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Responding up top again. once it comes time to do some character creation. Hillbilly relatives really could be used as a designer drug connection for Dana. During the stream there was a question about Dana taking Molly and Gabriella to a Rave where they may have taken some kind of pills that sort of morphed into Gabby giving molly a roofy which morphed into the second sleepover entry I expect to see any day now. I am not sure how much the rave scene and the goth scene cross over since neither were my clique back in the mid 90s when I was in school, although in retrospect Marylin Manson and nine inch nails are awsome, Plus Manson made Rose Mcgowen famous which was really a great contribution to society. A rapey/gropey corrupt town sheriff (fat, sunglasses, pornstache, campaign hat) could catch the girls holding. Pat downs, strip search, handcuffs, holding cells, fat prostitutes, a pimp who knows mollys dad. If the sheriff had a kid Molly's age that could be used as well. Also if the town Mayor had an 18 year old kid that might be a way to incorporate a little bit of karma into the principal too though I don't know how. Β
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Yeah I wasn't sure about the whole rave/goth connection either. I mean I guess she could be into any of the underground culture that might be going on in Farmer's Fields.
I could see Dana having some cousin(s). Dana and Evey have to get their drugs from somewhere. I really need to start making a list of characters that I should design or think more about anyways.
Funny you should mention a corrupt town sheriff. I haven't introduced the head of the police force yet and I'm not sure at what point I'll be able to. But I will say his daughter has already been introduced. 
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It is nice to be on the same page with you once in awhile. I am hoping to luck out again and be around for the next stream, I should probably use that time to do an impromtu survey as to which of the sugested archtypes are the most popular. I keep hoping others are going to join in on the conversation here but I guess your fans are to polite to interject. I don't want to assume that the Stream people are more hardcore somehow but there was more interaction among the fans there. It was kind of surprising how cordial and encouraging everyone was to each other. Even when there was disagreement there was no real fighting. Even when things got a little controversial. The angie people didn't get their feelingsΒ Β hurt when those of us who are adverse to that objected. And they accepted the decision without complaint. Then they were encouraging and supporting Di in getting her idea out even if it meant their request wasn't to be for the night. It might be worth thinking about taking a nonbinding survey here as to which archtype characters are popular with the fans.Β
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Well with the Angie thing, I won't do that stuff on the stream because its against their TOS. I simply don't want to be kicked off Pictaro. So it puts a hard fast rule on that kind of content. I don't think I explained that in the chat though.
It was nice with everyone contributing ideas though. Yeah I don't usually engage in this kind of conversation about my characters with most people.
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You did explain about angie in the chat room. I am in the anti angie content camp. I don't ever want my web browsing habits to come back to haunt me. The rest of the content I can justify as harmless fantasy. The enf fetish is tied into many of our earliest experiences with nudity were of the accidental variety. A skirt blowing up a flash of bra when you look down a girls blouse. A girls reaction to this was amazing and frequently intertwined with arousal to the point some of us developed a fetish for it. Many of us spent hours fantasizing about it happening. Much of the nonconsentual content translates into a power and control fantasy. It isn't my personal kink but it does incorporate elements of public nudity that I enjoy. Personally I don't find that content hard to justify and I could do it without any problem. On the other hand the preteen girl crosses a line I wouldnt want to ever try and defend. I worry that god forbid there were ever a death in the family and a custody fight ever broke out that I would compromise myself through my browser history. The angie content has made it so I cant go on the askblog anymore. I do appreciate that you have links directly to the new stuff so you can bypass the angie content but some of the older stuff is now kind of off limits just because the angie stuff is mixed in. I know I am a little paranoid about this but I also won't look up any Tracey Lords stuff Lupe Lopez, or the R kelly tapes because I dont want to take the risk. Β
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The slumber party sounds like it is going to be great when you get to it. After thinking about it I am not sure the brother is the way to go. It really depends on how bad charlotte is to Molly in the mean time. when you get around to it it might be time for charlotte to get straightened out again. If charlotte is fairly well behaved between now and then I would prefer the brother. But that doesn't sound like Charlotte.
