunate for her that "immortal" and "infallible" aren't the same thing. Now, all that was left was this Relic of Time that she used to bring us all here. (Cut to him in a circle with the Jedi Council and Anakin as he motions to the Relic behind him) The Council couldn't seem to agree on what to do. Do we use the Relic to restore the timelines, or do we use it to change them? Can they be changed at all? If we change them, how? Should we even try to use it at all? Every question seemed to lead to another, and no definitive answer appeared to show itself. That was when an old friend appeared to guide us. (The Force ghost of Qui-Gon Jinn appears in the middle of the circle) Qui-Gon Jinn, speaking to us from the Netherworld of the Force. (Cut to Qui-Gon speaking to Obi-Wan as Obi-Wan listens with his usual thoughtful look) My old master told us that, with the Relic in our possession, it was now our responsibility to sculpt a new timeline -- a better one, for both Remnant and the galaxy. So we did. (Cut to him and his fellow Jedi all holding their hands over the artifact) Everyone had input. In addition to restoring Remnant and eliminating the threat of the Grimm, we all agreed to make it so Palpatine's plot would fail. However, we took it a step further. We made it so there were no Clone Wars to begin with. Dooku never turned to the dark side, and the Separatist Alliance never came to form. We all had our own little touches added as well. Most had theirs to do with the Order, but me, well...I followed Qui-Gon's advice and made my own path. One separate from the Jedi Order. (Cut to him wearing a Mandalorian noble's outfit, with him and Satine Kryze arm-in-arm as they watch a young boy play in the garden of the Sundari Royal Palace) I still trained Anakin, of course. But part of me saw the appeal in having a family to call your own. After Anakin's knighting ceremony, I retired, married Satine, and bore a child with her. And with the Republic secure, the Clone Wars averted, and Palpatine arrested...well. All you need to know is...I've never been happier.
Feel free to take a shot at a character's ending yourself.
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kaanmaster In reply to Searebel98 [2021-11-04 14:48:44 +0000 UTC]
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-25 06:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Is it just me or are these getting very squished?
Check this to see what I mean.
www.deviantart.com/comments/1/…
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-25 06:32:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that's how Deviantart works with its comments. It gets weird like that. I personally don't see the logic behind it.
Just click the timestamp by the poster's name to see it more clearly.
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-26 03:48:38 +0000 UTC]
Can't seem to find the banter with Thrawn and Lando. Wanted to add a few more banters. Can you find it?
For now I'll leave the new ones here.
Kylo: (Two resistance soldiers are trying to flee but are frozen in place and cut down by Kylo. Who stands sideways in their place, gaze slowly tilting upwards)
Master Skywalker: (walks forward his hood up, hands together pointed down)
That night Ben... I only wanted to see what was troubling you, not kill you.
Kylo: (Twirls his blade once, rearranging himself to face his opponent)
I'm not here for what you tried to do. I here for what you did.
Master Skywalker: (shrugs off cape in a way that would make Obi-Wan proud)
I know. My fear almost destroyed everything, but I won't let you finish it off.
Luke Victory Animation
"Binary Sunset" Luke turns around transitioning the scene to Tattooine at sunset (young Luke. master Skywalker's is Ach-To) placing his foot up as time slows.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-27 17:48:50 +0000 UTC]
Did you get my message? The post is right beneath the one where Thrawn has his briefing with the Imperial leadership.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-28 02:46:08 +0000 UTC]
Ah, there you are. Sorry for nagging. Just wondering where you were.
While I have the chance to tell you, I'm thinking about writing a fanfiction about this sometime. This time-merging idea you introduced has me inspired. If I ever post it online, I'd like to credit you for the idea.
Lastly, two ideas I'd like to share with you. The time merge brings back Cinder, who had been killed by Superman, and she frees Emerald and Mercury by disguising herself as a Rebel soldier and breaking them out of their cell aboard Home One. As they leave, a captive Count Dooku uses the opportunity to use the Force to pluck a keycard from one of the troops Cinder kills in the prison block and open his cell, escaping himself.
