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Published: 2017-01-02 16:10:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 2304; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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He's about to kick someone's ass with the foot!EDIT (4.8.17): Oh no did I really write that?!
EDIT (3.11.18): Kicking someone's ass "with the foot", that's... one way to phrase it.
EDIT (20.8.19): I really hate that image.
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OK, let's start with the design: I do like it's more original shapes that still keep the funtime style. However some proportions fail, the way the pelvis connects to the feet is weird and disproportionate, the knees don't really fit with the fat look of the character and the ears are too cubic, and possibly too small. And also they seem to cause clipping around the arm and feet areas so I guess you could work on that. Next, the materials seem a little too dark, but that might be just the lighting, also there's too much hardness on the bowtie IMO. They seem to lack textures and look just a bit bland. The mesh is over all fine, but you could improve the topology on the top face plates and add subdivision to the eyebrows, and also loop and cut circles to the top margins and then add subdivision for the cylindrical objects like the ones on the feet and the buttons. Also Wires are clipping through the legs, The endoskeleton is pretty fitting though. The pose of the character is just bland and weird, I guess that was on purpose, but then you shouldn't've requested critiques on this e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
You have quite some potential, but you could put some more care into it. Try taking these things in account on your future artwork and hope to see better of it next time!
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You guessed it, it was the lightning which made the textures look dark. BTW, I checked those "clipping" wires ...also a lightning problem
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Yep, I still think the render could have an improved look if you wanted to display something like in the FNAF extras, the main problems with this are the lighting, background and some mesh errors which make the render look bland and lazy instead of giving it that funtime atmosphere. Overall I actually like the model 
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I feel like he's a bit too short, and for some reason i feel like he's look better without eyebrows... Idk why, but y'know, Other than those, Amazing model!/Modelling is something i could never do, unless it's in the miencraft style, and even then, it is still pretty poor. Great job! I have faved and watched!
~Redrocker95 OUT!
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No Prolem! Would love to see more from him!
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Bonnie is probably angry because hes now a midget. XD
Freddy is probably laughing his endo-skel out of his suit.
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This is outstanding! You should try making a speed modelling video on a character so people can see how you model!!!
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He sure is angry, look at those guitar strings stabbing his fucking thumb.
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I'm surprised you didn't make a critique on this. Eccsdee.
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Well, this was the impulse I needed 
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you should make a nightmare funtime bonnie lel
btw, awesome job!!
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amazing work on the model btw XD
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