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Its a down the pipeline project for now. It will be a pretty heavy project because it'll involve so many characters. Perhaps Charlotte's mother could force her to go Molly's for a slumber party. Charlotte has no plans to be a good girl anytime soon.
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At the moment I am not real mad at Charlotte. Karma kind of caught up to her at the car wash, so the universe seems in balance with her for now. In a balanced universe I would rather see see the little brother get into boob groping and bra snatching hijinks Β than Molly's dad get rapey with the young ladies. Charlotte is out of balance with nature and requires a humbling and that humbling takes the form of Mr. Milcher then who are we to argue with karma.
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Funny you're probably one of the few people that feel that way about Charlotte right now. I'm pretty sure if I just posted a neutral/cheesecake picture of her... people would still be calling for her blood. Sounds like its time to do a social experiment.
Even so, she'll be up to no good sooner or later. She's already turned Dana into her pony on the ask blog.
She'll deserve some sort of punishment in the future.
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Don't get me wrong I still hate Charlotte plenty. Right now though, I am focused on Grace. I only have a little room in my heart for a little hate and right now Grace is using up most of it. I think Dana had a little bit of payback coming for her actions during the car wash. I am really glad Dana was at the car wash because the shot of Dana stripping Charlotte was my favorite shot of Charlotte even though the next shot of the principal groping and slobbing down her tits was a close second. (the pulling molly's top off shots I count as molly shots) But Dana really did have a little bit of a karma issue of her own. I really would like it if Molly's dad and the principal could get a little bit of payback but I don't really have any ideas that would be fun to see. Although once embarrassednudefarmers.com is up and running a PTA, MILF, catagory could feature someone the principal or molly's dad didn't want on the website. I know it isn't much of a commupance but it is all I can come up with. I had to go back and check I thought your cheesecake shot from the kingsora comission series had more favorites than any other girl but Evey actually won and it was so close with all the girls that it doesn't really prove a bias.
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Yeah... though I don't know how many people would agree with you. Most people like Dana regardless of what horrors she put Charlotte through. But Goth girls like her are always kind of popular.
Yeah I don't have any specific ideas for her currently. Outside of the occasional prank she pulls on Charlotte. I'm surprised she doesn't get more questions on the ask blog. It'd probably lead to some interesting situations if she did.
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Really looking forward to seeing Ms. Green in action to to get an idea of who she is. Is Charlotte's Dr. father the same Doctor who felt up Molly?
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Naw... different doctor all together. Charlotte has a more normal family than Molly... for the most part anyways.
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That really clears up a lot. Nora isn't going to be a grown up Charlotte and Charlotte's dad isn't going to be a super pervert. It will be mostly the brother who pulls stuff at home.
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Yes... well Boys will be boys...
especially when they are rifling through their sister's underwear draw... or spying on their sisters in the shower.... or peeking underneath the sheets while their sister sleeps.
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all those scenarios sound great especially when combined with cheerleader practice sessions and sleapovers. Camera stuff was popular lastnight with charlotte filming and mardi gras flashbulbs in the background.
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Hahaha yep. He could get up to all kinds of mischief... One of my thoughts is he invites Molly over to Charlotte's slumber party... seeing as Charlotte wouldn't do this herself. Then things could go a number of ways.
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You should do that series for sure that sounds like it would be my new all time favorite
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Yeah the slumber party has been on my mind for a bit. Not sure exactly how it will end up going. If its going to be at Molly's house with her pervy dad around or at Charlotte's with the pervy little brother.
Either way... tits galore!
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I prefer the little brother to the dad.
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I don't know if I am more excited about the upcoming super payoff shot which I expect to be your best all time work or the thought of a super secret project. Life is really good when you have things to look forward to.
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Yup it sure is. 
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Well I am still really hoping to get the science fair too. I liked old Evey. I would prefer it if you serialized it and released it a piece at a time like you do your other series'. If nothing else I would like to see the grope shot again it was so good. I like the sketch work the Molly breast flashing sketch you had up to announce your one stream was really a great.
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I may at some point revisit it. I mean I never really finished it. One or the reasons I abandoned it was because it was just going off the rails...
Stolen Date was originally much longer than what its going to be. I have a habit of drawing things out and then the story just gets out of control and I have no idea what it is I'm doing anymore!
