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Finally! Finished this a few days ago. This is Alta, my oracle dragon OC from Tears of an Oracle. And all his artifacts, of course.Here's his bio:
[Warning: Spoilers for those who have not finished reading Tears of an Oracle, all of which can be found on my fanfiction.net account]
Alta - The main antagonist and mad oracle
Gender: Male
Element: None
Age: 14
Family: Alta was raised among a tribe of Oracle dragons. His mother and father are both deceased, killed by Maleforβs apes when he was much younger. As a hatchling, Alta was more attached to his mother than his father; however, the dragon he was closest to was his older brother, Lumis. Lumis practically raised Alta, and Alta always looked up to and envied his older brother. When the apes killed his parents, Alta believed Lumis to be dead too, and afterwards he slowly went insane, forgetting that he ever really cared about his family. Only in his final moments did Alta realise just how much he missed them.
Friends: As a hatchling, Alta had few friends. He was very shy and always clung to his brother. As a result, he never really bonded with the other dragons in his clan. Eventually his entire clan was destroyed by the apes, and Alta was left alone and friendless.
Personality: Altaβs personality was drastically different after he had his Vision to how it was before. As a young hatchling he was shy, inquisitive and eager to learn. He eventually grew braver and cockier, but always envied his older brother and wanted to be like him. He was a very stubborn young dragon after he got over his shyness, and never gave in without a fight. Nothing made him happier than playing with his brothers. He often found his parents to be rather stifling and boring.
After Alta suffered the vision of the end of the dragon race, his demeanour changed drastically. He became disturbed and unstable, often suffering violent nightmares and fits of aggression. At times he would break down in tears and attack things without reason. Often he was on the verge of panic. His older brother was the only one who could calm him somewhat. Eventually, after the death of his entire clan and family, Alta came to accept his vision and longed for it to be fulfilled. He became calm and emotionless, and took to painting on the walls to relieve any locked up emotions. Some of his old traits returned: his stubbornness, curiosity, and even his sense of humour. He became very cold in his solitude.
Only after he realised his vision would never be fulfilled did Alta return to his disturbed and unstable state, eventually ending his own life.
Artifacts: Alta's tribe specialized in creating artifacts to benefit themselves and other dragons. During ToaO, Alta uses a variety of these artifacts:
- Oracle Helm: A helm that magnifies Alta's oracle powers, allowing him to see things moments before they happen.
-Invisibility Tail Ring: A ring made from a very rare type of spirit gem, that allows the wearer to turn invisible at will.
-Telekinesis Horn Rings: Rings worn on the horns that allow the bearer to move animate and inanimate objects using telekinesis.
-Speed Anklets: Anklets that, when worn, increase the bearer's speed tenfold.
-Poison Claws: A pair of metallic claws imbued with deadly poison. Worn on the forepaws, and are deadly enough to kill with a single scratch.
Alta's artifacts, excluding the Poison Claws, were all destroyed by Spyro during their final battle.
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Comments: 35
GoldenGriffiness [2014-07-27 14:38:35 +0000 UTC]
I actually sorta think he's adorable in this picture XD
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to GoldenGriffiness [2014-07-27 18:18:30 +0000 UTC]
He looks small and kinda pudgy... I guess adorable is an apt description.
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GoldenGriffiness In reply to MissRiverstyxx [2014-07-28 16:56:54 +0000 UTC]
XD
Random question:What is the most (unintentionally) adorable villain you can think of off the top of your head?
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to GoldenGriffiness [2014-07-28 17:04:59 +0000 UTC]
For some reason my first thought is Kaos from Skylanders, but I think he was sort of intentionally made to be incompetently adorable.
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GoldenGriffiness In reply to MissRiverstyxx [2014-07-28 17:29:48 +0000 UTC]
XD I still find everything but whirlwind to be a monstrosity in that game -_-
According to a IRL friend, he claims that that headshot I did of Malefor was adorable. Opinion?
