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This...is not complete.Don't comment as if it's finished..
It's painful.
YOU.
I need help finishing this..
because I never drew anyone lying down,
yet in that position.
Any advice?
And also, I noticed that Joy's position look as if she can fall backwards, so I need help on that as well without changing everything.
Anything that would help this thing finish, comments, anything? D:
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How did THIS happen?
Kai's POV.
Ok, you see, I was coming home innocently, and then I saw that firey mare standing at the doorway.
"What's up, slut?" I asked. I was even nice enough to show her my ultra sex smile.
And you know what she did?
She grabbed a knife and chased me around that house
like.. lilke.. that thing from the movie "Scream."
After awhile, she threw the knife at me from behind, and it almost hit me. I thought I was about to die. Seriously, it's not fun.
We were in the kitchen, and she grabbed a rolling pin from the counter, and a saltshaker.
She threw the saltshaker and me, and I sidestepped to dodge it.
How pathetic. The stupid piece of glass was a distraction.
And then where I stood, she dashed up to me, and delivered a kick to my head.
Unfortunately, I was standing near the wall, so the kick also made the back of my head clashed onto the wall.
I fell on my shoulder, nearly unconscious.
You know, I never noticed how clean the floor was. It's scary.
Anywho, she climbed on me, like that gray-haired dude did to that lady with huge-polygons in FF7:AC.
And then she was beating the living fuck out of me with that stick. It seemed like forever.
After a few thousand hits, she got up, and kicked my side REALLY hard.
"What the fuck, slut?" I yelled, feeling really dizzy.
"Who the FUCK told you, you can mess with my cat?!"
"What the fuck is a kat?!"
"Don't FUCK with me! I know what you've been DOING!"
"OK, I'M SORRY! I'M SORRY I BLEW OFF YOUR MONEY ON THE STRIPPERS!"
"YOU WHAT?! YOUR GONNA FUCKING PAY!"
"Wait, what? But seriously, I DIDNT touch your kat! Whatever the fuck that is!"
"I said, dont FUCK WITH ME! You're cat-dealing behing my back... yea, I saw you."
"YOU WHAT?!"
"I saw you... yea.. you were holding my dear kitty..AND THEN YOU JUST GAVE IT AWAY!"
"What?! When was this?!"
and it goes on and on and on...
Until Amaya and Silentia came home from the vetenarian with... what do you know.. Joy's cat.
Feeling stupid, and out of joy, she beated up.. Kai. Again.
He suffered no more than a broken arm and a few bruises..
So it's all good...
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Comments: 12
chicken-stir-fry [2008-07-23 18:03:16 +0000 UTC]
You could redo her right leg so that her right knee is on the ground, so she could have ... leverage or whatever.
That's the best way I can think of if you don't want to change the picture too much.
:'D
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mirrorofmystics In reply to chicken-stir-fry [2008-07-29 19:52:30 +0000 UTC]
mm..
Miss lil Demo said the same thing..
I'LL DO IT!:'D
afteridothisonething..
thank you for the advice~ ^ ^
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mirrorofmystics In reply to MsHam [2008-07-29 19:54:12 +0000 UTC]
...
sooo...wrong... >.>
I could understand why though. xD
I went to THS today for the regristration packet,..
AND I DIDNT SEE MY DARLIN HAMMY D:
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MsHam In reply to mirrorofmystics [2008-08-05 04:10:02 +0000 UTC]
IM SORRY SWEETIE
But I wait for it to come to me >W<
School is too soon..
*weep*
But thats okay!
I hope we have a class together. c:
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IcAnNoTfInDaNaMe [2008-07-22 15:13:51 +0000 UTC]
girl. i wish i did people!!!! lol. i dont know how to help! but your shading thus far is aMaZiNg!
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cubegirl [2008-07-22 04:08:24 +0000 UTC]
sorry i cant help you D:
lol, beat that cat napper good Joy!
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Getemono [2008-07-22 02:31:21 +0000 UTC]
hm...the positioning is tricky. i'd say to make the legs slightly bent; keep it entirely on the defense. the top leg should overlap the other, in my opinion. hope that helps...
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mirrorofmystics In reply to Getemono [2008-07-29 20:05:31 +0000 UTC]
I see what your saying.
I'll try that. ^o^
Thank you~
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Getemono In reply to mirrorofmystics [2008-07-30 07:17:01 +0000 UTC]
anytime, just make sure you post that finished piece; i'm interested.
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