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Published: 2016-08-25 14:53:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 2368; Favourites: 102; Downloads: 0
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Description I confess I don't remember
    Whether you wore your hair down
    Or tied it back into a sort-of pony tail;
    Whether your dress was red with black spots
    Or black with red spots,
    Or something else entirely.

But I perfectly recall your smile,
    Like Spring’s first sunshine
    Whose warmth lingers even now.

I may have already forgotten,
    The cadence with which you spoke
    Your intonation and inflection;
    The questions you asked me
    And the answers I found
    Down amongst the butterflies.

But I know that your voice
    Was an unchained symphony
    Was angelsong
    A spell of sweet restlessness.

I cannot forget, for I relive
Those precious, timeless moments
Each time the ghost of you
Wanders through my mind.
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Comments: 40

Sel-Diora [2016-09-12 02:01:55 +0000 UTC]

well written.

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shabati12345 [2016-09-11 16:44:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh what a tragedy indeed

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SRudy [2016-09-09 15:55:58 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, sad and heartbreaking.

Congrats (again) on the well deserved daily deviation.

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monstroooo In reply to SRudy [2016-09-10 08:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for stopping by

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YooraAe [2016-09-08 19:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Really nice keep up the good work!

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monstroooo In reply to YooraAe [2016-09-09 12:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks    

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dou-to [2016-09-08 15:22:34 +0000 UTC]

This was a beautiful read. Congrats on the DD!

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monstroooo In reply to dou-to [2016-09-09 12:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!   

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PagesOfDreams [2016-09-08 05:14:56 +0000 UTC]

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monstroooo In reply to PagesOfDreams [2016-09-09 12:36:29 +0000 UTC]

 

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PagesOfDreams In reply to monstroooo [2016-09-10 05:51:40 +0000 UTC]

  

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ArtStudio101 [2016-09-08 03:47:49 +0000 UTC]

Very nice poem. It reminds me of my granny before she passed away. She was a very lovely lady and she always had an angelic smile.

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monstroooo In reply to ArtStudio101 [2016-09-09 12:36:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Treasure those memories!   

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ArtStudio101 In reply to monstroooo [2016-09-09 14:33:27 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome and I will. 😉

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PB-Boss [2016-09-08 01:32:24 +0000 UTC]

               

   

Congrats on the DD~! Beautiful poem!

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monstroooo In reply to PB-Boss [2016-09-09 12:34:51 +0000 UTC]

Cheers!   

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PB-Boss In reply to monstroooo [2016-09-12 04:14:15 +0000 UTC]

 

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Emily-Byrd [2016-09-08 00:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Amazing and heartfelt work! You should be proud. Many congrats on the DD!!

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monstroooo In reply to Emily-Byrd [2016-09-09 12:34:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I am more surprised than proud, but thoroughly pleased nonetheless   

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CupOTea16 [2016-09-07 21:04:48 +0000 UTC]

As a writer myself, I understand having those fluttering thoughts as you're trying to sleep! This is great. Great job, and congrats on the DD! 

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monstroooo In reply to CupOTea16 [2016-09-09 12:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!   

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adagioconcertino [2016-09-07 18:51:35 +0000 UTC]

Ah, this was a lovely read. Captures that nostalgic sensation and makes me think of my own relationships.

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monstroooo In reply to adagioconcertino [2016-09-09 12:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for commenting. Hug someone you love today!

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WillowDeviantX In reply to adagioconcertino [2016-09-07 19:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Quite nostalgic, indeed.

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empellina [2016-09-07 18:07:43 +0000 UTC]

   

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monstroooo In reply to empellina [2016-09-09 12:32:41 +0000 UTC]

 

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empellina In reply to monstroooo [2016-09-13 19:13:06 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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rex-raxon [2016-09-07 18:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Congratulation

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monstroooo In reply to rex-raxon [2016-09-09 12:32:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you   

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LostGryphin [2016-09-07 15:55:39 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! Congrats on the DD.

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monstroooo In reply to LostGryphin [2016-09-09 12:32:10 +0000 UTC]

Cheers!   

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Lintu47 [2016-09-07 12:16:13 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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monstroooo In reply to Lintu47 [2016-09-09 12:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Lintu47 In reply to monstroooo [2016-09-09 14:39:25 +0000 UTC]

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CSEmber [2016-09-07 12:01:11 +0000 UTC]

I don't remember who you are but you're real pretty

Ah, I kid, it's beautiful

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monstroooo In reply to CSEmber [2016-09-09 12:31:19 +0000 UTC]

To be fair, that's basically the gist Thanks for reading!

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Sleyf [2016-08-27 19:03:00 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed this, it has a sort of calming feel. To me, it doesn't sound regretful or sad, but more like a pleasant kind of memory

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monstroooo In reply to Sleyf [2016-09-09 12:30:46 +0000 UTC]

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wispy-blue [2016-08-26 00:01:25 +0000 UTC]

lovely read.

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monstroooo In reply to wispy-blue [2016-09-09 12:30:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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