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Published: 2016-08-22 16:37:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 9036; Favourites: 259; Downloads: 205
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Description Updated version of of my FemShep commission from bearcub . Now with officer's stripes!

Commadore Akiko Jane Shepard holding her M-5 Phalanx Pistol, ready to breach and clear after discovering trespassers in her apartment! The Phalanx was always one of my favorite pistols in the series, even though it was only available through DLC in ME2. It looks and functions like the type of pistol a sci fi special forces commando would actually use.


Cmdre Shepard has been pushing hard for many Military reforms, both for the Alliance and the Galaxy at large, since the Reaper War. Due to her efforts, the Alliance is now reinstating the old multiple military branch system, with a Navy, an Army and a Marine Corps, all now becoming separate organizations.

The Army will primarily play a defensive role protecting Alliance planets on the ground (though some planets will undoubtedly have Marine bases on them as well) and only occasionally deploy for offensive operations when it is determined that large scale mobilization is necessary. Except for a few specialized units, general Army training is not quite as grueling or intense as it is for the Marines, nor is marksmanship as much of a priority. They will also have (though budget limitations for this are a concern) many squadrons of in-atmosphere and space worthy (but non FTL capable) fighters and bombers making up their infantry corps. That way, in the event that a planet is cut off from Naval reinforcements for a long period of time while under attack, the enemy will not have complete control of orbit or the air.

The Navy will pretty much play the same role it always has, patrolling Alliance territory and being the first responders whenever a world sends out a distress signal, only deploying in mass in the event of full scale war. In addition to a detachment of Marines, all vessels will now have at least one good sized unit of the new Space Troopers, Naval soldiers specifically trained and equipped to board enemy vessels as well as repel boarders themselves.

Finally, the Marines will be the second responders in the event of a mass enemy raid on an Alliance world. The Navy secures orbit and the Marines go groundside to help the local Army forces (who optimistically haven't been wiped out) mop up. They also have several small flotillas of frigates, destroyers and light carriers, making them ideal for quick but hard strikes into enemy territory as well as aiding the Navy in scouting uncharted systems. In addition, many of the Alliance's more isolated deep space military facilities prefer to use the better trained Marines for protection rather than basic Army or Navy security units. The more strategically vital of these facilities usually get their request granted.
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Markus456 [2020-06-15 08:07:34 +0000 UTC]

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RoxyIvanov [2016-11-09 19:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Spell Commander right and this one can go into my group , there is nothing that says she's married.

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 06:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Um, I didn't misspell "Commander." "Commodore" is an actual military rank.
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Commodor…

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 19:17:48 +0000 UTC]

Then your work will never be in my group. You didn't spell it right, Commander is 'Commander'. Commodore is a military rank, but they shouldn't be anywhere near it. It's Commander Shepard, not Commodore Shepard. If you want her to be high up, put her/him as Admiral. Or have her/him in prison, because she would have been placed in prison after 3 if they had survived after 3, they would have been placed in maximum security prison, like where Jack was because of everything they have done, but she is a hero so they would have stripped her of her rank. And an Admiral would not be in battle, so she would have left the Normandy and the military.

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Markus456 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2020-06-15 08:05:31 +0000 UTC]

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 19:47:52 +0000 UTC]

What if sent you the original artists's works whom I commissioned? They have none of my backstory, just the art. Would you allow them in?

   
 
 Mikesw123 -MassEffect trio by Avionetca

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 19:48:57 +0000 UTC]

So long as none of them are married to someone they aren't supposed to be, and Commodore is not in it, yes, I wouldn't mind it.

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 19:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Cool. That's why I asked.

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 19:50:50 +0000 UTC]

That's okay Just took a look, and yeah, they could be placed in there

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 19:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Much obliged!

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 19:52:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for being considerate about my group

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 19:54:44 +0000 UTC]

You might also want to check out Mass Effect Ladies as well!  
mass-effect-ladies.deviantart.…

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 19:55:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh I will check that out, it might have been one of those that didn't accept my work though

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 19:57:19 +0000 UTC]

Groups can be weird like that sometimes. They'll let one of your requests expire one time but then accept or even request it other times.

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 20:00:56 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it is one of the ones that wouldn't take any of my work. It wouldn't take my fanfic/crossover of Mass Effect That's why I have my own groups. But weird stuff happens on mine, that I don't want. Like people demanding things of me, like the people who were demanding I stay cannon in the group I will try and make it so it's not completely cannon though, because I'm not getting many members or people putting stuff into my group

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 20:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Mass Effect Ladies has excepted pretty much everything I've submitted but then again, I've never submitted anything literary. Perhaps it's simply a matter of making sure you submit it to right category. Many group admins are sticklers for that cause it's a big help in organization. They usually put that in the rules up front.

That reminds me, you really should put up a list of rules in the front page for your group. That way people won't submit something non canon cause they way it looks right now, more people will keep making the same mistakes I did.

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 20:14:51 +0000 UTC]

Your work is good though, mine at the moment is just my story I always submit to the right thing, usually. I think maybe they want me to put it in crossovers, if they have a folder for that Oh, and I have just edited my rules so that you should be able to put your stuff in my group without people being asshole's now. I hope. I'm fed up with people being like that when I have non cannon stuff, which will be going in that group. That's why I created it, so that people could upload anything Mass Effect in there. I still won't let in any rank but Commander for Shepard though.

I have been meaning to do my rules, but because of these people, I have wanted to wait until I have it under control. I will be doing those now though Just going to go do my rules now that things are under control. I will put a rule stating 'You may put non cannon things in this group, except ranks above Commander for Shepard'. Okay?

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 20:16:35 +0000 UTC]

And "marrying characters who shouldn't be married" too, right?

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 20:16:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, forgot about that one

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 20:19:49 +0000 UTC]

Happy to help!

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 20:21:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, the rules are done now, I think

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 20:27:03 +0000 UTC]

Cool. One question about your Tomb Raider group. Is that all about the recent games or can older incarnations of Lara be submitted as well?

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 20:38:31 +0000 UTC]

All games, from 1996 - Present Anything Lara basically

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 20:44:54 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Call me a "silly male," but I do love me my bare midriff Lara from Angel of Darkness, Legend and Underworld!  

Also, I have to point out that the number one rule of my group is that submitted female characters must be wearing outfits that actually display there midriffs. I accepted the two of yours that fit but had to reject the others.

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 20:49:14 +0000 UTC]

You just named the three games I love the best

Sorry, I got too excited That's okay. I would do the same as you know if you uploaded something to my group I will make sure to only upload when their midriff is showing

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Mikesw1234 In reply to RoxyIvanov [2016-11-11 20:51:21 +0000 UTC]

Good to hear! 

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RoxyIvanov In reply to Mikesw1234 [2016-11-11 20:54:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah  

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marcoasalazarm [2016-09-05 05:28:13 +0000 UTC]

I like everything, including the apparent laser sight on the gun.

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Mikesw1234 In reply to marcoasalazarm [2016-09-21 22:24:52 +0000 UTC]

The Phalanx was my favorite pistol in the game.

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PersephoneLux91 [2016-08-25 14:33:52 +0000 UTC]

Love this!!!

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Mikesw1234 In reply to PersephoneLux91 [2016-08-25 14:40:16 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad!

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