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Part 3!Not alot of text yet. But I don't want to over do it... especially because I'm not that great at writing dialogue.Β
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when you mentioned the bad little brother I kind of got the impression you were thinking the kid from the movie private resort. I like the the idea of him sabataging with the girls bras before the powderpuff game leading up to sprinkler going off. I also like the idea of the jumbotron being involved like in the begining of the movie Bikini Spring Break. I like the idea of broadcast boobs.
As far as Hostessing duties go and who gets them thats your call. I am a fan because I like what you do. I didn't really like the idea of a mother tormenting her daughter but I can't wait to see it. So I don't always know what I want. Apparently I really want to see Grace pull Molly's boobs out. I didn't know Know I had the hots for the Chipettes. I didn't know I wanted to see see Brittany rip Eleanor's blouse open but have thought about it way to much over the last six months to deny I have furry tendencies. So keep doing what you are doing. Not only is it great but it is getting better all the time. I just appreciate you at least listening to my ideas. Since you were already planning on doing a beach series and Β your going to be putting out the science fair at some point I feel heard.Β
I also really loved the bustline and breast hang in the tongue shot. It would be great to see that angle again in a molly moment payoff shot sometime in the future. I also like the serious grip Grace has on Mollys top. There is no escape.
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I appreciate how fast you respond. I just worry that all my comments and questions keep you from working on the drawing. I am sure that would annoy your fans.
So far that sounds interesting. If Nora's husband is Β a wealthy doctor and she and Grace are the trophy wives who lunch together that flushes out a lot. I can see Β it amping up her bitterness if she has to watch her friend have a better life than she has. If Grace was enough Β like Charlotte in High School she might even look the other way with Charlotte And Molly. If Molly was an unplanned baby and that kind of forced Grace to settle for marriage with Molly's dad that would put a lot of pieces together. If Molly's dad worked in the family business in a nepo son on the payroll job that paid more than he was worth Β but only a tiny fraction of what the business brought in. Money could be a problem at home while maintaining an facade of wealth to compete with Nora. If Grace and husband have to hit up parents for money that raises the question what does Grace have to do in order to get money out of father in law (karma). How much do Molly's dad and Grandpa have in common (dad must have learned it from somewhere)? Β Waiting for Grandpa to die so she can divorce dad for half his inheritance would be a great motivator for Grace's drinking. Bringing in a new trophy wife for grandpa to mess up the inheritance. If she was above molly's dad at work that would make her a great foil for Grace (I love a good comeuppance)Β
I really like the idea of a mischevous brother for charlotte but be careful with the age stuff.Β
If Charlotte's dad is a doctor she may be pretty smart and she maybe in competition with Noelle for Validictorian. Being a little stereotypical Noelle might be good at science and engeneering. Charlotte did some damage at the science fair to get ahead I could see her arranging a Molly moment for Noelle. I can also see Noelle getting some Rubes-Goldberg revenge. Β
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I usually respond either when I don't feel like drawing... or I can't draw.. like riding on the train or something.
I'd say those thoughts on Nora and Grace's relationship are pretty accurate. I'm not exactly sure what Molly's dad does for a living, I really haven't decided yet but the scenario your proposing sounds pretty good. I'm sure the Milcher family has produced many asshole fathers so I wouldn't think twice before making Grandpa a dirty pervert as well. I do like the thought of Grace having to please him to get favors/money from him. But I don't know if I'll get around to introducing characters like that. That'll have to be a long term plan.
The age stuff won't be a problem. I wouldn't post some content here as you well know.
I do know that Noelle is fairly smart/educated but I'm not sure how she'll interact with Charlotte. She does tend to pick on weaklings like Gabriella and Molly and Noelle doesn't strike me as being weak of character. She also goes after Dana of course but that's only because she gets in the way or straight up abuses Charlotte.
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I like the idea of Grace, daddy Milcher, Charlotte and, maybe the little brother if he's bad enough, getting punished for their behavior. I like the idea of them having foils like a dirty grandpa, an inheritance sucking trophy wife, Dana with the brawn and maybe a Noelle with the brains. I can see grandpa making Grace play hostess/waitress at his poker game. I can see the little brother filling the role as foil some. Β
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Ah... well the little brother was meant to run around and torment Charlotte in various ways.
