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Well, another page! It's kinda rushed toward the end, beginning to feel that the conclusion is drawing near and really want to finish it soonNext page: [link]
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gabrielsangel [2010-01-27 08:45:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh MAN! :glup: Come one Demyx! Think of something fast!
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moonymonster [2009-11-25 08:18:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh, don't rush it now! You'd cheat us all of a good conclusion if you rushed it, especially after all this time. Trust me, we're patient--and when it gets rushed, sometimes it gets sloppy, or the storytelling doesn't go as smoothly as desired. Please don't.
In other news, I like the page. Just wondering what Ariel's tail is doing in the last panel there. Waving hello?
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Meowen In reply to moonymonster [2009-12-15 20:03:49 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, thanks I'll try to not rush it.
Ariel's tail...well, I just figured I'd put it in there
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LightHelco [2009-11-24 15:04:43 +0000 UTC]
Demyx is awake! Now he can win Ursula and save his lover
Ariel expressin in the last pannel it is funny.
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Meowen In reply to LightHelco [2009-11-24 17:43:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Yep, Ursula better be ready to get her butt kicked
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NadsatBabushka [2009-11-24 05:44:52 +0000 UTC]
I like the fun movement too, haha. And Demyx in the last pannle, idk why I just like it.
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Meowen In reply to NadsatBabushka [2009-11-24 11:05:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! It was fun to draw him, all mud-splattered and stuff
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kitsuneluvuh [2009-11-24 01:39:56 +0000 UTC]
I love the fin movement in the first panel, and the expressions in the last two panels are very nice.
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Meowen In reply to kitsuneluvuh [2009-11-24 11:05:03 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I love to draw scared/creeped out expressions, they allow for some weirdness
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NanoElite666 [2009-11-24 01:25:29 +0000 UTC]
Cue Han Solo!
"I've got a baaaaaaaad feeling about this..."
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BecSparrow [2009-11-23 23:31:34 +0000 UTC]
LOVE that first panel Meo! the perspective is awesome! Ariel's all SWIMSWIMSWIM!! WHOOOOOOSH! 8D
Also her expression in the last panel is great!
Ursula's boobs are white in that fourth panel.. are they supposed to be? I'm just trying to help :3
Another awesome page <333
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Meowen In reply to BecSparrow [2009-11-24 10:59:41 +0000 UTC]
OMG, NO! No they're not, that's true- I usually colour her dress in the computer to save paint, but this time I screwed up Will have to fix that ASAP, thanks for pointing it out
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GoblinQueenSelene [2009-11-23 22:55:28 +0000 UTC]
Ariel looks like she has a propellor tail in that first panel.
It doesn't look good. Not good at all...
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Meowen In reply to GoblinQueenSelene [2009-11-24 11:03:34 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm, maybe I should've tried to 'bleach' it a bit by adding paint ton top of it to mark out what's the actual tail and what's just an 'aftershadow' of it? Thanks for the point, in any case.
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GoblinQueenSelene In reply to Meowen [2009-11-24 15:50:53 +0000 UTC]
When I said "not good at all" I was referring to the situation that Ariel and Demyx find themselves in, not the art. (didn't think I made that clear. sorry.)
That would be an interesting effect though.
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Meowen In reply to GoblinQueenSelene [2009-11-24 17:53:08 +0000 UTC]
I see I really thought you meant the tail movement because the 'skeddadle' effect (I don't know if that's the correct term) is a thing that often causes me problems when trying to add it in a comic
Well, in any case the misunderstanding got me thinking a little more about what I could do to make it look better yet in the future, so I'd say it was a good "moment of development"
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BecSparrow In reply to Meowen [2009-11-24 12:52:43 +0000 UTC]
I actually disagree with that comment. I think the propellor tail works really well
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