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Published: 2009-09-22 15:38:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 452; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 12
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Picture came fresh out of my gardenDo you think the green things in the back are too unfocused?
Whats about the contrast? More contrast, less contrast?
What´s good what not? Please say
Edit: I changed it. I´ve cut of the green things at the top. Thank you soooo much for the critique haven´t seen it
Hope it is better now
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Comments: 30
Gilraen-Taralom [2009-10-19 00:19:32 +0000 UTC]
beautiful, the only thing i would change about it would be the brightness, decrease it, and then increase contrast a lil, other than that its perfectly fine
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foamazoid [2009-10-10 03:16:38 +0000 UTC]
That was from . Ugh, I keep forgetting to add that.
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foamazoid [2009-10-10 03:16:10 +0000 UTC]
I think the contrast is nothing but perfect The flowers realls pop. I also would have liked to see this shot form a different angle to see more of the butterfly, but I still like how you kind of have to search a little bit for it.
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Scar12345 [2009-10-08 20:53:19 +0000 UTC]
I really like this image You were able to catch the butterfly(I think it's a butterfly) with amazing detail. don't worry about the blurry background, like said, it brings out the definition in the flowers. Great Shot!!!
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jonathoncomfortreed [2009-10-08 19:45:19 +0000 UTC]
This is a really impressive shot. I think the green is unfocused, yes, but that is good. It brings out the definition of the flower, which really works. And I think there is a fine amount of contrast.
I would suggest cropping out all of the empty space above the flower. Well, a bit of it, at least.
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Modiad In reply to jonathoncomfortreed [2009-10-08 19:50:24 +0000 UTC]
I´ll change it. Thank you
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SafetyXPinXSurgery [2009-10-08 19:28:34 +0000 UTC]
Wow amazing focus on the flower and butterfly here . Ive been meaning to try nature photography out but if i had a shred of talent that i see in this picture I would be amazed by my development. Wonderful. The green does seem to be a little too blurd but in a sense it only strengthens the focus of the butterfly.
Hope to see more of your art work posted on GimmeFeedback, and more of your photography in general.
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Modiad In reply to SafetyXPinXSurgery [2009-10-08 19:31:01 +0000 UTC]
I´ll post more pictures on gimmefeedback. It´s a great group. Thank you
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experimental-thing [2009-10-08 16:38:13 +0000 UTC]
Its such a shame that you cant see the whole butterfly. Maybe you should have taken the pic from the different angle?
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Modiad In reply to experimental-thing [2009-10-08 19:14:27 +0000 UTC]
I think so too but he was too fast away to shoot another one
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Modiad In reply to experimental-thing [2009-10-08 19:19:32 +0000 UTC]
Yes it is, but i like it
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experimental-thing In reply to Modiad [2009-10-08 20:24:42 +0000 UTC]
i like it too but im just saying that it would even be better if you take the picture from different angle
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gppr [2009-10-08 14:50:58 +0000 UTC]
I like the colours on this a lot. The contrast looks fine. The blurred background works perfectly to bring out the flowers. I think it would be best if you cropped the little incomplete petals peeking on the left but you can touch them up if you want to keep the ratio without loosing pixels from the other sides. The little spider web tendril on the left breaks the direction both the background and the flowers' stems have. The butterfly is awesome, but I didn't notice it at the very first glace, it would have been better to get it a little more from the side. It is a little hidden between the petals. It is an awfully hard shot to get. Very nice.
#GimmeFeedback
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Modiad In reply to gppr [2009-10-08 15:49:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
I was lucky to get this photo. Seconds after this he flew away
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Wheatart [2009-10-08 14:34:01 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, you caught a butterfly in there! I kind of like how you can't spot it first, like it's a hidden treasure of sorts. I like the blurred background, but there might be a little too much. Maybe cropping out the top right corner? This is an awesome shot!
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Modiad In reply to Wheatart [2009-10-08 14:42:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
You mean like that: [link] ?
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Wheatart In reply to Modiad [2009-10-08 14:54:56 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that looks better! It brings the focus in some more!
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