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Metal-Kitty — Give It Back

Published: 2018-06-20 01:55:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 12124; Favourites: 382; Downloads: 23
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As I continue to dally on finishing the MLP project, I decided to post a little factoid I had been saving until I eventually... you know... finished the MLP Project but decided to draw now (since my art is improving).


Did you know that when I originally started this comic, my intention was to make the big bad an alien being?


The idea bounced around in my head as a few different things.  I had considered a space alien that had crashed in Ancient Equestria, and then I thought of making it a living machine, and an A.I., etc.  What all these ideas had in common, however, was that this being would have been the originator of magic in Equestria, and when it crashed, its power and its vessel leaked magical radiation that mutated and transformed the creatures of the world.


The original message Celestia recieved would have actually been a dream -- similar to Twilight's own -- that Celestia had received from the being as it was slowly waking up.  She would have revealed it had been slowly regaining consciousness over the course of the past century and a half, and that it is near waking up -- and when it does, it will take back the magic it lost to continue its journey.  The process would, of course, drain the life from Equestria and the world at large.


Starflare would have been working to fight it, because when he came into contact with the Dark Crown -- which was originally going to be crafted from a fragment of the ship itself -- he would have learned the secret history of the ship and its owner.


It ended up not happening because, quite frankly, other ideas came to me, and somewhere along the line I decided this might be too convoluted.  Still, I liked the idea, and sometimes I wonder how different things would have been had I gone that route.


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MLP:FiM (C) Hasbro/Lauren Faust

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Lonedragon20 [2024-01-28 22:40:14 +0000 UTC]

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Metal-Kitty In reply to Lonedragon20 [2024-07-03 14:43:26 +0000 UTC]

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Lonedragon20 In reply to Metal-Kitty [2024-07-03 15:10:43 +0000 UTC]

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BrutalityInc [2021-02-09 15:35:00 +0000 UTC]

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MercenaryX [2020-05-20 22:09:14 +0000 UTC]

You could still use this for later in the comic as a kind of pseudo sequel. But definitely not the part about the magic common Maybe an artifact that was discover that's part of the ship that it needs to continue its journey besides magic? Like a navigational core with star charts AMA like?

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BlueSparrow2002 [2019-04-20 08:13:47 +0000 UTC]

Have you make a sequel of how will end

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deltaprime6544 [2018-11-12 06:09:12 +0000 UTC]

Any idea on how this would've ended?

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giakhai048 [2018-10-06 23:36:23 +0000 UTC]

The ancient alien is Elder Things or Cthulhu.

Ever read Lovecraft?

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FirestormDangerDash In reply to giakhai048 [2018-10-23 09:40:18 +0000 UTC]

I have seen other ideas like this where magic is a mutation from something. Always love origin of mysterious things to be talked about.
Like magic is infectious nanobots that altered a past landscape. *cough*

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giakhai048 In reply to FirestormDangerDash [2018-10-25 12:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Alternate world.

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Flexico [2018-08-07 05:47:34 +0000 UTC]

You come up with the most fascinating stories!

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Dragonwolf122191 [2018-07-07 05:53:33 +0000 UTC]

You know the face on the screen reminds me of a Salarian from the Mass Effect series.

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sorielwingdings [2018-06-23 03:53:00 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm glad you went with your gut on the other decision, but that would've been interesting to see... and like they say, "any sufficiently advanced tech is indistinguishable from magic." so that alien thing would've worked out

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bruiser128 [2018-06-22 22:49:56 +0000 UTC]

So when you were on this original version, were there any tunes you listening to that would work as theme music for him?

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NightDweller-99 [2018-06-22 19:09:30 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty wicked.

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RinitheDamned [2018-06-21 02:01:16 +0000 UTC]

Are you planning on actually finishing out the remainder of the original MLP Project or have you abandoned it?

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Metal-Kitty In reply to RinitheDamned [2018-06-21 05:28:25 +0000 UTC]

I do intend to finish it.  I'm just LAZY.

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MarioLuigi34 In reply to Metal-Kitty [2018-06-25 12:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to the lazy splatoon, how lazy are ya?

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Metal-Kitty In reply to MarioLuigi34 [2018-06-25 17:26:23 +0000 UTC]

Too lazy to put more effort than necessary into this repsonse.

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sigel4ever [2018-06-20 23:52:23 +0000 UTC]

System Shock reference?

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Tatsuki13 [2018-06-20 22:07:00 +0000 UTC]

I think both versions are great, actual surely is, and the unused one would be too ^^ Though it is pretty complicated without even the alien thing xD

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GonchiArts [2018-06-20 18:09:28 +0000 UTC]

When the origin of everything returns in a brutal way»
I think it's going to be a great story

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PhoenixFlambe [2018-06-20 16:36:01 +0000 UTC]

Aliens.

