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Part 4Special thanks to lock444 for helping with the dialogue on this page.
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The college idea was writerx's from the streamΒ
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Right I know. I just hadn't given it any serious thought until now. I was drawing during the stream so some of the stuff we talked about I out right forget.
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As far as the page views goes I actually thought they were up since the car wash. If you're 500-600ish views in a week vs 1000ish in a year then you are way up. I am sure thats because the art work on this series is so good but my over inflated sense of self thinks that having a public conversation about enf ideas helped some. I am pretty sure that your next submission is gonna be way up since I suspect a payoff shot.Β
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Yeah I guess I was looking at favorites on the recent series as compared to the past ones. Nearly half as many favorites so far but you're right the next one should have quite a few more favorites and views.
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Some one put your humiliation on the field up on one click chicks "drawn enf" board which is where I found you. One click doesnt have a problem with links. They won't let you enlarge any of the thumbnails unless you have a membership but you can click on the links. Putting up some payoff shots there might drive some eyes to your work.
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Drawn ENF board? I wasn't aware of it previously. I"ll have to check it out... I don't know how some of my stuff would be received there though.
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The x rated rapey stuff probably wouldn't fly. But the r rated boobs, butts, and panty shots are perfect for that forum. Charlotte pulling up Molly's cheerleader shirt was posted there about a year ago. Its more of a thread on oneclickchicks but it is something like 300 pages of pictures and commentary. I know one of the nude school adventures is on page 172. I can't find "humilation on the field" though.
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Ok, I'll check it out at some point this week.
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I know... everyone is so mean to her
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i am on a budget for the next year but after that I will have some extra cash. i plan on getting Β some commision work done then. powderpuff if you haven't gotten to it by then is at the top of my list. I know that you would need to create new characters to round out the teams. if you did all the female students plus the two i recomended you would need one more to get a five on five game. I like the powderpuff idea because it allows you to spread out the pay off shots; tank top pulled up, tank top pulled down, shorts pulled down from the back, shorts pulled down from the front, bull lesbian getting in a good grope, atomic wedgie, football huddle ass shot. you could also get away with reusing a lot of the same backgrounds. You could then reuse them again for a regular football game where humiliation on the field happens as well. I like the idea of adding a male character from the AV club to run the jumbo tron camera. I think he could be the camera guy from the car wash. I am sure the principal wouldn't mind. He could run a website devoted to the goings on at school that gets the reporters attention. Charlotte could be in cahoots with him come yearbook time.
Again I really like that Ron isn't holding any of Molly's past incidents against her. Not slut shaming is a very good message. I think you were right to start here. It was nice to see Molly happy in her dress even if only for a Β while. The good news its probably better to get this treatment from Grace at home than to get it from Charlotte at the dance. The bad news is there's more than one dance during the year.
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So we've got two conversations going on here. I'm going to condense it down to one. It makes it easier for me to get back to you in a more timely manner.
Yeah the little brother is a trouble maker that just wants to see some tits and cause some chaos. Ultimately I'm sure he'd like to get a squeeze or something down the road.
Yeah we'll see how the hostess thing goes. I'm glad you're enjoying what I'm doing so far and that I'm opening you up to new experiences?
I don't know how furry you are for the Chipettes... I mean... they look 99% like human characters... they even have regular human ears. Its just the nose that's different.
Well if you wanted to commission something like an image series/comic for the powder puff game it would be fairly expensive. Not to deter you but doing one of these takes quite a bit of time and work. But I'm up for it if you are, down the road of course.
Yeah I suppose the humiliation won't be as bad because its not public. And so far this one is sorta just mean... but it does get... a little intense at the end. I don't want to spoil anything though.
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i was trying to keep the conversation going in multiple places because I thought our conversations were contributing to page views. I know the art work on this series has improved greatly since the car wash but in a week you have half the views as some of the payoff shots from a year ago. I find our interactions interesting and I am assuming others do as well. I was kind of hoping writerx would add his ideas to the mix some time. I like his work and thought he had some interesting thoughts during the stream. Also Todd Cheese is a good writer and honestly when I suggested hosting a card game it popped into my head as a combination of his poker story and some other stuff from literotica. He already has some kind of relationship with another artist with a paysite that's pretty good.Β
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Yeah I dunno why my overall page views are down. Guess I did something that offended somebody... that or I'm not drawing enough naked girls. Well we can keep the different threads going on then.
Writerx is AfrokingJ on DA, I think. And yup, he does have some sweet ideas.
I don't think I'm familiar with Todd Cheese's writings.