Well if Grandpa was as despicable as Daddy... he might try to pull Molly into being a hostess as well. Then again my mind is depraved.
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Do you already have a story in mind for Nora and Miss Green to flesh out their characters. I discovered you around the same time as you started the car wash series and askmollymoocow already had Grace stuff up so i am not sure how that developed.I don't know if she started fleshed out or if motivation and back story has come over time with help from the ask questions. I have no idea who Noelle is. Miss Green looks like she is going to be nice. I am assuming that Nora has a mean streak based on who her daughter is but she could be a push over. Are the moms friends with each other or rivals from back in the day? What do the parents do for a living?Β
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I don't have a specific story to introduce them as of yet. I should just do some one off images of them so people get a feeling for their personalities.
Grace was sort of fleshed out before I started drawing her. I knew what she was going to be and how she was going to act.
Noelle is a classmate of Molly's. I'm not sure exactly what I'm going to do with her yet. Her character needs more fleshing out, especially her personality.
The moms know each other. Ms. Greene moved to Farmer's Fields after High school. Nora and Grace have lived in or around the area their entire lives. I haven't given alot of thought to their relationships yet as most things revolve around their daughters. But its something I'll consider in the future.
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Thank you that's a good starting off point.
So you know it doesn't hurt my feelings if you don't respond to question for awhile. I totally get that you need to think about things, especially writing and character development stuff. I am an aspiring writer myself and know it helps to think of something and the rest falls into place. Now you know that Nora and Grace should have a history together. High School,love triangles, friends or foes.
Ms. Greene I assume is single because of the Ms. but ,she does have two daughters, so i might be wrong. Maybe Jewish because of the last name. Most likely working (again I think she's single). I get a strong academic vibe, teacher Librarian maybe psycologist.
Grace I assume doesn't work. Was orginally a trophy wife for a succesful but unlikable man. Her nasty personality is insecurity due to rapidly aging out of her looks.
Nora is still really hard to get a bead on. She and Charlotte read as pretty Waspy as Opposed to Molly being Somewhat Catholic.
Is Noelle black or Indian?
The Muppet principal. Did he grow up with Grace and Nora and maybe have some personal knowledge or relationship that lets him get away with his behavior?
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Well I like to respond as fast as I can. I like talking about the characters because it helps me get into their head space and figure out who they are.
Nora and Grace will have a history together. Not sure exactly how it will play out though. Whatever their backstory is, currently I have them as friends or at least friendly. It forces Charlotte and Molly to spend time together that they otherwise wouldn't.
Ms. Greene is single, her first name is Fiona but I prefer Ms. Greene. She and her daughters are jewish. 
Nora is tough because I don't have her fully fleshed out in my mind yet. Her husband(Charlotte's father) is a doctor and she also has a mischievous son (younger brother to Charlotte). I do know they take a very 'boys will be boys' attitude with him and let him get away with murder.
Noelle is Indian. I don't have alot more info on her for now. Still trying to figure out how she fits into the dynamic of girls.
I haven't given too much thought to the Principal and how he interacts with the parents. For now lets just say the parents hear what they want to hear.
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Is it wrong that I think Grace is such a bad parent that she should be infertile?
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No.... no its not. 
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Same goes for... whatever the f*** Molly's dad's name is.
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I just feel a little bad for thinking that, because if they were infertile, Molly wouldn't have been born. Unless she was adopted.
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She was unfortunately, not adopted. But... usually people become infertile when they get older... so you could wish it on them now.
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You know, I actually asked Molly that question of your blog. I noticed you never seem to answer any of my questions.
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Sorry bro. I'll try and make a point to get to one of them. I have over 100 questions right now sitting in the queue so I doubt I'll get to every single one of them.
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Oh. Sorry.
I was worried it was just my questions you weren't answering. I didn't realize you had that many.