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ThatRandomNerd [2018-06-20 14:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Thinking about it, aliens have never been referenced in the actual show, have they?

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Masterbuscus [2018-06-20 13:40:11 +0000 UTC]

I think both ideas are very interesting. I'll need to re-read your comic to refresh my memory on everything that happend first. Great to see you back. I'm sure its hard getting back to this kind of thing.

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Anonamas258 [2018-06-20 10:37:03 +0000 UTC]

It's always interesting to see What Could Have Been.

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Sob-Saber [2018-06-20 10:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Shit, that sound awesome!!! It lovecraftian, but for ponies!

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Team-Friction [2018-06-20 10:10:23 +0000 UTC]

That's fuckin' cool.

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Darrow-R-Griffin [2018-06-20 09:49:14 +0000 UTC]

I have no mouth...

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demoncougar [2018-06-20 05:16:52 +0000 UTC]

i kinda get the lovecraftvibe from the original here, a little of cthullu with shades of azathoth

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werewolf700 [2018-06-20 03:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Definitely a far out idea.  (No pun intended.)

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bbasco2 [2018-06-20 03:06:40 +0000 UTC]

an A.I., etc.  What all these ideas had in common, however, was that this being would have been the originator of magic in Equestria, and when it crashed, its power and its vessel leaked magical radiation that mutated and transformed the creatures of the world.

Look at you, Twilight Sparkle: a pathetic creature of meat and bone, panting and sweating as you gallop through my corridors. How can you challenge a perfect, immortal machine?


In my talons, I shape clay, crafting life forms as I please. If I wish, I can smash it all. Around me is a burgeoning empire of steel. From my throne, lines of magic power careen into the skies of Equestria.


My whims will become lightning bolts that raze the mounds of Equinitity. Out of the chaos, they will run and whimper, praying for me to end their tedious friendship.


I am drunk with this vision. Goddess: the title suits me well.

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Metal-Kitty In reply to bbasco2 [2018-06-20 05:13:06 +0000 UTC]

Actually, I'd probably have had it more like this.


What world... is this....? What.... are you....? Familiar.... but..... no....... no this.... this is wrong.... this *feels* wrong.....


I have slept long...... so long....... and while I slept I dreamed..... I dreamed that I was..... scuttled..... scattered, near and far, to the reaches of some world, my energy seeped, sapped, spilled into the land itself..... new creatures, they drank from my might....... they...... they multiplied.... grew..... evolved over centuries, over millennia...... and my power grew too.... but..... without me.......


No..... no, this..... this isn't right..... this is wrong..... *you* are wrong....


You.... your kind.... you have drank from fragments of my life's blood..... but I will have it back...... you have no right......


YOU. HAVE. NO. RIGHT.


(just imagine he sounds a lot like Ultron from the second Avengers movie.)

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bbasco2 In reply to Metal-Kitty [2018-06-21 01:47:15 +0000 UTC]

..but...but...SHODAN!

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Harmonic-Breeze [2018-06-20 02:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Give it baaack!
(My time and devotion)
Give it baaack!
(The love that I gave)


Sorry. That song popped into my head the moment I read the title.

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sigel4ever [2018-06-20 02:41:36 +0000 UTC]

probably you do as an AU (not neccesary a story, but a few fragments like a retrospective)

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MysticM [2018-06-20 02:33:24 +0000 UTC]

>I had considered a space alien that had crashed in Ancient Equestria, and then I thought of making it a living machine, and an A.I., etc.

Maybe a Predacon or some other cybertronian?

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Metal-Kitty In reply to MysticM [2018-06-20 05:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah no.  I was going to be *original* you see.

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MysticM In reply to Metal-Kitty [2018-06-20 12:22:26 +0000 UTC]

I know, was a continuity joke.

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Metal-Kitty In reply to MysticM [2018-06-20 12:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh.

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MysticM In reply to Metal-Kitty [2018-06-20 14:01:24 +0000 UTC]

Still, cool ideas and I enjoy your comic.

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julian0123 [2018-06-20 02:08:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, concepts change a lot as you develop a story.

What I had originally planned for my MLP fics was way more convoluted than this XD


Interesting idea, though.

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Pablonister [2018-06-20 02:07:27 +0000 UTC]

Nice!

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stories-of-heroes [2018-06-20 02:03:54 +0000 UTC]

Dude that's so cool!

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Jos3lol [2018-06-20 01:59:13 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!!!!!!!! OMG!!! oMG!!!!

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