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For the commission series it is nessesary to have
One character creation page for bull lesbian exchange student askmollymoocow are there any exchange students in your school?
one character creation page for Flo Jo/Serena black athlete student askmollymoocow who is the best athlete at your school?
one character creation page for not thought up student preferably busty askmollymollymoocow Does Evey have the biggest boobs in school?
one character creation page for little brother if not done yet askmollymoocow Charlotte do you have any siblings?
one character creation page for AV club camera man askmollymoocow does your school have an AV club?Β
picture of box on door step, brother opening door from inside. dialog Can you bring in the uniforms for your sisters powderpuff game. sure mom. thought bubble, this gives me an idea.
picture of little brother sitting at table with needle and thread, scissors, glue, pliers, working on a front clasp bra. could just be hands.
Charlotte telling her team as they are getting dressed in locker room to give the crowd their moneys worth or a good show. Uniforms basically mollys outfit from thoughts on daddy except white with red waste bands on shorts.
Mollys team getting ready Evey smoking a joint. It helps me throw straight. uniforms red with white waste band.Β
montage of payoff shots Charlotte's team exposing Molly's team about six shots. really up to you to come up with specifics but I liked Molly's body in the tongue shot so shirt pulled down that angle maybe. Atomic wedgie/shorts pulled down from the back sounds like Gabriella, Bull lesbian boob grope Evey or Busty girl if Noelle plays for Charlotte. Β
Charlotte's team scores a touch down loud ping noise is heard internal Β tank top shot of bra Β giving way in the front. four more pings as girls celebrate.Β
five shocked faces
Huddle up assshot Dialog my bra is useless well suck it up we just have to stop them this last play.
Charlotte pantses Molly Β to her ankles in the end zone behind shot camera man gets front shot
Jumbotron Molly from the frontΒ
charlotte's team celebrates win
Charlotte's brother turns on sprinklers.
White team uniforms turn see thru
I am assuming it will be in the 500 range I will be able to swing that a year from now. I would be open to changing up details .
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I think you already have a perfect AV club president. The glasses guy with the camera from the car wash. If he had a website devoted to exposing the girls of farmers fields ENFF embarrassed nude farmers fields. Shoe cams for upskirts, hidden camera stuff and the big one Shark Week. Where a prize is given for the best sharking. All the girls could get involved as victims including the moms. The big payoff could be Molly and Charlotte catching a perp and being interviewed on the news and well you know.Β Β
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Yeah that would be a bit of work but so far sounds great. I don't have any specific comments at the moment but perhaps when we get closer to pulling the trigger on this I'll have more thoughts.
That probably would be the price range for something like that. The Β particularly rough parts are designing new characters and any sort of crowd shots.
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In about a year I will be able to swing that. I know character creation takes awhile to get just right. I see the bull lesbian as big, like two heads taller than the other girls and solidly built like the wrestler Chyna, blond Β and not really a fan service character except she is grabby and strong enough manhandle the other girls. I see her as a cheerleader who is the base for all the poses. She probably makes the locker room a little awkward. Her host family might be religous and Charlotte uses this to control her.
The black athlete student I see as built kind of like serena williams. She maybe goes along with Charlotte because her father has some pull with local college scholarship/admissions board. Maybe Charlottes brother uses this to his advantage as well.Β
The other girl I am not sure about I think she should be busty like Evey. I think Evey looks great but she doesn't seem to embarrass easy. I kind of like the idea of jersey girl Italian Mafia princess Maybe with a father in sanitation.
I did the math wrong there still needs to be another character to round out the teams unless you went with a set of twins. But there is a year to work on it.
Hopefully the crowd shots and backgrounds can get recycled in future series.Β
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Just make sure you keep these ideas handy once we are ready to move forward.
I like all the ideas so far. I wouldn't personally stray too far from any of them. Unless I think something won't work for x reason but I won't know until I start planning things out.
You're right Evey doesn't embarass easily. In fact I don't know what it would take to embarass her at all.
I do particularly like the set of twins idea though. Not sure why I haven't come up with that as of yet.
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Twins would be easier Β to develop than the Mafia princess, pigtails and ponytail color clothing colors reversed. I like my plan but its your world. I appreciate you letting me dabble a little bit in it. The twin idea hit me when you did the doppelganger thing. I like the idea of the bad one turning on Charlotte for exposing her sister. Β Thats the problem with Evey she has the best rack but doesn't lend herself to enf stuff.Β
A good twin question for the blog would be for principal muppet. If you could sleep with any one of your students who would it be? Do the twins count as one choice?
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Well... the twin could be Mafia princesses. 
Yeah again I don't know how to embarrass that lady. She just likes being naked anyways.
That is a pretty good question for the principal. I'll have to save it for whenever I get around to looking at twin characters.
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I am an aspiring writer and I will listen to suggestions Β as to what should happen to my Tampa Bay bail bondsman and his ex porn star partner but its my decision at the end of the day. Same thing here with your work. I like the idea of good and bad twins and a busty jersey girl mafia princess but if you wanted to combine them into busty mafia princess twins one taking after the dad and one taking after the homemaker stepford wife mom or some other idea, it is really your decision. Β I said it before you make great decisions so I have no problem defering to you. I am way to boob focused and would have been all about the boob shot and I would have missed out an a great pantyied ass shot if I had been in charge. That would have been tragic. I would have also skipped over the bra shot and gone straight topless already which would have been a mistake. I enjoy the anticipation of what comes next. I think another good twin question for the blog would be for the AV guy which girl has the most hits on the website? Answer the twins. Or is there any content you won't put on the website? Answer mafia princess.Β
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Well your feed back certainly helps me out too. I like the ideas you have. It is a matter of me finding time to implement them. That and feeling like I don't spend enough time on the characters I already created.
