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Published: 2015-12-01 17:34:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 8422; Favourites: 371; Downloads: 117
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Description As she stood before her enemy, there was only one thought that ran and screamed endlessly within her. She had failed her. She had failed her princess, her forgiver, her twice mentor, her... friend. 

She had failed Celestia.

She should have been more vigilant. She should have been better prepared. She should have practiced that quick-casting technique she had observed being used by that upstart Trixie. She should not have dismissed the ravings of that ignorant brat that was the Guard Captain's sister. She should have been more skeptical. She should not have attributed the discrepancies to pre-wedding jitters. She should have made more effort to know the newest princess better, no matter how annoying she was with her constant plea for Sunset to socialize more, and embrace "the power of love". She should have been more observant. She should not have heeded her mentor's suggestion that Sunset relax and "enjoy the festivities and rest".

She had failed Celestia.

She had failed the one who had raised her up from her humble origins. She had failed the one who, even when Sunset had scorned her, wronged her, exiled herself to another world due to sheer spite, had reached out to Sunset, forgiven her wayward student, took Sunset back into the fold and back on course. She had failed the one who named Sunset Archmage of Equestria, entrusted her with the most sensitive and dangerous of duties, including re-sealing her own sister who came back for her throne after a thousand-year banishment, entrusted her with the lives of herself and all the ponies in the kingdom. She who only put off her royal mask when there was only her Archmage around. She who would never hesitate to lend her a hoof, or a smile.

She had failed Celestia, and allowed her guard down when one of the most dangerous of Equestria's foes was already known to be again at large.
Now, as her princess lay critically wounded on the floors of the Grand Hall, Sunset Shimmer, Archmage of Equestria was the only pony standing between the Monarch and Queen Chrysalis.

"My, my, if it isn't the Archmage. I have to say, I have to thank you for arresting Twilight Sparkle when you did, saved me the trouble of having to deal with her myself. Quite an insistent nag, wasn't she?"
"You will never touch her," said Sunset, her horn ablaze with magic second to nopony but Celestia herself, "not while I breathe."
"Well, in that case, you leave me with only one way to repay the debt. I'll make your end quick," said the changeling, whose face turned into a wicked smile before continuing, "and don't worry, I don't plan on hurting the princess any further; I have better uses for her, you see."

As the Queen advanced, Sunset steeled her resolve, and poured the rest of her magic reserves into the spell. She had no real hope of victory, nor escape, but she did have one final service to perform for Equestria, for her princess.

She was confident it would melt through Celestia's emergency defensive wards. She designed those herself, after all.



This piece was inspired by "Cutie Re-Mark", in particular the "Changeling Invasion" alternate timeline. This picture depicts Sunset Shimmer, who in my headcanon interpretation of that particular future was forgiven and called back into service by Princess Celestia to help her deal with Nightmare Moon's return, and when Chrysalis invaded Canterlot, made the same mistake as Celestia did and ignored Twilight Sparkle's warnings regarding Princess Cadance. As there is no Sonic Rainboom, Twilight in this future would not have made it into Celestia's school, and would have little to no special standing with either Princess Celestia or Sunset the Archmage.


This is my first colouration in a long while, and after it's done I... thoroughly regret making the decision to colour this. I have always known my colouring skills were lacking, but... this result is something I don't consider worth 5 hours of effort. I've a decision to make, now: either I find the time to practice colouring more, or I just stick to line art.

Line art this way: meto30.deviantart.com/art/Arch…
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Comments: 38

Stuntpony [2020-04-15 10:40:00 +0000 UTC]

Came back to the image, and read your comments. So... Mutual Assured Destruction, huh? I'd say that's bad judgement call. As long as you are enslaved - you have hope of escape because you're ALIVE. Turning half a planet into eternal frozen asteroid and another into literal eternal hell is... Well, not smart... There would be nobody alive to be freed after that.

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Sanluris [2018-08-03 04:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I'd love seeing more into that timeline. That's a great detail about the changed timeline. It'd be neat if Sunset came back....but I guess she's going to die here. Dang.

Do you think that when Twilight fixed everything that all those alternate timelines disappeared, or they kept going even after everything had been fixed? Zecora told Twilight that she knew that version of her (Zecora) wasn't supposed to exist, but I wonder if somehow the alternate timelines stayed. That'd be pretty grim if they did, and sad.

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Meto30 In reply to Sanluris [2018-08-03 10:02:07 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, I shudder to think of all the social changes that the extended war with Sombra would have caused Equestria. It's a nerve-wracking potentiality, if rather intriguing from a dark, grim curiosity perspective.

Aye, Sunset will probably die moments after her final, desperate "service" depicted in this scene. It would cause Chrysalis a lot of trouble though; just think about the loops she would have to go through to convince quite a number of very powerful unicorns to move the celestial bodies for her and burn out in the process... constantly, as long as she hopes to rule.