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Well again if I really want to see Molly get her boobs groped I just have to wait a bit. It will come. Honestly if it was me I would rework the concept to a Charlotte vs Noelle type story. Unless you have an archtype personality picked out for Noelle, brainiac science student fits in with the Indian character. A doctor's daughter anatomy project up against a clothes ripping robot enginearing project. Really its just an idea to involve some of your other characters. Evey could do a botny thing Molly could disprove evolution I still get the impression Ms. Green is a psycologist so a behavioral project for Gabriella maybe.
I am not sure how I feel about stolen date being shortened. Since you implied a Grace nip slip might be in the cards instead of a purposeful disrobing on Grace's part, I am really thrown. I was expecting one more stripping entry and then possibly Ron joining in at Molly's expense which would be fun to see. That would be out of line with how Ron has been described but not out line with your sensibilities. The other possibility I can see is Grace being very forceful with Ron which would be a lot of fun to see but seems like it would take a while to set up so the shortened series is really throwing me. Way to keep me guessing. Β Β
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I'll keep those thoughts in mind for the Science Fair. Perhaps it'll warrant me just reworking the entire thing.
Glad not everything is written on the wall for Stolen Date. Again I made it way too long initially and started going off the story rails. Its shorter now. Its only 11 pages total but it was going to be like 30 pages originally. Which as you can imagine is a ton more work.
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Eleven multi panel pages is huge. I thought when you said it was shortened you meant it was wrapping up in two pages or so. If we're only at Β the halfway point this could go anywhere.
The science fair work was great (as groped boobs and public stripping always are) but as a concept it was a great opportunity to showcase a stereotypical Indian character. Much in the way that Dana really would do well in a vampire costume next halloween. And the moms would do well at a PTA meeting or fundraiser.Β
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Yup... only about halfway done. Still plenty more to come.
Yeah I'm going to have to show off more of the moms at some point here.
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I am really excited to hear you have more projects in line. I'm really not rushing you in anyway I am just throwing lots of stuff out seeing what interests you. As a fan of your Β I would rather you make the decisions. Even paying for a project, I don't really want full control. A big part of the fun of your work is the anticipation for Β what you are going to do next. I am a little sad that I got to see the whole science fair all at once instead of checking back in everyday, more often as the days wear on in between instalments. The mixed feelings about a non series post. Half disapointed that its not series but excited that molly looked cute in her skimpy lingere or during the car wash series the zombie graveyard and chippette pictures. I am hoping to inspire offhandedly some work. If instead of an Irish character Molly gets groped or sharked by leprechan while wearing traditional traditional irish step dancing outfit next st. patricks day then great. if instead of having a country character a scarecrow opens mollys tied off gingham shirt come the fall great. Top pulled open shots are really underrepresented so far. (not that top pulled down and top pulled up are overrepresented because you really cant go wrong with tops being pulled in any direction as long as they clear the nips) I am not really attached to any of the characters I have pitched or any of the details. I do kind of prefer that Molly be the star of her own series just because she is so sexy. I would rather you choose who lives in farmers fields. Β The bull lesbian is really just because I like the way you draw it when boobs get groped. I would prefer it if it wasn't Mollys dad doing the groping but in the two with the dad, the doctors visit, the science fair, and Charlotte getting felt up by the principal during the carwash the expressions and finger indentations were wonderful. But I guess if i really wanted more molly boob groping shots I could probably just wait a little while. There will probably be another one at some point. Β
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Ok man. Well I appreciate the ideas though. There's always room to expand and include new residents its just a matter of time before I do.
Molly will always remain the focus of what I do with this series. I don't know how long I'll keep working on her and her characters but for the foreseeable future she's all that's in the cards. I will admit that 1 of the next projects are rather too NSFW for DA and it'll be a darker.Β
But there will always be fun boob groping in store for Molly. Whether she likes it or not.
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I prefer if the gropey doesn't like it when they get groped.Β
i honestly like the dark stuff more than I let on. I have a preferance for the softer stuff but your work is so good that I am able to appreciate how good the harder stuff looks. As long as it doesn't include the little sister I am sure I will enjoy it just fine. Molly really is my favorite character and Charlotte looked great when she got her comeuppance So I am glad to hear that for at least awhile longer we have Molly stuff to look forward to.
