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mercurybird — Respectable Gents March tasks p1
Published: 2013-03-27 06:21:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1548; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 5
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task: go pose for Bud so he can trim a hedge to look like you
yaaaay
tried a new thing
downside: not enough color variety/contrast, hard to distinguish different shapes
upside: gjdfgjfdkgf omfg prettier than any comic I've ever made
thoughts????
edit; quickly decided to make a few little changes to make it clearer. thanks to Spike and Uruboros for the input. *u* to see the original version if you're curious, click here: [link]
another edit: added sir and pijums into one panel; wasn't sure if the sequence of events was clear so.
also I know I switched the colors of the roselia's flowers in one panel. too lazy to fix tbh
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It looks sunny and fun, like a brisk spring morning.
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perfect contrast for the upcoming mission 8 past weheheheheh
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dsgkdfkjgdfkgf this style. Is very cute and eeeee <333 Great job Mercury uvu
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It will be the most respectable gentlemen hedge in the entire garden :3
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if only things had gone quite according to plan. vwv welp now I guess it ended up just being the cutest hedge in the garden? good 'nough
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Mmmm yep :3 I'd say that's just fine
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It looks great but I guess what needs work is on refining the colors to better define things and give them more contrast and depth.
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I think using more layers would've helped :] allow me to separate out colors a bit more. thanks for the input!
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it is hard to tell whats going on, and the softness makes the paneling suffer a but, but yeah, you're right this DOES look gorgeous!
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I think I'll have to slow down and lay out flat colors a little better so the end colors come out more distinct xP good learning experience tho!
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maybe being a bit bolder with your shadows would help too. I notice that your darkest values are only in small places in most of these. But what do I know? haha
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oooh that's a good point, almost everything is pretty medium-valued hmmMMMMmmm
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