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xaanist [2018-07-09 03:08:46 +0000 UTC]

i love this so much, and i really love your art so much in general aa

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KinoDiamondblack [2018-04-23 20:48:26 +0000 UTC]

buddy I can totally feel ya 
Today In Florida A 100% chance of rain 
so SkateBoarders look out 

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Dev807v [2018-04-23 13:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Hello, I'm Deviosa.
-i know my name is thedeviantartist07v- but I go by Deviosa.
Im commenting on your artwork today, because I find it interesting and emotional. I would like to give some valuable feedback on your work.

Alright, So first off. Nice tone. Dark and depressing. 
The rain and the lack of colour and the dark background make the whole scene dark and depressing. Another thing is her facial expression. It shows a lot of internal pain. Like to me, it looks like keeping a grin on her face while shes internally screaming in agony as she tries to process the loss of her daughter. Fantastic. I love the tone you've set for this artwork and her facial expression. However, there are a few small things I want to point out. When I first looked at this peice, I didn't fully understand why she was upset, until I read the description and then it made sense, but I think you shouldn't have to explain why this character is upset. It would have made a more emotional impact if you showed the reason why the character was depressed. What I mean is, I think you should have had her daughter in the drawing with her. Maybe like have her holding her daughter in her arms. I know it's cliche but adds more emotional impact to your viewer. Another thing I want to address is the legs. How come she's facing toward but her legs aren't? Her legs and feet should be pointed forward. Just sayin. Anyways, overall, I think this piece is pretty good. Just fix the legs yo. 

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OrmeEstur [2018-04-23 08:40:03 +0000 UTC]

For starters, I just have to say that this is one of your better emotional pieces. I feel like your pieces generally evoke emotions very well and this is no exception. You can really tell that she is depressed over something serious before reading the description. Also, the rain effect is really nice. The way the water bunches up here might not be very realistic, but it is visually pleasing and adds a cool level to this piece. Also, the detail with the clothing here is still simple but also looks awesome for the piece. There are a few things that I would recommend improving. For starters, and I know that this is something often seen in your pieces, I feel like your eyes could use a tad more consistency. In addition to this, while I do not particularly mind the simplistic background, I feel like that could be improved a tad and still fit in. Still, awesome piece as usual!

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Dr-Ryuu [2018-04-23 02:11:39 +0000 UTC]

I love all the techniques you used to make this emotional! The rain,  the make-up, the eyes, her posture, the fact that she's standing alone on the side of the street, and even the lack of color all make for a heavy scene.  Which is hard to do for cuter characters! (I think the style is cute :3)  I definitely see someone who's overwhelmed by grief.  For someone who's daughter died, I'd say this is a really good piece. Great work! I think if I had to pick something to critique, it would be the fact that her entire body is facing towards you but her legs are sideways.  But something like that is always opinionated, it depends on what you want

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