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Published: 2013-05-31 20:59:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 27601; Favourites: 2005; Downloads: 181
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Description Ahaha, I wanted to post something; most recent little painting that I made ...

Yup, I'm an =agnes-cecile wannabe

Please don't mind the messed-up face. *sobs in a corner*
I'm not sure if I'll scrap this or not ;___;


Media: Watercolor and gel pen
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Saito-91 [2013-06-12 14:09:00 +0000 UTC]

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Are you kidding me? Messed up face? I believe you're in the same camp as myself overly critical of your own work despite what others may tell you. This is a very compelling example of what a skilled artist can achieve.

I initially thought this to be a very good photo manipulation given the structure of her face. I was even going to ask for advice on how you managed to pull off such a feat. If you can make someone that works exclusively with digital media to produce their art think that you did this in photoshop then you're obviously doing something right.

The only negative I can possibly come up with is that some of the accents in the highlights of her hair seem a bit blurry. Even then some imperfections make the work that more captivating. I look forward to seeing what you have in store for the future. You've more than earned the watch from me e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sโ€ฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Moiscen In reply to Saito-91 [2013-06-12 17:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh .... Thank you so much for the critique! you made my day~

I'm honored that you like my work, and thank you for the watch!

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Saito-91 In reply to Moiscen [2013-06-14 13:52:33 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome. I'm just trying to find a way to improve my own work and yours is a great source of inspiration. Peace

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Winxhelina [2013-06-01 19:46:52 +0000 UTC]

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The messed up face.... pardon me, but where IS that messed up face? You already have a very good critic there, but I might try anyways. I think her gace is beautiful - people don't usually draw noses out like that, but when they do it rather well - and you did - they can. I agree there might be minor details that mght not be perfect on the face, but they don't really show - the overall feeling is that she's beautiful. She looks scared, but still very pretty. The impact is nice - I love all the beautiful soft yet cold colours and how they melt and I I like the butterflies to and the running color and also - I'm just glad to see real paintings!

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Moiscen In reply to Winxhelina [2013-06-01 21:59:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for such a kind critique! It means a lot to me~

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Winxhelina In reply to Moiscen [2013-06-03 20:05:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh you are most welcome!!

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KingdomAvatar333 [2013-06-01 16:04:08 +0000 UTC]

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Hmmm, I think this is a very eye-catching piece of work. I'm not a regular painter, and I've barely done watercolor, so some of this may seem a little biased. But from what I've seen of this type of work, I think this piece is successful.

I like the strokes you did for the hair, the light yellows you used for the base (or head) flow well into the dark purples and blacks you later use for the strands before the hair itself drips and fills up the bottom space (which accentuates the look of watercolor well).

As for the face, I don't think it's messed up at all. In fact, I really like how you did the face. The shading techniques you used . . . I almost couldn't tell it was a painting until I looked at it more closely (besides the hair).

The composition is pretty simple, but I feel like it works here. If you had put too much in the background the face and hair could have been lost, which you wouldn't want since it appears to be the focus here.

Great job! I love faces, so this is very inspiring for me. Thank you for sharing this with us. I hope this critique helps.

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Moiscen In reply to KingdomAvatar333 [2013-06-01 18:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you SO much for the critique! It was very good feedback, thank you!

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KingdomAvatar333 In reply to Moiscen [2013-06-02 05:35:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, you are very talented.

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JuliaCarina [2015-04-18 06:44:55 +0000 UTC]

I want to buy this...um how do I do that?

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darkshadows24 [2014-05-11 20:40:17 +0000 UTC]

This is very jaw dropping!! I love it!!

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BillyNikoll [2014-04-08 08:28:21 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous!

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dom459 [2014-02-25 04:15:57 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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Travis-Clarke [2014-02-08 21:00:22 +0000 UTC]

OMG This is amazing!

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Moiscen In reply to Travis-Clarke [2014-02-09 13:02:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, waaa

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Fantasygames13 [2014-01-13 19:18:28 +0000 UTC]

It's extremely beautiful, I don't think the face is messed up in any way!ย 

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Winxhelina [2013-12-08 18:34:14 +0000 UTC]

Fun fact: My best friend was showing me agnes-cecile's art, about how awesome it is and I was like:"Yes it is. It reminds me of Moisca's art."

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Moiscen In reply to Winxhelina [2013-12-08 18:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, omgggg, I'd jump in there and be like, "No. My art reminds you of Agnes-Cecile's art. That cannot happen the other way." And then I'd fly off~ย 

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Winxhelina In reply to Moiscen [2013-12-08 19:52:11 +0000 UTC]

WEll it was that way for me. So apparently it can.ย 

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maroonwinged-fae [2013-10-24 02:53:24 +0000 UTC]

I love everything about this painting ^_^

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Artsbriddle [2013-10-24 02:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Love it! ย ย 

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Paula-Leimane [2013-10-02 18:33:18 +0000 UTC]

wow, that is amazing work!! <3 love it <3

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kerriannepoulos [2013-07-28 03:46:54 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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ArtsyVana [2013-07-24 15:07:54 +0000 UTC]

It's really pretty! ย 

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soovigon [2013-07-11 21:58:04 +0000 UTC]

Beauty!

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Harfenfreak [2013-06-26 12:09:57 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!

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Moiscen In reply to Harfenfreak [2013-06-26 19:24:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AndressaSP [2013-06-14 00:13:37 +0000 UTC]

wow..beautiful

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NordicLynx [2013-06-13 23:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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Endaahw [2013-06-11 15:07:38 +0000 UTC]

coooooool

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Aneirin-Aryon [2013-06-10 04:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Awesome art work! I really like the style. She reminds me of someone I know.

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odetteanglica [2013-06-10 03:01:00 +0000 UTC]

The colors look so beautiful great job

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anaisrandom [2013-06-08 15:41:42 +0000 UTC]

I like the color scheme.

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gambitgmb [2013-06-07 16:31:28 +0000 UTC]

very good work

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MrGraysonCE [2013-06-07 10:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Great job! Just fine

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Scorchyz [2013-06-07 05:13:53 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful <3

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omgitsbess [2013-06-07 04:44:47 +0000 UTC]

omg this is gorgeous!

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Meriale46 [2013-06-06 19:22:38 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful work. I love it. What expressionism..

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Moiscen In reply to Meriale46 [2013-06-06 20:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Your words mean a lot to me!

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Meriale46 In reply to Moiscen [2013-06-09 21:03:14 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome.

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Pehoangtruc [2013-06-06 01:49:48 +0000 UTC]

pro quรก ฤ‘i >w<

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keishasart [2013-06-06 00:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Her face is perfect! Dont throw it away

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MedievalSpirit [2013-06-05 20:19:58 +0000 UTC]

WHERE DID YOU MESS UP?????? Because that is beautiful.

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nuancedshadows [2013-06-05 17:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow, it's fun to wath ^^

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BlueEyedJuniper [2013-06-05 14:47:12 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful and her face is far from messed up nicely done

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WhIppIng-b0y [2013-06-04 02:11:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice work. XD

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JuaniitoGoldenLight [2013-06-03 22:50:24 +0000 UTC]

L.O.V.E this work!

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mastercron [2013-06-03 18:39:30 +0000 UTC]

"O" beautiful, c:

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Lintu47 [2013-06-03 12:45:44 +0000 UTC]

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young920 [2013-06-03 09:33:14 +0000 UTC]

wow... i love this!!!

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