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Published: 2014-01-22 02:17:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 103; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description you throw out your journal
and stop introducing yourself

and stay up for days
and avoid the train

and say you forgive them
and cry when someone
touches your neck
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Comments: 4

i-am-a-bridgewalker [2014-02-07 03:24:05 +0000 UTC]

wow this killed me and I'm not even sure why.


this poem is like a perfect shape of negative space that gives you the outlines of a faceless tragic reality. I dunno, you picked the perfect moments in the perfect sparseness. it hurts.

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missingnumbers In reply to i-am-a-bridgewalker [2014-02-19 10:03:06 +0000 UTC]

wow, thank you. i'm glad the poem was so effective.

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Awasteof-paint [2014-02-02 16:41:09 +0000 UTC]

this is simple but it hurts in a soft way. if i were to offer some advice, i would try taking some of the 'and's out. other than that, this is really lovely.

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missingnumbers In reply to Awasteof-paint [2014-02-05 07:40:56 +0000 UTC]

thank you that is very encouraging and also helpful!

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