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Published: 2014-05-17 06:08:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 249; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description
messages on facebook wallsto friends no longer alive
chemical dependency
and voices
in electricity
why can't i believe
people leave
with us gone, traffic lights
would still change
on empty streets
windshields cracking
sitting in your room
the sixth hour
waiting for sleep
wanting to put your heart
in someone else's chest
to speak into them
the meanings of red
known only to you
trying to cry
your face remains
the surface
of a lake
still
praying under your breath
computer light
and moon light
cracks in your skin
rain in a spiderweb
going nowhere
because nowhere
is enough
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Comments: 4
SmokyVisions [2014-06-13 22:09:12 +0000 UTC]
This is too good. I wish I had written this. Along with the previous of your poems I read. No need to be insecure, rather to walk with head high and a smug grin!
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ghostinafog [2014-05-17 18:57:04 +0000 UTC]
saw the title, thought it would be one of those post postmodern things (which i love,) was mistaken, still enjoyed it.
anyways the connection between the title and the poem isn't clear until you read the description so maybe you could tweak that
please don't delete this because
trying to cry
your face remains
the surface
of a lake
still
and other wonderful things. and lindsay lohan. if i were you i'd keep lindsay lohan in there somewhere anyway
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missingnumbers In reply to ghostinafog [2014-05-20 08:03:42 +0000 UTC]
thank you thank you, this is really helpful
i'm so glad you liked the poem
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