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C-No1 [2017-11-20 16:27:35 +0000 UTC]

A little thank you note

Hey Guys it's my 3rd Anniversary on DeviantartJust wanted to thank all my watchers and fans for all you guys help
I want to also thank Chairman-of-VCWE for 1st)Giving me an opportunity to write for him 2nd)Not suing me for the copy-righted material  3rd)helping me create my own company, and 4th)collaborating with me
SonicPal for doing my first collab and making my star Goku Black Famous
minalhan for being one of my first friend on deviantart (and for not blocking me for being an internet troll)
FWAWrestling for taking some of my Collision wrestlers off me
All the people who have started watching me for my actual art
mayydayy for consideri

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milfordweeks [2017-10-11 17:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Naughty book flank...  Miss Cheerilee and her paddle...  Good things coming!

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milfordweeks [2017-10-11 17:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Cheerilee paddle, bookflank til purple...  good idea!   

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cartoon-girl-2010 [2017-06-16 20:35:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow...didn't see that coming....hope to see more installments soon 8)

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MalortComics [2017-06-10 05:01:33 +0000 UTC]

C bon !

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bluesky000000 [2017-05-04 23:22:10 +0000 UTC]

Yay! I so glad that the Mina is back and making comics! Wait- .... Ish that Eaststern?

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spanks4memories [2017-04-30 02:06:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow Dragonglare's magic is strong. This could be interesting but I am a little skeptical of the direction you are taking your comic with this new page. I feel as though it will be hard to fit spankings in. With EastStern transformed like this and stuck in Ponyville.

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LemmiwinksGerbilKing [2017-04-27 21:13:09 +0000 UTC]

I was right! Though I predicted only half of it...
Looks like it has A LOT of potential! Hope the next update will appear sooner then this one. ^^ It surely is too promising to wait!

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AnonWesker [2017-04-27 17:37:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh my...

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Scarlet-Sabre [2017-04-23 21:23:08 +0000 UTC]

Season 3.... here at last! ^__^ Mina, you have longer hiatuses than MLP sometimes hon! But we still wait for you to come back because you're worth the wait. X3

Ooooh, you decided to give Easty a Blank book as a cutie mark instead of a blank flank.... Interesting choice hon, and very symbolic! I'm going to be looking at that cutie mark closely as the pages and story goes on, to see if it changes... as the story is written, and the book is closed on this chapter. ^_^

Meeting Cheerilee right away is a good thing for Easty, she's the right mixture of disciplinarian and structure-giver thanks to being a schoolteacher, and caring, compassionate pony.... she's a good role model for Easty, especially since she viewed her subjects as her children who need discipline sometimes! v_v

I like her manestyle, its a nice change and I get the feeling that it's just Easty's natural hair without her hairpieces in... no more palace guards to do the royal locks for her! And the overlap of different coloured YAAAYS was a nice touch hon! Your English may need a bit of help, but your sense of storytelling definitely doesn't. ^_^

I'm eager to see where this goes, hon, don't keep us waiting too long for the next page... and Easty... be prudent. V__V 

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CerinHero2000 [2017-04-23 21:18:08 +0000 UTC]

didn't see that coming 

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chrisrox110 [2017-04-23 20:02:22 +0000 UTC]

here we go

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TheCuriousKit [2017-04-23 19:11:59 +0000 UTC]

Ooo, so this is an interesting development, Miss Mina. *wonders if I can be a maths teacher for little EastStern!!  Strap ahoy!*

- Panel 1: "Here your chance." - should be "Here's your chance."

- Panel 5: "I never seen that place before." - wrong tense.  Should be "I've never seen this place before."

- Panel 6: "And don't forget your homeworks!" - should be 'homework' rather than 'homeworks'.

- Panel 8: "Do something for you?" - might be better as "Do you need something?"

- Panel 8: "Am I lost." - since it's not a question, it should be "I am lost.", or just "I'm lost."

- Panel 9: "Yo'ur in Ponyville" - should be "You're in Ponyville" (gives you a little sneaky spank for that oh so common mistake!)

- Panel 9: "About 450 ponies lives here." - should be 'live'.  With verbs, you actually drop the S with plurals.

- Panel 9: "This is also the town of the Princess Twilight." - I might drop the second 'the' and change 'town' to 'home' so it reads "This is also the home of Princess Twilight".

- Panel 9: "My name is Cheerilee. Can I know who you are?" - seems a very unnatural way to ask someone's name.  I might just say "My name is Cheerilee; what's yours?"


*suddenly realises what he just did to you, and looks at you nervously*

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windmilllurker333 [2017-04-23 18:06:37 +0000 UTC]

And here is Easty's chance to start over again ! A clean slate, an empty page....
A blank book. 
^__^

At least she's not a blank flank, that would be very embarrassing for a full grown mare to be practically NAKED in public ! And poor Cheerilee, those naughty children never seem to obey properly. Hmmmm.....
Will the amnesiac Easty become a school teacher ? A substitute school teacher ?
A hall monitor ?
o3o

No Unicorn horn and no Pegasus wings, that makes her an Earth pony. So she's lost magic and flight, that leaves only strength and personality. 
You know what might fix amnesia ? Codfish Oil ! Or....or....hot Pumpkin Soup ! Or.......
*GothyMoon frantically searches through the medical section of the library* >_<

I wonder who else Easty will meet on this first day of the rest of her forgotten life ? 
*Contemplates strangling DragonGlare* >:

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spankingmaster [2017-04-23 17:59:59 +0000 UTC]

princess eastern, i'll help you remember who you are!!

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Quillwrite7x [2017-04-23 17:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, well she did kind of ask for this in a sense.  Good Luck.

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Mardozer725 [2017-04-23 17:18:23 +0000 UTC]

*Walks in and picks up the last two comic pages and slides them into the appropriate folder before leaving to put them in the archives I hold*

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MidoriKuroba [2017-04-23 17:11:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm not in shock, but, it is a rather unexpected twist. So we're opening up the third arc of your story with a sort of clean slate. She's not an alicorn princess, she's not in her homeland, she's not anypony. She's got no name, but oddly enough she has a cutiemark. How very interesting. I guess this would be an easier way to teach the stubborn pony about friendship. By having her experience a new life where it's easier to do. Hmm, I wonder if she's still spanking obsessed though? Did she retain that I wonder.

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