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Published: 2010-09-22 00:54:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 365; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 3
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Description I really don't like how this came out. D:

Well, some parts are okay, like the hair and the sleeves, but it looks so lifeless and boring. Ew.

But it took forever lol. D:

I think I get jealous of other artists too easily. I should really stop doing that lol D: But I'm so old and all these young people are better than me...

/emomoment

ANYWAY. Smiles, everyone! My birthday is in eight days! (lol) I don't wanna turn older, but meh. I should be happy anyway XD So smiles, everyone! 8D
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Comments: 38

verniex [2010-10-11 19:26:02 +0000 UTC]

She's cute. I think it looks bland because you used a lot of gray colors. Still, I like it, and her hat is also tipped in a precocious manner.

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monochromeworld In reply to verniex [2010-10-11 21:00:59 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks <3
Yeah, I think I went overboard on the gray a little >W< I need to learn better color theory, lol. x3
But thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you like it <3

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ImaginationStudio [2010-09-25 01:32:51 +0000 UTC]

You need a nose for her but otherwise this is good.

Lack of nose is what makes her flat. ANyways a youni'n would like to request art from you.

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monochromeworld In reply to ImaginationStudio [2010-09-25 01:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback! XD I agree, her face looks kinda empty lol D: I'm terrible at drawing noses. I tried to add a nose but it's still not very noticeable D':

But thanks! >W<
What request do you have?

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ImaginationStudio In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-25 02:28:35 +0000 UTC]

Draw my OC Compulsion in your style. Information is in my journal and samples in my galary.

Noses are hard but I found out that trying to draw noses in different ways sometimes helps. Try centering the nose between the eyes. I'm an ameature so I don't know if that will work.

I have a special condition for all my artists. They get free reign. If you don't like something then create something of your own.

Oh yea, HAVE FUN IF YOU ACCEPT.

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monochromeworld In reply to ImaginationStudio [2010-09-25 03:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Hm.

While I do like the design and the idea behind the character, I don't think I can accept your request. > A< Sorry.

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ImaginationStudio In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-25 03:24:47 +0000 UTC]

Regrettfully I'm sorry to hear but I can understand. Wish you could reconsider.

I need a hypno ray probably to change his idea.

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monochromeworld In reply to ImaginationStudio [2010-09-25 03:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Awwww. I'm sorry. It's just that right now I have prior obligations with art trades/requests, and I have a huge personal project that I need to finish before I do anything else. D: So don't feel bad XD

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ImaginationStudio In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-25 04:09:38 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Then thats understandable. Just keep me in your list please.

I have a very unqiue OC.

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monochromeworld In reply to ImaginationStudio [2010-09-25 15:11:15 +0000 UTC]

I will XD

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ImaginationStudio In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-26 01:14:38 +0000 UTC]

Then see you later.

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XxDreamAlicexX [2010-09-22 01:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow!Thats really nice and pretty

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monochromeworld In reply to XxDreamAlicexX [2010-09-22 04:01:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much <333

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XxDreamAlicexX In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-22 14:26:32 +0000 UTC]

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monochromeworld In reply to XxDreamAlicexX [2010-09-22 20:50:45 +0000 UTC]

Lol! nice XD

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XxDreamAlicexX In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-22 22:22:44 +0000 UTC]

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Houndofthenight [2010-09-22 01:37:06 +0000 UTC]

Ooooo, the hair and clothes on this are gorgeous! I really love this piece! I don't think it looks lifeless at all. You're probably just getting that sort of impression because the colors are all more subdued.

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monochromeworld In reply to Houndofthenight [2010-09-22 04:02:03 +0000 UTC]

OWO!
Thank you sooo much <333
I kinda thought that when I was coloring it there was too much brown xD So I tried to liven it up a little and it didn't work XD;;;
But I'm glad you still like it! XD Thanks so much! ~ XD

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Houndofthenight In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-22 13:35:20 +0000 UTC]

Lol, I didn't say that there was too much brown! Sometimes calm, neutral colored pictures are just as attractive as bright and colorful ones! Keep up your amazing work! I feel like you've really been improving since I first added you to my watch

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monochromeworld In reply to Houndofthenight [2010-09-24 00:30:11 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, thank you so much <333 It makes me really happy that I'm improving...that's the most important thing for an artist! XD

And thank you for always commenting on my pictures (and useless journals lol) and being supportive, I really appreciate it! <333 Your comments always make me happy <33

Sorry I'm a sap lol D:

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Houndofthenight In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-24 03:30:35 +0000 UTC]

You really have improved and it's very noticeable! <3

And no problem ~ Thank YOU for always being such fun conversation XD Most artists don't talk much to the people who comment so our comment-conversations always make me happy as well!