The other idea is Montross being given his cybernetics by Salem in return for supporting her efforts in destabilizing Remnant. I'm trying to think of other Star Wars characters that might side with Salem for whatever reason. Do you have any ideas?
I'm looking forward to those dialogues you told me about as well as your story follow up. Happy to hear from you!
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-28 05:55:50 +0000 UTC]
That all sounds good. Go ahead. I'm more of an ideas guy myself then an actual writer so I'd be glad if you gave it a shot.
As for Salem allied character ideas maybe a Yuuzhan Vong? They almost appeared in Clone Wars as part of a "Alien abduction" story, as a type of boogeymen with limited evidence of their existence beyond the outer rim stories of beings from beyond the galaxy.
Or something like that.
Naturally they would omit the "immune to the force" thing that really never made sense to me. Still they could be reimagined as having a cult like religion who view study and use of the force as sacrilege. Thus they wish to destroy all teachings of it to keep sentient's from using it.
I'd actually imagined Montross getting his own cybernetics (being in recovery and hiding for the decade Jango was the Clone template. That reminds me we should have one of Remnant character comment on Jango sounding a lot like the Clones.) but they could be replaced with better ones from Salem.
I'm pictured this monologue from him aimed at Jango.
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"Oh, you though those Bando Gora freaks would've killed me right? They would have. But they don't make it quick, oh no, they liked to break their victims first. They tore off my arm, then my leg. Clawed at my face... Would've torn off more if they hadn't all fled when you killed Vosa. Ten, YEARS, Jango! Ten years I had to wait, crawling through the underworld, ten years of surgery's, body rejections, recovering and spending each, last, credit, I HAD! Just so I could face you again..."
"What kept you?"
"He he... Always the wise guy, Fett. I had to make sure I was ready. Didn't think I was. Even tried hunting those Clones of yours to keep me from acting to quickly. They where satisfying at first, but they just weren't you. Not Jango enough. Now... Now no more waiting. With these upgrades. *Chuckles* Montross is back."
"Over my dead body."
"That's the idea..."
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-28 09:25:34 +0000 UTC]
That's a great piece of dialogue. After that, Jango and Montross can exchange shots for a while before Montross lands a lucky hit on Jango's jetpack, temporarily disabling it and knocking Jango into a wall. Before Montross can finish Jango off, however, Sun and Ilia rush in and defend him. One of them then fights Montross while the other helps Jango against a group of droid reinforcements.
Admittedly, I don't know as much about the Yuuzhan Vong as I probably should. I'm not sure why'd any of them would fall in with Salem. I'm sure there are reasons somewhere. Maybe to do with their religious zealotry? BTW, would it be just the individual Vong or a full force of them?
While on the subject of Salem-allied characters, what would you think of Salem enlisting, say, Darth Caedus and Vaylin? If that were to happen, what would be their motivation for joining her?
Also, some more ideas for chapters:
* FURY OF THE DARK LORD
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Darth Vader
The Dark Lord of the Sith has reached Vale city, ready to destroy all in his way. The Regime defenders, led by Winter Schnee, desperately attempt to stop him.
* LIBERATION
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Finn
The Galactic Allies move to liberate Mistral city from the First Order, with Finn leading the charge. Along the way, he runs into his old commanding officer, who is intent on making her former subordinate suffer for his defection...
* FROM SHADOWS
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Batman & Blake Belladonna
With Adam's White Fang weakened, Batman and Blake lead a force in, ready to bring the brutal terrorist to justice once and for all.
* BLIND GENERALS
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Rahm Kota
Looking to take Superman's greatest tactical advantage away from him, General Kota and his Militia carry out a daring raid to capture General Ironwood -- and hopefully, turn him back to the man he was.
