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EDIT 2Um...So...I didn't make it.
"*Cyanide-Tea
You have been rejected for the following reasons:
- Character is a "Mary Sue/Gary Stu" stereotype"
So...yeah. I won't take the app down, though, since I lie Beth's design... I'll probably use her some other time for something else. After I fix her up. So yeah...
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EDIT
Made her older since yeah she looks older than 13 to me, and also fleshed out her history a little more.
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- NAME: Beth
- NICKNAME: Skippy ((Because in AC:WW, my character has that nickname. XD Why? I don't know. Animals are crazy. XD Although, I think the reason they gave me was that he could be seen everywhere in the town. I really don't know. He's had the nickname for 3 years. XD)), Bethie
- AGE: 17
- BIRTHDAY: March 25
- GENDER: Female
- NATURE: Quiet
- POKEMON / HUMAN: Zorua
- HOMETOWN: Opelucid City((White version)), Unova
- HISTORY: She was born as a result of the trainer of her parents trying to breed them to get a shiny Zorua. As she was not a shiny, the trainer released her soon after hatching. She stayed in Opelucid City, where she was hatched, and was frequently visited and taken care of by her parents who refused to abandon their daughter the way their trainer did.
No trainer in the city tried to take her in, as they were certain that a baby Zorua like herself could never be a stray, and also because her parents seemed very protective of her on their visits.
In her childhood, she constantly wondered why the trainer released her so early, and so she asked her parents one day, and they told her the truth. After learning what a 'shiny' pokemon was, Beth was hopeless to wonder what made a 'shiny' so much better than a normal pokemon. Unable to find a good reason other than their rarity, she grew to hold a strong resentment towards the trainer to have released her just because she wasn't a shiny.
This resentment led her to try to leave the city, to get away from other humans. On the one day that she ventured out into the wild, on Route 11, she was jumped by a level 47 Golduck on her first few steps into the tall grass. Just as the Golduck attempted to attack her, she was saved by her parents, who were both level 50 by then. She was taken back to the city, where she decided she would never ever battle. This decision caused her to never use any Battle Moves for any reason at all.
Seeing as she could not venture into the wild at such a young age nor avoid any danger, she decided she'd try to search for a home. Somewhere she can live in permanently, be safe, be happy, and not worry about being shunned by others as 'cruelly prejudicial' as her would-be trainer was.
Despite her search for a real home throughout the years, her only 'home' was whatever tree or shrub she could hide in or behind within the bounds of the city. She eventually decided that once she was brave and old enough to leave the city, she'd find a place to really call home. This became her lifetime wish.
She relayed this to her parents on one of their visits, and they agreed that they'd help her achieve that dream in whatever way they could. On her seventeenth birthday, her parents brought her some good news: There was a town called Pokette, not too far away, that was open for new residents. Overjoyed, Beth instantly made up her mind to move to this 'Pokette' town. With the help of her parents, she has managed to arrive to the town after several weeks of traveling.
- HOBBY: Painting/Drawing, something she'd do on the streets of Opelucid City with berries and whatnot to pass the time when her parents weren't there with her.
- JOB: N/A, but she's considering to become a professional artist.
- FAVORITE FOOD: Ramen
- FAVORITE BERRY: Hondew ((Her parents would steal berries from their trainer's bag to feed their daughter with. The Hondew berry became her favourite as it has a dry, bitter taste with a hint of spiciness.))
- CATCHPHRASE: Ruuu
- ACCESSORIES: Three piercings((1 gold knob earring in each piercing)) on the outer rim of both ears, Black choker with a silver star pendant, Black fingerless gloves.
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My application for #PKMN-Crossing . =w= I got tired so I didn't bother to shade it.
I chose Zorua since, at the moment, there aren't any in the group.
