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Published: 2013-03-01 02:13:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 6432; Favourites: 114; Downloads: 44
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I got some new pens, hurry for ridiculously time consuming background detail... getting a good enough peek there Discord?Okay, real talk, Pinkie's hair has always been a kuffuffle to draw (not as bad as Twilights but im sure i'll talk about that when I get around to her) and I plan on trying new styles in this comic so if things like manes/hair are a little inconsistant I apologise.
Anyways, next up are my two big jobs which I mentioned in my diary thingy but as this page was almost done I thought i'd get it finished before moving on.
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I absolutely love how you drew Discord. It feels like a mix between anime and ancient Chinese art work.
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I love the way you have done Pinkie. It feels natural, and is definitively unique relative to other things I have seen.
This is mindblowingly good, so keep up the good work! 
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ok i say this now since i just read the whole thing so far.
i am eager to see where this is going and since i see discord here i wonder if hes to blame (i hope not) or if he will act as a defense at some point.
ether way i wil be watching you to keep track of this comic X3
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Thanks guy, always nice to feel loved.
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anytime just hope to see more of your art ^_^
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omg! i love this page now i wana go back and rread the rest lol XD
but i have to ask are pinkie and discord together in this comic? x3
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Nah, I try to keep things as cannon as possible but you can interpret it how you like.
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awww well at least i hope they are firends in this X3
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Man, when you draw expressions in that particular style of yours, I just can't get tired of looking at them over and over again! So brilliant. And with Pinkie on this page, it's A Piece of Pie all over again. 
Fantastic work. All the best to you and may it improve even further, if that's at all possible.
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You make me feel warm and fuzzy!
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Excellent comic art, MR. Discord being the sneaky bastard his is and Pinkie Pie always being funny. I think you did a great job on her mane and tail.
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Thanks, im gonna try a few other styles though... FOR SCIENCE!
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But, of course. Twilight will be in charge of the tests, right?
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DISCORD!!! DON'T MAKE ME GET FLUTTERSHY!!! D-X<
But nah, this is funneh. XD
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Haha this is funny. I love the way Discord looks in the bottom left frame XD He looks epic!
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I LOVE this comic so far!!! And may I just say, that is a *beautifully* drawn Discord. He looks awesome. And I think you did fine on her mane!!!
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Thanks, your not so bad yourself!
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The first panel is really well done, it gives a great feel of cold/stormy weather, thanks to the wind on the trees and the clouds, love it : ).
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Man you put in a lot of effort in this page I don't want to rain on your parade...
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Well those are storm clouds, I welcome any constructive crit buddy, how else am I gonna improve. Lay it on me!
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nope nope nope, made my own head canon on how the last two panels played out so now it makes sense to me.
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Nah man don't worry about it. I don't want to nit-pick about it.
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Well, okay, but don't ever worry about upsetting me. I get over stuff quick and as I said, constructive crit is vital for strong development.
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It's just a stupid little thing but here it goes:
Ok like the last two panels. First one, Discord is all up in Pinkie's face and in the next scene we see her tumble forward. Wouldn't it have made more sense to her have tumbled backwards? I fixed this by imagining Discord shoving her from behind in the last panel, but thats just me...
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It did occur to me that maybe a splash was needed but I couldn't fit it all on one page, bad planning on my part. Also, she did fall backwards, she just landed goofy for comic effect, I think it works but I can see how peeps might call horse apples.
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Upside down-Discord is not something you want showed into your face without warning.
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I'd take John De Lancie to the face... just saying.
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twitchy tail, ear flop = imminent bath time!
twas brilliantly laid out comic. I loved her expression as she actually bothered to argue against her own senses for once lol pinchy knee = Something scary
Nice how the two things followed up into Pinkie needing to take a bath because she ended up getting scared out out her tail and falling face flat into a puddle of mud, which now means BATH TIME!
Love the details on Discord, you really did a great job on the antler and horn in the second to last panel. Pinkie in that final panel reminded me so much of Harwick's Twilight buried in mud with AJ grimacing as she noticed Twi get plowed into it. Twi growling up bubbles from the mud bath she just took was priceless. Pinkie here is pretty bummed with having to have fallen for that. I just can't express how much I loved each expressive panel you had here.
Also, last page, while a small bit in that panel, RD having that helmet put on her and her facing her friend was the cutest part of that last page up to her flying off at the end. Figured I'd fit that here whilst I still had time to comment on stuff.
Nothing lasts forever, but I'll continue taking much enjoyment in however many fantastic moments like this you dish out to us. I really mean it when I say you're my favorite MLP comic artist. Cheers!
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Wow, make me feel special why don't cha! Thanks guy, you make me feel fuzzy'good.
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wow pinkie actually questioning her pinkie sense for once
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Wouldn't you after a while?
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She's fiiiiiiiiine... proberly.
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I dun'even kno'wha ya talkin bout.
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I completely scoured Deviantart for high-quality MLP fan comics to follow, and I found several, but this one is definitely one of my favorites so far and one of the most interesting!
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Poor Pinkie.
I love the faces in this page. Pinkie Pie looks great, and I'd be scared too if that mug just dropped down in front of me like that.
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She'll be fine, she's all elastic and squishy.
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HAHAHA! Oh man! I am loving everyone of these! Especially Pinkie's expression in panel 4, like, "Pff! Is this a joke, Pinkie sense?"
And by the looks of it, you're following canon Discord that's good. I can't wait to see the next since I have yet to see a good Discord in a comic.
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