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Yeah its mostly Molly focused stuff for the next few projects. I probably won't be doing anything that focuses exclusively on another one of my ladies for awhile. Which is a shame in some ways I know Gabriella has plenty of fans.
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Thats really what I wanted to hear. When you angle Gabriella up just right she is great. But Molly is always fantastic.
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Hahaha. Well I'm glad I'm making your dreams come true.
One of my future projects is a Molly/Gabriella adventure so she will be getting some love.
But its like 3rd in line. Gotta finish up the current comic, then there's another Molly comic, a double secret Molly project, and then I'll be able to get to Molly and Gabriella having an ENF adventure.
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country/southern characters could be pretty cool. A couple of Kentucky cousins visiting would make a good series. A kissing cousins male character could be included if you were inclined. Making a Grace or a Nora ashamed of their more country relatives is a decent Idea. The good twin the country girl and molly is a solid enough to foundation to have a school christian club (Windy upskirts in Choir robes panty shot or field trip to christian theme park). All come to mind pretty quickly. It is really up to you. Even for the stuff I want to commission I would rather you make up characters you want to do than the stuff I think I want to see. I really wouldn't have thought up the stolen date scenario but it is your best work so far. I am pretty sure part 6 is going to be my new favorite. Β
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Christian theme park? I guess naughty things could happen there too.
Yup I'll just need to make a decision about it eventually. Until then there's plenty of projects to work on.
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I live in Tampa and we have a christian theme park in Orlando. It could also be a museum. Or it could take place on the bus on the way to the field trip. The christian club could feud with Charlotte's key club or even Gabriela's multicultural club. They could have a booth at the carnival or a float at the homecoming parade.Β
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I know that christian theme parks are a thing but I wasn't able to imagine specifically what embarrassing thing could happen there.
I hadn't thought much about different clubs at their school though. That would require alot of extra characters.
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I really was just brainstorming. On ideas for the country girl. seeing what stuckΒ
In order to do the powderpuff game you need two teams of five girls. For ten female students. Unless you wanted to have them play against a generic rival school with throw away characters which has some potential (private school Charlotte got kicked out of Catholic school, reform school for girls). So you have the basis for some school clubs.
So far you have
1 Molly
2 Gabriela
3 Charlotte
4 Dana
5 Evey
6 Noelle
Two spots going to twins of some kind seems to be the direction you are headed in so two more to go. You want to pick characters you, monkeycheese, can and want to use again in your world. If you want to use mob movie puns like, say hello to my little friends, offer you can't refuse, sleeps with the fishes, then the mafia princess is a good character. You kind of seemed interested in the country girl gingham dress, boots, cutoffs, overalls, pigtails, milking machines, line dancing I am from the south so that doesn't read as a villian type character. An older meth/weed dealing brother on the other hand. I like the bull lesbian and the black athlete
just for the sports angle but really a basketball game where Molly gets sharked in a similiar outfit to the one she is wearing in powderpuff or track and field is a little redundant (I am big fan of Molly falling victim to a good top sharking but the world doesn't revolve around me). part of the fun of stolen date is that the outfits and hair changed up so nicely. Β If you don't like bull Lesbians and don't want to draw gropings and uncomfortable locker room moments you should pick a different character or re-imagine the exchange student to something you do like like karate master Japanese school girl or hard partying Irish redhead. Β The Irish redhead doesn't have to be an exchange student. The big question is can you use the characters and do one offs with the characters and more importantly do you want to. If you don't want to draw principal muppet getting kicked in the balls by a girl in japanese schoolgirl outfit or kicking a student who opened up her karate gi jacket. A soldier girl ROTC series isn't a bad idea either.
opportunity for mud
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I appreciate the input and suggestions as always. Making the new characters needs to be on the back burner for now. I have 3 or 4 projects in the works right now that are going to require most of my art time. Always open to talk about it though.