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Bloom3D [2018-07-09 04:08:02 +0000 UTC]

Pretty sure all of Equestria is getting obliterated if Sunset is in that situation ... shes just nuking everything out of existence 

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rosewitchcat [2018-01-06 23:47:19 +0000 UTC]

 

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TannMann64 [2017-04-08 02:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh dayunguh, crap's gonna go DOWN

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Malayhe800 [2016-04-13 19:40:09 +0000 UTC]

What was Chrysalis gonna do to Celestia? Did Sunset lose?

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Meto30 In reply to Malayhe800 [2016-04-15 06:00:53 +0000 UTC]

The implication is that 1) Chrysalis was planning on imprisoning Celestia indefinitely for her own purposes, and 2) Sunset is going to prevent that, by killing Celestia.

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Malayhe800 In reply to Meto30 [2016-04-15 18:07:38 +0000 UTC]

I like Sunset Shimmer more than Twilight. If Sunset stayed with Celestia, then maybe Celestia would assign Twilight to be Shimmer's student.

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Meto30 In reply to Malayhe800 [2016-04-17 09:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, she does have the age difference to her advantage, so I think that could happen. It would be interesting to see, seeing as they are so close in both age and interest. Especially in regards to shipping possibilities. /evilsmile

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bruiser128 [2016-02-23 19:57:21 +0000 UTC]

This is quite an interesting twist for Sunset.

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Meto30 In reply to bruiser128 [2016-02-24 16:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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bruiser128 In reply to Meto30 [2016-02-24 16:47:32 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.^^

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Jatheus [2016-01-13 05:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic! I love this!

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Meto30 In reply to Jatheus [2016-01-13 05:34:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I am glad that you love it.

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heathfiedler [2016-01-13 04:13:17 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful work n.n

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Meto30 In reply to heathfiedler [2016-01-13 04:42:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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heathfiedler In reply to Meto30 [2016-01-13 14:45:55 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome n.n

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ChaosPhantom444 [2016-01-12 15:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Looks good, love the way you expressed Sunset's emotions.

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Meto30 In reply to ChaosPhantom444 [2016-01-12 16:01:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! You are too kind.

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ChaosPhantom444 In reply to Meto30 [2016-01-12 16:04:35 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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DoughnutJoe [2015-12-03 11:19:35 +0000 UTC]

All those timelines in the finale raise so many questions about how they came about. I like this interpretation.

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Meto30 In reply to DoughnutJoe [2015-12-05 03:41:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you FimFiction is having a blast with all those alternate timelines, and I am enjoying this turn of events very much!

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jyroman53 [2015-12-02 19:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Aint ye touchin me favourite princess ya bloody BLOCKHEAD !

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Meto30 In reply to jyroman53 [2015-12-03 04:02:32 +0000 UTC]

Very true! Let us defend our Sovereign!

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jyroman53 In reply to Meto30 [2015-12-03 20:25:33 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSS !
*start firing grenade launcher*

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Hyena-Yena [2015-12-02 06:41:31 +0000 UTC]

The coloring looks fine to me. You did a wonderful job. Don't be so hard on yourself.

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Meto30 In reply to Hyena-Yena [2015-12-03 04:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, that's very sweet and kind of you.

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FralLeman [2015-12-02 04:35:07 +0000 UTC]

We saw how the lack of Rainbooms affected the mane 6...but who else did it affect?  Nice picture, and story!

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Meto30 In reply to FralLeman [2015-12-03 03:59:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I do plan on making a comic that explores what could've happened in each of the AUs to have resulted in what we saw in Cutie Re-Mark, setting up my headcanons in the process.

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FralLeman In reply to Meto30 [2015-12-03 04:23:06 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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Aurora-Chiaro [2015-12-02 01:00:04 +0000 UTC]

That came out very lovely, especially with colour

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Meto30 In reply to Aurora-Chiaro [2015-12-02 01:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That means a great deal to me, coming from you, Aurora

That said, you have to admit, the colouration is just bare bones on this piece. I don't know what I was thinking when I decided to colour it myself, especially since the picture is one of my more ambitious ones. I probably should work on some of the tamer ones so I get the hang of colouring, first.

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UnstableSun69 [2015-12-02 00:05:06 +0000 UTC]

Quite a nice piece. Also enjoyed the story with it.

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Meto30 In reply to UnstableSun69 [2015-12-02 00:53:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! You're too kind.

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DuplexFields [2015-12-02 00:01:39 +0000 UTC]

This was a gutwrenching piece, a delight to read.  Thank you for the worldbuilding and the headcanon added.

Also, I like the coloring.  Cartoonishly flat, yet preserving sketchiness of the line art. Reminds me of Disney's Robin Hood.

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Meto30 In reply to DuplexFields [2015-12-02 00:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! It's been a pleasure; at least the line art and description-writing parts were.

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