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to GoldenGriffiness [2014-07-29 04:58:52 +0000 UTC]
I kind of like everything except Spyro's design and Cynder's derpy eyes (and boobs). There's some really interesting backstories and designs. But I'm not into it enough to play it or keep up with the franchise.
I wouldn't say Malefor is adorable, but he is kind of hilarious, what with the incomprehensible voice and all...
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GoldenGriffiness In reply to MissRiverstyxx [2014-07-29 22:39:42 +0000 UTC]
I thought you did play what with you waiving the monstrosity they've turned one of my favorite characters to in front of the webcam and not doing the right thing (AKA mailing it to me so I can force dad to use the welder on it and then run it over with the forklift. Unlike the last toy we decided to destroy, I'm sure the forklift would work...)
I mean my pik with him snarling specificly XD
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to GoldenGriffiness [2014-07-30 06:34:33 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, my brother bought it for me a while back and I played a bit, but never bothered to finish the game. It was just too kiddy and didn't hold the same charm as the classic Spyro games.
I just think he looks badass in that pic.
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GoldenGriffiness In reply to MissRiverstyxx [2014-07-30 09:49:29 +0000 UTC]
Can I have Cynder then? I promise I'll only sculpt her up to make her accurate rather then anything... to... dasterly...please?
Thanks
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to GoldenGriffiness [2014-07-30 11:04:36 +0000 UTC]
Unfortunately I don't have her anymore. I sold all my Skylanders stuff before I left home.
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Gabrielzaba [2014-03-25 04:10:54 +0000 UTC]
You should draw Spyro's little band of friends in Risidual Darkness with Flame, Ember, Zannak, Ciro, Saffron, Zephira, and Kazan. That would be awsome! XD But i have to ask... what's with all the "Z's" in there names?
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to Gabrielzaba [2014-03-25 04:41:01 +0000 UTC]
I should, I should... One day. As for the Z's... No idea, I never thought of it. But if you think about it, there's more A's than Z's.
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Dragon2013 [2013-07-08 19:55:32 +0000 UTC]
Is this the same Alta that apared in Bizzleb's Fanfiction story The Key to Destiny or is that one an alternative version?
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to Dragon2013 [2013-07-11 09:21:07 +0000 UTC]
Bizzleb borrowed my Alta to use in his story, but since our stories can't really exist in the same continuity... Yeah, I guess the Alta that appeared in his story is an alternate version to the one that appeared in mine. They still look the same and act very similar, though.
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Nova20CP [2012-04-14 15:40:13 +0000 UTC]
I think Atla's compensating for something with all of that.
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to Nova20CP [2012-04-22 08:23:37 +0000 UTC]
Compensating is right... For the lack of an element and physical strength. He's totally weak without them.
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Nova20CP In reply to MissRiverstyxx [2012-04-22 13:44:21 +0000 UTC]
Aye. With those artifacts he's pretty tough. I can say that from Spyro's fight with him in warfang.
But take those away... well we all know how that turned out. Poor Atla.
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Selvyrin [2011-11-15 02:00:10 +0000 UTC]
It's mind-boggling how talented you are both at writing AND drawing. Alta looks so... Natural in this picture. You've captured his essence in a way only the author of the OC themselves possibly could do. Love the mildly pouty expression too XD. Just happened to be re-reading ToaO (the end part too) and this pic serves well in illustrating the story.
Offtopic note: Sorry if my review on RD @FF seemed manipulative or the likes (worrying about the story temporarily being too dark), that was by far not my intention. I had a headache while reading and that might've affected my mood. I heartily agree with GoldenGriffiness; the story is yours to write (duh) and you definitely should not feel inclined to make changes against your own judgement.
I *love* your works, keep 'em coming whenever you have the time and best of luck on your 50k novel if you're still on that.
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to Selvyrin [2011-11-22 06:17:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I've still got a long way to go before I consider myself a good drawer, but I'm getting there.
Regarding the review, it's fine. A few people were worrying about the darker turn the story was taking, but I don't plan to keep it that way. It should be back on track soon enough, though I can't guarantee there won't be more dark themes happening in later chapters.