Yeah once they exist as actual characters that will be a good question.
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As long as you know that you don't have a problem with me thinking I have more ownership than I do. I am a big fan of the enf genre and your work is my favorite. Personally I prefer the clothes ripped off in public, cop a feel without permission stuff to the more graphic stuff. That's why what i suggest is kind of tame. But 80s Karoke contest (twins would be perfect for Robert Palmer group) , shark week, work experience. and powderpuff, all have opportunities to use the other girls. Shark week could even get the moms involved. Moms could be involved in the school play but I don't have any ideas for that right now. Β
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No problem at all. In the end I have final say on what happens of course but I certainly won't stop you from coming up with ideas that probably fit inside the universe anyways. The less graphic stuff is always safer anyways for its inclusion into the canon. I like to be in control of any traumatizing incidents between the characters.
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oh shieet, she gonna rip ot off x3
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Fuck yeah bro
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x3c we gonn gieet tits shot? x3
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Oh yeah we goon gieet it!
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awww yeeee! x3
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is it too early to start asking about who Ron is and what he's like? I know from ask he is Molly's crush. Β I am glad to see Molly pulled a date with her crush. I am sorry it doesn't look like it is going work out for her. I hate to see that for Molly. At the same time I am glad I get to watch it not work out.
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You can ask questions about him. I have a few thoughts on him. Originally he was supposed to be indifferent to Molly but didn't like that she got picked on. I sort of had a love triangle situation with him, Molly and Charlotte but I may end up scrapping that.
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i like that he seems to find Molly attractive. I am happy that there is a wide range of body types that are celebrated in your work. I can see Charlotte being motivated to torture Molly and Gabriella out of jealousy and insecurity. Molly fills out a tank top better than Charlotte and depending if you're a leg man or a boob man looks better in her cheerleader outfit (same thing with the chipmunks). According to the comment section here Gabriella beats Charlotte in the ass department. I'll leave that to the butt fans to debate. I can see Ron picking Molly over Charlotte easy. I also really like that even though Molly has had a few public mishaps Ron is above that. I am hoping that Grace doesn't blow Molly's big night completely. A nice ending would be Ron continuing on with the date after all the drama goes down. The Molly moment that appears to be coming would make me more interested in Molly not less. I could see Grace trying to seduce him scaring him away.Β
I can see Charlotte using Molly's crush on Ron against her. Especially with the new dialog and panel style. I can see Charlotte Blackmailing Molly especially if Charlotte is in position to hurt Ron unless Molly bites the bullet for him. In my school the girls powder puff girls flag football game at homecoming was as big a ticket seller as any regular football game. If somehow Dana and Evey were really solid on the field and a threat to Charlotte and her crew. Charlotte has a failing test that will burn Ron's chances to play football unless Molly and Gabriella play and throw the game. A good opportunity for a montage of wardrobe malfunctions and bull lesbian gropings finished off with sprinklers going off on white team (red and white school colors) for wet t shirts/sports bras.
I can see Ron playing football does he? Is he aware Mollys history of mishaps and misadventures? Did he witness any of them like the football game from humilation on the field or the pictures from the car wash? Or is this going to be his first Molly moment?Β
I also love that one piece of hair in mollys face it has been extra cute during stolen date.
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I do like the idea of the powder puff game. I can see how that would even lend itself to what I do.
Initially Ron was a football player but now I"m not sure if that's how he'll develop. Really there was going to more to his introduction than showing up to go on a date with Molly... but I felt as though Molly needed something good to happen to her so I skipped any sort of tension there. I guess I could always go back and figure out a story to actually get them together.
He's certainly aware of at least some of the bad things that have happened to Molly. Its hard to not hear about the girl that was naked in school.
Thanks dude!
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She calls her own daughter a slut?! What a fucking bitch!!
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Yup she sure is.
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I hate Grace so much! I just wanna wring her f***ing neck!
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That's awesome
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That you care enough about my characters to hate one of them... yeah that's kind of awesome for me.
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Heehee, poor Molly!Β I hope she was smart enough not to wear her most embarrassing undies beneath that dress.
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Hmm... I'm not sure Molly has any particularly embarrassing underwear... guess we'll have to find out!
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Are You the Todd Cheese the writer?
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Thanks.Β I'm hoping to get back to it someday.
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I recomended a poker game scenario to monkeycheese that was half inspired by your poker game story half by other stories from literotica.
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Don't you do it bad mama !!!!
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