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read it like a normal comic so left to right
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the style the rest of the comic should be in hopefully unless I run out of time.

the text is an ass and I had to add colour behind because some bits overlapped into dark and light areas, indesign wouldn't let me have a lighter blue either.
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also here is the scripting for the next few pages~ (includes this page and first page)
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Rats in a lab: comic script:
Scene shows a lab like area and pans down to a crack in the wall to reveal two rats facing off in between the pipe works
Close up of the blue rat:
Shale: I won’t let you do this; you’ve gone too far this time!
Close up of the white rat its eyes narrowed and menacing:
Blank: oh contraire dear brother...I haven’t gone far enough...
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Electricity flashes through the wires on the white rats head and it spins its body round lashing out with its tail knocking the blue rat off balancing till he is hanging off the pip work by only his front paws.
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Blank: How can you defend them after what they have done to me?
Close up of the blue rat his face shows a hurt expression
Shale: I’m not defending them, but you’re going to get yourself killed...please, brothers stop this, I don’t want to lose you...
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The white rat snarls showing his teeth
Blank: you lost me the moment you took their side, if you won’t fight with me then you are my enemy and must be removed.
The white rats eyes show a flash of regret then electricity surges through the wires on his head.
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The next panel shows electricity spark simultaneously on the blue rat shocking him and causing blood to spurt from his head, his body convulses and he loses his grip falling into the dark below.
As the blue rat falls a panel shows a shot of his brother looking down on him and walking away, he closes his eyes and begins and inner monologue

Description
page 2
previous: [link] next:N/A
_________
read it like a normal comic so left to right
__________________________________

the style the rest of the comic should be in hopefully unless I run out of time.

the text is an ass and I had to add colour behind because some bits overlapped into dark and light areas, indesign wouldn't let me have a lighter blue either.
____________________________________________________________

also here is the scripting for the next few pages~ (includes this page and first page)
_____________________________________________________________

Rats in a lab: comic script:
Scene shows a lab like area and pans down to a crack in the wall to reveal two rats facing off in between the pipe works
Close up of the blue rat:
Shale: I won’t let you do this; you’ve gone too far this time!
Close up of the white rat its eyes narrowed and menacing:
Blank: oh contraire dear brother...I haven’t gone far enough...
__________________________________________________________________________________
Electricity flashes through the wires on the white rats head and it spins its body round lashing out with its tail knocking the blue rat off balancing till he is hanging off the pip work by only his front paws.
_________________________________________________________________________________
Blank: How can you defend them after what they have done to me?
Close up of the blue rat his face shows a hurt expression
Shale: I’m not defending them, but you’re going to get yourself killed...please, brothers stop this, I don’t want to lose you...
_______________________________________________________________________________
The white rat snarls showing his teeth
Blank: you lost me the moment you took their side, if you won’t fight with me then you are my enemy and must be removed.
The white rats eyes show a flash of regret then electricity surges through the wires on his head.
_______________________________________________________________________________
The next panel shows electricity spark simultaneously on the blue rat shocking him and causing blood to spurt from his head, his body convulses and he loses his grip falling into the dark below.
As the blue rat falls a panel shows a shot of his brother looking down on him and walking away, he closes his eyes and begins and inner monologue