* PROMISES KEPT
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Maris Brood
While attempting to enlist the help of the Vacuo Shipping Fleet, Maris encounters Salem's lackeys -- one of which she hopes she can save...
* FACING THE FUTURE
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(Past) Jaune Arc & Pyrrha Nikos
Jaune and Pyrrha make a push into Imperial territory, looking to secure Mount Glenn. Along the way, they meet their future selves...
* FACING THE PAST
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Nora Valkyrie and Lie Ren
Nora and Ren look to cripple the Separatist advance by eliminating their forward command center. Unfortunately, that same command center is based out of a place that holds memories both would rather forget...
* FATHER AND SON
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Luke Skywalker and Darth Vader
Luke refuses to turn to the dark side, despite the Hands' best attempts at torture. Frustrated by the young Jedi's resolve, Palpatine sends Vader to pressure his son into darkness himself. Little does the Emperor realize how easily his plans can backfire...
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-28 16:51:17 +0000 UTC]
Sounds good.
How about Prince Xizor as a Salem ally? That way we can have that Penny vs Guri fight.
I'm thinking a hero encounters her attempting to access something, she tries asking them for help under the pretense she's lost and is looking for someone of rank to help her.
There not so trusting, given the uncanny valley effect she she gives, but as she's about to reach out to them (to coerce them) Penny flies in and knocks her back. Detecting Guri's true nature.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-03-28 21:19:30 +0000 UTC]
Xizor is a good idea. I'm not familiar with Guri as well as I am the prince, but that interaction could work somewhere.
Speaking of the story, my part's up for you to respond to when you're ready. Also looking forward to those intros you were talking about earlier.
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avenger09 In reply to Searebel98 [2020-03-28 23:18:31 +0000 UTC]
Well I already showed you them. The ones between Kylo and Luke.
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Searebel98 In reply to avenger09 [2020-04-19 23:09:18 +0000 UTC]
Hey, been a while since we commented last. I have a few more intro dialogues to share.
Mace: (Strolls onto the stage with his arms crossed, his saber in one of his hands, all as he looks at his opponent with his usual steely glare)
Jango: (Lands, bending his knees from the impact, then drawing his pistols and spinning them before holding them guns akimbo) So you're the Jedi who slices off my head.
Mace: (Ignites his saber into a Vaapad stance) Thought you Mandalorians appreciated a warrior's death.
Jango: (Aims both barrels forward) That you did it in front of my son is the offense.
Kit 1: (Swims through an open body of water gracefully before leaping out, somersaulting onto the stage)
Kit 2: (Walks forward while idly twirling his lightsaber hilt in his hand) Fisto versus Fisto, eh? I like it!
Kit 1: (Ignites his lightsaber with a spin of his body) Loser buys the Jawa juice at Dexter's?
Kit 2: (Stops the hilt and ignites the saber as he gets into a Form I stance) You're on!
Superman: (Lands with a resounding slam on the ground before beginning to hover as he looks forward)
Yoda: (Grunts as he walks forward with his cane) Guardians of peace, the Jedi are.
Superman: (Eyes glow red as he clenches his fist) If that's the case, then why aren't the Jedi helping me?!
Yoda: (Drops his cane and pulls his saber to his hand before igniting it) The bane of peace, tyranny is.
Satele: (Twirls her lightsaber around herself in a series of flexible movements before holding it forward)
Theron: (Appears in a flash of electricity as he exits his cloaking field) Hey, mom.
Satele: (Twirls her lightsaber a few more times before she holds it behind her) I need to know you're ready for what's to come.
Theron: (Pulls one of his pistols and idly inspects it as he speaks) I hope you don't mind how your son is about to school you.
Also, you know those "World of Remnant" episodes that RWBY has? What would you think of something similar for Star Wars, with various characters narrating as it relates to the subject? For example, Cin Drallig tells about lightsaber forms, Grand Moff Tarkin talks about Imperial topics, Rex talks about subjects relating to the Clone Army, etc.
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