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mistsofavalon4ever — ice queen by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-06-17 05:52:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 259; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 1
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Description She is in limbo,
Encased in ice and
Slowly becoming untouchable

Food does not pass
Through these lips willingly,
Lips cannot touch hers
Without frostbite,
Affection can not get past
Her frozen veins

She paints her face
In raw hatred,
Just to keep them
From coming closer

There are no tears,
No laughter,
No chatter,
No blushes,
No smiles

You will burn
After reading her thoughts

She is polite
And removed from your heart
And your emotional dynamite

Some would call it a
"hands-off approach"

She would call it a
"fuck off" approach,
But she'd never
Tell you that

What causes a person
To become this way?

Does it result from
Careless handling or
Cool indifference?

They tap on the glass
Or her coffin
With these
Endless
Questions:

Where are you?
they ask

Far from here,

she says with an
ever-slow smile
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Comments: 5

fiction-freak [2010-07-15 10:29:15 +0000 UTC]

I love the simple words of it but it's so powerful just the same. The 7th and 8th verses made me laugh which helped ease the brittle way it makes you feel.

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to fiction-freak [2010-07-15 15:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that was meant for a bit of relief

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fiction-freak In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-07-15 23:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Well then it worked

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DreamOfBeauty [2010-07-01 18:24:15 +0000 UTC]

Powerful. I like this one a lot.
Plus, I <3 Natalie Merchant. :3

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to DreamOfBeauty [2010-07-01 19:27:15 +0000 UTC]

I like her too. I feel like she's underappreciated, so good to here a fan.
thanks

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