I'm not sure how I feel about the bull lesbian. Its not an archetype that's ever really crossed my mind before. Perhaps because I really prefer girly girls. Tomboys don't really enter my mind either if I'm being honest, that's probably why I don't already have an athlete character. But once we get to your project, I'm more than happy to design and make characters that you want to see. (Since you'll be paying for it)
Again lots of interesting ideas. I think the soldier girl is an interesting idea. And if I was going to do a redhead/ginger I'd certainly make her Irish.
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If you're going to go the mafia princess route with the twins with one being good and one being bad you could have one in an animal print dress and the other in a cotillion dress almost the same dress but white, blue, or pink. big hair vs strait hair or pig tails vs ponytail. The good one would almost definitely be friends with Molly. I wouldn't object to using Evey's old body type as a base I liked that body design and was sorry we didn't get more than two shots of it before it was improved on.
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Really? I partly redesigned Evey because I felt like her body type was too close to Molly's.
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well I am pretty sure I've mentioned this once or twice but I like molly quite a bit. i am a big enf fan and a big breast fan. Evey has a great design but she doesn't embarrass which leaves all the heavy enf breast work on Molly (not that she isn't up to it but still). Charlotte did a decent job in car wash 13 and 15 of offering up her boobs for the cause but really pales next to Molly. Unless the exchange student leans heavy towards busty german milkmaid or the athlete student was top heavy as well ass asstastic Mollys nips may get sunburnt if she has to go it alone not to mention the bruising from being the sole target of a good groping. I think the new Evey was a big improvment mostly because of the hair. I also liked that she was darker than the original. But with no shame you miss out on all the facial expressions that really sets your work apart.
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Heh... I didn't really think about that. That maybe Molly was the only real big titted girl out there. Well aside from Evey but you already talked about why she doesn't make the best character for ENF. Anyways the more I think about the twins thing the more I like it. I don't know exactly what direction I'll go with it. I kind of like the mafia princess idea but I'm not sure what the heck she'd/they'd be doing in a semi-rural suburban town like Farmer's Fields.
Maybe hiding out with relatives as their family is in danger?
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You don't have to do mafia princess to get the Jersey girl Italian thing going in pennsylvania. I assumed when you said you were thinking up bathing suit story ideas they were going to take place at the Jersey shore. Β You just get all the mob movie puns if you go mafia princess. After looking at the overalls picture it struck me that you could also do country girl too/instead. Also a wigger/skater character could be a possibility. Valley/surfer girl is another idea. whatever it takes to get ten female characters to get to ten for the game next year works for me. I really wasn't giving Charlotte enough credit on her rack to be honest. The carwash shot where Dana is stripping off her shirt was one of my favorite shots so maybe you don't need to have another big boob character. Molly must be doing a good enough job in that regard if I still want to see her breast whipped out. Β Β
I like twins just because the dimension of one exposure of one equals exposure of the other.Β
The mafia angle could be witness protection. Or they could run the local sanitation company.Β
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Those are all possibilities. I'll have to give it more thought and of course I'm always working on something new.
And I'm sort of surprised I hadn't done some sort of farm girl already. Or at least thought of one. I like most southern/farm girl characters that appear on shows.
One way or another I'm going to make some twin characters up. I feel the possibilities for them can be particularly fun.
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She's not nice!
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Todd Cheese has a web site and writes r rated enf stories. He commented on this entry so maybe he will read this. I am not sure which came first but Biker's artwork uses some of the same characters from Todd Cheese's Jenny Stories. If writerx is Afrokingj then I am not sure were I read the writerx stories then. I don't know the specifics on his stories but if I remember the name they're probably good. I do know I liked his suggestion of taking the series to college. That eliminates any age issues with your characters. A good idea for a college story is work experience class where the girls temp at various jobs where they are subject to harassment from bosses and customers in a variety of outfits really just a montage of payoff shots with a wrap around story where principal and teacher are getting paid to send girls to employers.
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Oh ok, I'll keep an eye out then.
I had thought about sending the girls to different jobs for stuff like that. Though I hadn't specifically thought of sending them to college. That would be a pretty fun story arc though.
It'd be a pretty long and intense comic or I could do it slowly with a series of unrelated images. At this point I wouldn't think about doing it until next year... but its nice to plan in advance.
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