If you're wondering why her backstory is like that, with the breeding for a shiny and her being released due to being a normal, it's something that I've become extremely guilty of once I found out you could get shiny pokemon via breeding. OTL I breed the pokemon, hatch the eggs, and unless it's a pokemon I like a lot or is good for trading, I release any normal pokemon I get. Which can be A LOT depending on the egg rate. I'm horrible. OTL
I've always wondered what happen to them after I release them. I mean, these are baby level 1 pokemon. Newly hatched. And what about those released in an environment with high-level wild pokemon?((Like Beth's case?)) OTL ohgodi'msohorrible.
A lot of times, I return to somewhere that I hatched a such pokemon, and think about it. ((Hence in Beth's history, her parents got to visit her a lot.)) QMQ Ever since I realized how cruel I was really being, I began to train these non-shinies up to at least level 10, and release them in an environment suited for their level. It's true that I give certain aspects of games more thought than needed, but I can't help it. orz
So as a tribute for these level 1 pokΓ©mon that I released due to them being a non-shiny in whatever place they hatched, even at Victory Road and other places with pokΓ©mon whose levels might reach even level 60, I made Beth. ;-; As I said, I no longer do this, but I /did/ do it for a LONG time. orz And I'm sorry that I did.
(c) Me.
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Comments: 13
32Melody [2012-04-09 01:49:56 +0000 UTC]
Ah~ I love her historyyy
I also AM DISAPPOINTED ON HOW YOU TOOK CARE OF HER
I honestly don't see anything wrong! As a suggestion(meaning that you don't have to it lD) you could 'add' on how her nickname is Skippy. c:
But really, she just seems like a fine character~
I hope you make it in!
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Melanthriel In reply to 32Melody [2012-04-09 19:19:07 +0000 UTC]
Yay!
I didn't treat her like that! I'm not lucky enough to have a Zorua nor Zoroark! But I have done it to more common pokΓ©mon.. OTL
That's great! Haha, as I noted, I gave her the nickname because it's what my AC:WW character was nicknamed by the animals in the town. I can't remember the reason they said for it, since it's been about 3 years. XD I think it was because he could be seen like all over the town? I really don't remember. XD
Thank you!!
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32Melody In reply to Melanthriel [2012-04-09 20:22:31 +0000 UTC]
-pat-
Well, as long as your okay with it~
Oh, no problem! <3
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Melanthriel In reply to 32Melody [2012-04-16 01:51:15 +0000 UTC]
orz;
Yeah. XD I might edit it someday, though. <3
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MangoSno [2012-04-07 20:34:06 +0000 UTC]
I REALLY like the idea with the "breeding for shiny" history, so my only critique is that it's disappointingly short. D: I'm curious to know a little more about her, maybe her thoughts about the trainer that abandoned her? Did she go on a quest of tranquility and forgive him/her? Though it's awesome that her parents still stick around and visit her, so maybe that's why she doesn't dwell on the negatives in her past. Where'd she live and how did she make a living? Though her parents visited, could they provide for her and all that? Etc, etc. Just some ideas to maybe fuel up inspiration for fleshing out more of her history. |D
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Melanthriel In reply to MangoSno [2012-04-08 20:41:14 +0000 UTC]
Alright, I've fleshed out her history some more. You're free to read it if you'd like!
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Melanthriel In reply to MangoSno [2012-04-07 20:38:31 +0000 UTC]
I did mean to elaborate on her history, but I ran short on ideas and wanted to finish the app early so that I at least have something presentable when they actually open the join requests. XD But thanks a lot for that! I'll think about those points, and edit her history to include them when everything falls into place.
Thank you so much!
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xblaqkstarx [2012-04-07 19:54:57 +0000 UTC]
shes pretty ;;
your so mean to the pokemon but i do like the history D;
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Melanthriel In reply to xblaqkstarx [2012-04-07 19:59:19 +0000 UTC]
yay ;;
and OTL I KNOW. IM SORRY. I TOLD YOU, I GET THEM TO AT LEAST LV 10 NOW. QAQ
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