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Published: 2004-01-14 11:44:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 44
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page 4. okay. seriously. need critic. if its not stuff to be published say so... atleast im not wasting my time
see the first page for blablas [link] ... and check the other pages also...
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Well.. I think the story is allright, but it seems to be in a sketch-phase. It would look a lot better if you inked and/or colored the pages.
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well... i kinda hoped that i could get some feedback so that when i make the final version i dont need to make the changes into that stage... so far ppl havent even noticed those stuff that iv noticed to be wrong... i have to say that im a bit dissapointed
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Hmm.. well.. people have different standards. Specially for themselves o.o
I think it looks ok, but it would look better with more detailed background.
And the story is ok... but so far it's not the most original story. But I like the way it's told, so that's ok ^-^
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not that i know . i like the style of writing, very maxpayne :]
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thanks... anything you would change / alter here?
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i like it its got a whole detetive film thing about it lol kind reads like max payne
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hmm some people might think so but i have not read many like this if any lol
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