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MisterLuca In reply to Fail-Seeker [2018-10-13 19:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! <3

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Fail-Seeker In reply to MisterLuca [2018-10-13 23:54:27 +0000 UTC]

You are so very welcome! I look forward to more!

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MisterLuca In reply to BlazeHeartPanther [2018-10-12 15:17:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! What kind of help?

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BlazeHeartPanther In reply to MisterLuca [2018-10-13 00:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Your sentences are a bit wrong. 

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MisterLuca In reply to BlazeHeartPanther [2018-10-13 05:47:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh! It would be great if you'd show me these mistakes! <3

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BlazeHeartPanther In reply to MisterLuca [2018-10-13 14:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Some sentences like 

"What if she had lost?"

and

"There will be so comfy at home of ours"

don't make sense grammatically 

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MisterLuca In reply to BlazeHeartPanther [2018-10-13 15:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh! I've got it. 
What do you think about corrected sentences?
"What if she had got lost?"
and
"Our house will be so comfy for her"

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BlazeHeartPanther In reply to MisterLuca [2018-10-13 16:06:08 +0000 UTC]

That definitely sounds better.

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MisterLuca In reply to BlazeHeartPanther [2018-10-13 16:46:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot for your advice! <3 I've updated the file!

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BlazeHeartPanther In reply to MisterLuca [2018-10-14 02:25:28 +0000 UTC]

Might need a few more changes. probably should have mentioned that. 

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MisterLuca In reply to BlazeHeartPanther [2018-10-14 08:03:26 +0000 UTC]

Feel free to tell me about all strange places in my text ^-^

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