Being sappy is fine! -__- Just no bursting into tears, okay? XD

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monochromeworld In reply to Houndofthenight [2010-09-26 01:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! xD I hope I can keep improving from now on also... *determined*

Lol! I never understood why some artists done reply to their comments...unless they have tons and tons of comments XD But chyeahhh. Fun conversations FTW XD

No bursting into tears on this side! 8'D
We'll burst into confetti instead XD

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Houndofthenight In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-27 02:21:50 +0000 UTC]

WOOOHOOO!!! I love confetti! We need to get a pinata too!

And agreed. To me, it encourages viewers/watchers to comment if the artist is willing to give them even a few seconds of their time to reply.

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monochromeworld In reply to Houndofthenight [2010-09-27 02:25:15 +0000 UTC]

OMG PINATAS I LOVE THOSE THINGS *A*

And ikr? If the artist never responds, I don't wanna comment, because what's the point? It'd be like talking to a wall Lol D:

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Houndofthenight In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-27 02:28:46 +0000 UTC]

I HAD A PINATA A FEW DAYS AGO! <3

Exactly! And only weirdos talk to walls... >.>

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monochromeworld In reply to Houndofthenight [2010-09-27 13:15:03 +0000 UTC]

OMG PINATAS <3333
Dammit now I want one lol D:

FFFFfffFFF yeah XD *totally hasn't talked to a wall* =3=

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Houndofthenight In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-27 13:34:42 +0000 UTC]

*-* You NEED one... Pinatas = win

<.<; Yup *totes has never talked to a wall...*

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butterflyreverie [2010-09-22 01:33:34 +0000 UTC]

This is pretty. And it reminds me of French pastries, for some reason.

Marble cake personification? 8D

And you have no reason to be jealous. > n> You're like, a year younger than me, and eons ahead artistically.

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mimioncrak [2010-09-22 01:01:13 +0000 UTC]

OMMGGG I love the way you colored her hair ; u ;

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monochromeworld In reply to mimioncrak [2010-09-22 01:09:40 +0000 UTC]

WHAT REALLY. :'D
THANKS SO MUCH <333
I kinda like how the hair came out too 8D Chyeahhhh. XD

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IDKNearLoverPerson [2010-09-22 01:00:25 +0000 UTC]

how are YOU jealous?!
I should be the jealous one!
Lol but this is good AND HAPPY ALMOST B-DAY!

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monochromeworld In reply to IDKNearLoverPerson [2010-09-22 01:09:05 +0000 UTC]

Lol! Thanks <333
I get jealous of the people like `yuumei and the people that are like HOMGAMAZING and they're still younger than me D: I feel like everyone is getting ahead of me artistically lol D:
Buuuuut HAPPY SMILES! 8D Chyeah. And thanks! <3

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IDKNearLoverPerson In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-22 01:17:16 +0000 UTC]

aww she is awesome!
i just started DRAWING drawing like 3 years ago though so i know im behind

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monochromeworld In reply to IDKNearLoverPerson [2010-09-24 00:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Lol! Only three years? D: You're really good for only having drawn for three years o Ao! XD
I'll be at five years on exactly Christmas this year... XD I don't feel like I've made much proggress for five years though D:

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IDKNearLoverPerson In reply to monochromeworld [2010-09-24 03:16:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much madame
even though you have been at it for 5 years I think you dont have much more further to go

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monochromeworld In reply to IDKNearLoverPerson [2010-09-26 01:49:45 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you <333
But I still have a long way to go XD Give me 10 more years and I think I'll get pretty good XD

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Omipon [2010-09-22 00:55:45 +0000 UTC]

oh i think she looks pretty!

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monochromeworld In reply to Omipon [2010-09-22 00:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! >W< xD

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