Thanks!
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greymon767 [2011-11-13 17:00:47 +0000 UTC]
I remember those artifacts-.- was shouting at my computer, HAXOR! CHEATER! NOOB TUBER!!
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HolyCross9 [2011-11-12 02:37:21 +0000 UTC]
If you ask me, Cynder should never have taken those claws in the first place.
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BloodDragonJL [2011-11-11 19:11:51 +0000 UTC]
He look young here...
Perhaps the last one he is more older ...
Anyway....Now I see his artifact , I tell you...He has the upper hand against my character...I update my artifacts description now (Wargear and abilities are called )
...Shame....you know even if was decided to be an antagonist , many readers like him and feel pity for him ...Strong emtion for an O.C with tragic life.
A likeable Villain...
Not many reach that goal....I even wonder how will be his life without that madness..Good ,neutral...>_> , only you know the answers madam, and that why we enjoy everything you create in your free time for the masses hungry for lecture against boredom time.
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to BloodDragonJL [2011-11-12 00:34:26 +0000 UTC]
He does look young...well, he's only 14, really. This is how I imagine him to look, more so than the last one.
Heh heh, but he'd be useless without his artefacts. Poor Alta.
I'm amazed so many people like him, even though he is an antagonist. It's nice to know I reached that goal... Thanks.
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BloodDragonJL In reply to MissRiverstyxx [2011-11-12 00:39:12 +0000 UTC]
Useless without artifact, even then , he still can kick the tale of him [link] even with all the description i put in my ref.....just quick (then number is not spoiler) How many was the number of Alta clan?
just question?
Physical strenght how much?
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to BloodDragonJL [2011-11-12 00:41:22 +0000 UTC]
Alta's clan...um, probably about 100 at most. It wasn't very big.
Alta's physical strength is pretty average. I think he could be taken down quite easily in a physical match. He's fast, though.
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BloodDragonJL In reply to MissRiverstyxx [2011-11-12 00:54:07 +0000 UTC]
o..o.one hundred ??????
Just great!!!
My plot need a Serious re-balance...
Just opinion (I need it).....Since they fall from apes in your plot isn't?
Tell me this
How they faring against one of the Necrons pet like this one.[link] ,because i was mean to bring it to the dragon realms..include all the army and fleet composition in my ref, but i need to do this without making overbalance.
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to BloodDragonJL [2011-11-12 01:05:41 +0000 UTC]
You can change the numbers if it suits you better, I don't mind.
But yes, they are all killed by the apes in my plot. And I don't think they'd fare much better against those creepy looking things... xP
If it suits your plot better to change the numbers of Alta's tribe, you may do so.
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BloodDragonJL In reply to MissRiverstyxx [2011-11-12 01:17:24 +0000 UTC]
Not only them for increase. The necron army too need reduction cuts....
If you are bored right now look the links of the army in my ref of see what they are each one of them...
...and in a sie note...the new ref he is 14 years old isn't , well how about put alta former picture in the 17 years?
he look older in that picture
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to BloodDragonJL [2011-11-22 06:21:06 +0000 UTC]
Ah, so distracted lately. xP But I've almost reached 50 000 words.
I checked out the links of the Necron army...damn, that's a lot. I guess you'll either have to increase the numbers of Alta's tribe, or decrease the numbers of the army. Or both.
And I guess Alta would be about 17 in the previous pic. If he had lived to be 17, that is...
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DeethIrteen [2011-11-11 16:22:27 +0000 UTC]
Poor Alta.
I'd hate to see what would happen if he ever met Bergan.
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MissRiverstyxx In reply to DeethIrteen [2011-11-12 00:31:51 +0000 UTC]
Hmm...what would happen, I wonder? Something messy, probably.
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DeethIrteen In reply to MissRiverstyxx [2011-11-12 01:31:28 +0000 UTC]
Bergan would try to play off of Alta's emotions to manipulate him. There's also the fact that Bergan can ALSO see into the future, and with a lot more control over the ability.
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