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Published: 2012-11-20 14:41:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 699; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 17
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I have to make an underwater scene as homework for school, I'm pretty happy with it so far, although it is not yet finished, I plan to add some vegetation, add some more details or some ruins, and texture those damn sharks and tweak them a bit. and I'm not satisfied with the water shader.made with 3ds max-vray-ps
any form of criticism, advise or comment would be greatly appreciated!
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Hey, I also made a water scene few years ago, btw it tend to be more scifi environment 
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Underwater doesn't really look like that so I hope you plan on improving this. The scene is very interesting so I'm looking forward to seeing it finished!
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thanks ^^ but could you be a bit more specific on how I can improve it ?
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Based off a few underwater pictures I found on the net: [link] , [link] , [link] . First off, your water is too green. The sand is too saturated and should take more global illumination from the water. Same for the assets, they should take more global illumination for the water. The assets on the background are ok but the foreground ones aren't. Also I think you'd want to make your assets a bit lighter because, underwater, if we don't see them quite well, it's because they are blurry not because they are too dark. Your god-rays should be more concentrated on the middle of the scene instead of being all over the place and should be stronger.
That's pretty much all I can think of for now. I hope it helps.
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You will never be happy with the water shader... that's why I hate 3D water... it's never perfect.
The scene so far looks good, a little texture, some more ruins... I like your ideas.
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thanks man ! hopefully can i get it to look a bit better ^^
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This is beautiful, just like looking into an aquarium! Your 3D modeling is exquisite. And that chest of gold is staring deep into my soul.
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thank you ^^ i'm pretty happy with that chest.
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