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Published: 2013-01-20 22:03:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 674; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 2
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Blaaahhh horrible drawing is horrible!I thought it would look better by the end but EHHHHH
i LOVE how Aurora looked, but the shadow of Vigil and a syringe is BLAHHHH i dont like it....
but its a good idea right?
if it doesnt fit the group ill remove it, cause im not 100% sure if this would work for a history/backstory for Aurora, but i hope it does!
Basically, if you cant tell, Aurora is half regular shinx/half elemortal
Some parts of her is colored normal and others, like part of her face, is full of Xenon, her element
So thats why her one eye is yellow, along with her other ear part, its slowly turning into Xenon
Same with her tail, and all of her fur, but the shinx fur is only slightly darker then Auroras fur color
Hope you like it! i worked somewhat hard on it :3
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This piece is interesting. I read the description so the character clearly has some back story. However I am going to critique this for just the art itself. I think that overall, this piece is very good. But, there are some slight changes that could be made. I read in the description that there is supposed to be a syringe in the picture. That object above the character is what i assume is the syringe. That does not look like a syringe at all. I is very fuzzy as well. However, the syringe is a key part of what is going on in the scene, and not being able to tell what that object is takes away from the piece. Next I will say that the caption underneath is unnecessary and distracts from what you want the viewer to focus on, which is the art in this case. The shadow above the pokemon is an interesting detail, but i think the shading takes away from the pokemon, which is what you should really be focusing on. Lastly, in the description, I read that you said that you were not satisfied with this piece, which is why i gave you a lower score on vision. You clearly struggled with yourself and the piece while creating it, and I feel that you first should have been satisfied that you wanted to make it before you made it. If you really wanted to add the text, then i would suggest a speech or thought bubble, because that adds to the drawing without taking away from it.
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Thank you soo much!
i do, however, would like to point out something
I made the syringe and outline of the person fuzzy because its like a shadow over Aurora, sorta a creepy concept that i failed at
also the syringe is colored because her element is being injected into her, and its Xenon, a very light element
and i was going for an anime scene, thats why i didnt have a speech bubble :I
but all in all, thank you so much for telling me your opinion, that way my next drawing can be even better :3
thank you :3
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no problem, i guess that is how anime is and i understand what you were trying to do with the outline and syringe. Glad to be of assistance.
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novastar: ALL THE MORE REASON WHY ALL HUMANS MUST BE DESTROYED!!!!....how do I break her out?
snakeman: fail
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snakeman: he doesn't even know how to open doors XD
novastar: yeah I do!!! >: ( ....ummm......*slashes through a door* ummm see....opened it
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awesome, i like how its spelled and pronounced lol and the color is pretty
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yeah I don't know the colour but its still my fave
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Mimi can you take it out the group and then send it in again to the folder "daily life" it will not let me accept anything in there with out two people.
Also very nice this looks great, I like how you did the shadow
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okay i will :3
and thank you :3
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Mimi get on Skype ;D Your gonna love what you see.
>8D BUT COOL.
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Oh she is, well sorta XD at least she wasnt one of the ones that died!
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phew! she's too adorable to die
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XD hahahaha i guess thats what saved her then :3
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YAY FOLKS! SHES BACK YALL!
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Hey Hey =w=;
This is really outstanding! X3
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