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Its ok dude. I don't have a system for how I pick them either. Like I don't go in order received or anything like that. I usually go with things that inspire me or things that would be particularly interesting.
So when you asked if she was adopted.. I couldn't think of anything exciting at the time. Though now that I'm thinking about it, I may have an interesting way to answer that question.
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I would've said, don't feel obligated to answer it just because I asked you to, but I guess it's too late now.
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Yup! Don't worry... Β I thought of something that worked and was more than just Molly standing there and answering the question so I drew it up.
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I am replying up here because I don't want my comment buried.Β
Like I said I am a huge fan. I really love that even though you have a cartoon style your characters have realistic body types and they are read as attractive even if they are not perfect. There is very little that caters to people who like women who are built like Molly. In your style you actually made Elanor the Hottest Chippette while jeanette was a close second even though my tastes are usually more Molly like. That is a really hard needle to thread so kudos for sure.
I was pretty sure that the tentacle stuff was not canon just like I doubt the gorilla was canon as well and the zombie stuff I wrote off as fan service. The part where grace pushes Molly outside naked is a little hard to believe. The motivation to do that to your own daughter crosses the line between flawed and evil. Β Most of your other have logical motivations for there behavior. Β Cheerleader Charlotte pulled up Cheerleader molly's shirt to distract a player in the middle of a crucial play. Car wash charlotte stripped molly and gabby to make money. Science fair charlotte sabatoged molly to win 1st place. While certainly sociopathic it isn't evil.
Speaking of the science fair if you are going to be switching over to a dialog style (which given my love of Mitsu the reporter I agree with 100%) then you should consider coloring and releaseing it even with the old Evey design. But you should try adding Dialog just for the practice. As I said your Dialog so far is better than you give yourself credit for. It may only seem weak to you in comparison to your superior ability to do facial expressions that drive stories all on there own. My first introduction to your work was humiliation on the field. As I said that was spot on dialog and drawing that made it easy to fill in the gaps and create my own scenario that even others who have similar drawings didn't do. Calling molly a cow and refering to her milk jugs established everything you needed to know about the whole comic.
Please keep up the great work as even the stuff thats not my favorite looks fantastic
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Thanks again man.
Eh the gorilla thing was canon... or at least it was inconsequential. I mean nothing really happened to her. Just a monkey looking up her skirt. Though you're spot on about the rest of the stuff being fan service.
I guess I see what you mean about Grace. I guess my motive for her is she's just a sadist and doesn't need a really good reason to do things. Though perhaps she is a bit jealous of Molly's father paying more attention to Molly than her. Though that's not explored in this comic.
I will try and release the Science fair in some capacity in the future. And I will try to add a bit of dialogue to the things I make going forward.
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Yeah that does make some sense as motivation for that extreme level of sadism grace has for molly. Because of a few of my personal issues I dont love the rapey step dad stuff and try not to dwell on the molly/stepdad stuff too much. It is hard because it is some of your best drawn work. I prefer molly in the tank top as opposed to the long sleeve blue thing she often wears. AS i said before Mollys outfit in thoughts on daddy and charlottes outfit in the car wash look enough like sports uniforms that I can imagine track and field day, basketball/volleyball games powderpuff football and cheerleader practice all taking place in similar attire.
Glad to hear it about the science fair. I kind of liked the old Evey design but strongly agree that the new design is better. I would almost like to see the old design as a different character to kind of round out the stoner clique (getting tranqed on special brownies at a bake sale or party seems like a good story idea) . I am happy that the science fair is going to released in some compacity. The groping shot was great. I just hate to add more to your plate because it is obvious that the comic stuff takes a lot longer to color the characters and the backgrounds than the ask molly stuff. I was amazed at how fast you did that on the stream.
I am looking forward to watching the new dialog stuff develop. So far you are really good at writing for Molly and Charlotte and Grace. Dana is pretty solid too, in f marry kill that seemed like how a Dana would talk. And of course a Dana would hate a Charlotte. So far you are doing pretty good at thinking and speaking in different voices.Β
Ok gorilla thing makes sense as just a monkey looking up her skirt. I tend to look at stuff as snap shots in bigger stories.Β
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Well that's not her step dad... that's her actual dad. I'm sure that doesn't make it any better for you but there you go.
