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I confess I don't rememberWhether you wore your hair down
Or tied it back into a sort-of pony tail;
Whether your dress was red with black spots
Or black with red spots,
Or something else entirely.
But I perfectly recall your smile,
Like Spring’s first sunshine
Whose warmth lingers even now.
I may have already forgotten,
The cadence with which you spoke
Your intonation and inflection;
The questions you asked me
And the answers I found
Down amongst the butterflies.
But I know that your voice
Was an unchained symphony
Was angelsong
A spell of sweet restlessness.
I cannot forget, for I relive
Those precious, timeless moments
Each time the ghost of you
Wanders through my mind.
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Comments: 40
SRudy [2016-09-09 15:55:58 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful, sad and heartbreaking.
Congrats (again) on the well deserved daily deviation.
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monstroooo In reply to SRudy [2016-09-10 08:07:35 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for stopping by
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ArtStudio101 [2016-09-08 03:47:49 +0000 UTC]
Very nice poem. It reminds me of my granny before she passed away. She was a very lovely lady and she always had an angelic smile.
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monstroooo In reply to ArtStudio101 [2016-09-09 12:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Treasure those memories!
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ArtStudio101 In reply to monstroooo [2016-09-09 14:33:27 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome and I will. 😉
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Emily-Byrd [2016-09-08 00:03:16 +0000 UTC]
Amazing and heartfelt work! You should be proud. Many congrats on the DD!!
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monstroooo In reply to Emily-Byrd [2016-09-09 12:34:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I am more surprised than proud, but thoroughly pleased nonetheless
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CupOTea16 [2016-09-07 21:04:48 +0000 UTC]
As a writer myself, I understand having those fluttering thoughts as you're trying to sleep! This is great. Great job, and congrats on the DD!
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adagioconcertino [2016-09-07 18:51:35 +0000 UTC]
Ah, this was a lovely read. Captures that nostalgic sensation and makes me think of my own relationships.
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monstroooo In reply to adagioconcertino [2016-09-09 12:33:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for commenting. Hug someone you love today!
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WillowDeviantX In reply to adagioconcertino [2016-09-07 19:06:06 +0000 UTC]
Quite nostalgic, indeed.
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CSEmber [2016-09-07 12:01:11 +0000 UTC]
I don't remember who you are but you're real pretty
Ah, I kid, it's beautiful
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monstroooo In reply to CSEmber [2016-09-09 12:31:19 +0000 UTC]
To be fair, that's basically the gist Thanks for reading!
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Sleyf [2016-08-27 19:03:00 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed this, it has a sort of calming feel. To me, it doesn't sound regretful or sad, but more like a pleasant kind of memory
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