That blue shirt is sort of her default outfit but I do like dressing her up in different things. So you'll be sure to see her in all sorts of different costumes.
Well as much as I'd love to add another stoner character that probably won't be in the cards just now. I've got such a deep bench of ladies that I don't give enough attention to the ones I already have. So for now, Evey is going to have to stay a solo stoner.
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The step dad stuff is ok the world doesn't have to revolve around me. I am enjoying your work just the same.
You are right about the deep bench. I agree there isn't a lot a crew of stoners can acomplish that one well written stoner babe can't get done just as well. I just liked the old Evey design too. I agree that the new one is better though. I am having a hard time imagining a scenario with all the moms involved that is still Molly centric. Β A school play comes to mind. How that would play out depends on what the moms are like. Gabby's mom doesn't read as bad to me. Β Charlotte's mom could go either way. I am hoping they get fleshed out some on the askmollymoocow blog.Β
i love all the dress up so far it is hard to pick a favorite. Somehow Chipmunk beats bathing suit. (I swear I am not a furry) So far I am really loving prom dress as well.Β
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Yeah well hopefully they eventually get some questions on that blog but I think most people won't ask any until I flesh out their characters more in future stories.
I swear I'm not a furry either! (Hides half of his gallery!)
Glad you like all of her outfits. I'm sure I'll bust out some more in the future.
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I'm pretty sure you know exactly where this goes!
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I am not sure. I cant tell who's getting naked. Mollys dress looks awfully vunerable to a molly moment but the title is stolen date.Β
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You'll just have to wait and see.
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Eagerly I assure you
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Bad mama! You leave sweet little Molly alone!Β Β
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Never! Mama demands satisfaction.
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Dialog is hard to perfect, but without switching over to a dialog style it would be really hard to incorporate your reporter character. Your reporter was the new character I was most excited about. Gabby's mom is pretty hot too but as I've stated before I like the idea of Farmers Fields incidents being aired live on the news. I can see high school sports being covered on the news in a small town. Maybe the town festival Halloween event carnival would be a good place to set a story where a reporter would show up. Akbur has a comic style where he uses very minimal written dialog and instead uses an emoji style similar to your broken heart in mollys nude school adventure 11. It looks like it would be a pain to do drawing on the computer the way you do but you can cut and paste a lot of it once you establish it instead of stressing over dialog. You are off to a good start with your dialog work. It is really good for your characters that haven't been fleshed out yet. You have had some great dialog already. Humiliation on the field really started off some great world building with just one line. It established a relationship and a tone from the jump. I am not sure that Molly and Grace's relationship makes much sense to me yet. I am hoping this story will clarify things. I get her critical nature combined with an alcoholic neglect fueled by bitterness over aging and jealousy over Molly"s youth. I am unclear how much of the askmollymoocow is cannon and how much is fanservice when it comes to Grace.
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Woo... that's a juicy comment. So thanks for that first of all.
Most of the askmollymoocow blog is in fact canon. There are some things that I might decide are just fan servicy things. Like the tentacle posts. I haven't decided on whether there should be a sci-fi element to these stories. So far its been pretty contemporary and I haven't really tied in any supernatural elements.
You've mostly got Grace figured out. She's a bit of a sadist.. like most of the people in Molly's life. So she's more into humiliating her little girl for all the reasons you mention. Hopefully by the end of this, everything will be clear about their relationship.
Well I'm glad you're excited for Mitsu (the reporter). I hope to include her sometime soon but that's the problem with having a deep bench of characters like I do now. There's simply not enough time for me to devote drawing all of them. However I will come up with something involving her, if only its just so one of Molly's shenanigans gets on the news.
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Yup... they're going to sit around and play Monopoly. The ultimate insult and the only proper way to steal a date.
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exactly lol
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Looks like the mother wants to have some 'fun' with her daughter's date.Β
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