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CheyWolf [2011-12-12 23:17:51 +0000 UTC]

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Okay, so I absolutely hate writing these things, but when I see amazing art, I get tempted lol. Well, this is my second critique and probably sucks, but this is gorgeous. I love how you drew her! It's so cute! My favorite part is how you turned the tip of the tail into a heart which is pretty unique since curls are commonly used instead. The idea of her being a half flower / half cat hybrid is super awesome. I haven't seen that hybrid yet. Ummm... what else..? OH YEAH! THE EYES ARE ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS! I envy how you draw eyes hehe ^_^` Also, I love the shading too. It looks great. Keep up the good work! ~Kctx48

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nauticca [2011-12-13 21:32:44 +0000 UTC]

shes so cute and adorable!! pretty work!

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Song-bird-of-paradis [2011-11-26 21:31:04 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, she is so sweet and adorable!

Thank you for entering our contest, sha!

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Kitt-Dopts [2011-11-24 23:02:42 +0000 UTC]

i lov it!!! i wanna art trade

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Mofro-Know [2011-11-23 21:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Adorable :3

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ToxicOrion [2011-11-23 20:05:42 +0000 UTC]

Cute ^-^

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Silvra19 [2011-11-23 19:08:35 +0000 UTC]

wow thats buttiful u did grait with the back ground

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AngelaTheWriter [2011-11-23 09:03:14 +0000 UTC]

OMG I love it~

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creepingcreepers [2011-11-23 07:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Oh she has to be the sweetest thing i have ever seen! She is so gorgeous! Thank you for entering! <3

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xwolftriggerx [2011-11-23 06:04:15 +0000 UTC]

Critique time~

First of all, head a little too wide, it should be this tiniest bit smaller width wise.
The eyes are too far apart. Again, a little closer together would make it look a little less awkward.
It also seems everything is smushed to the bottom of the face. Don't be afraid to put it higher up.
The ears are too big. They should be smaller and no cats ears are that triangular.

The width of that scarf around the neck makes the neck seem a little small. I believe this is only because of wrong placement though. The neck should be a little further back, connecting nicely to the back of the head. How it looks here, it makes it look almost as if all of the neck is connected to the bottom of the head.

The chest just immediately connects with the legs. Instead, there should be more rcurving where the chest is and it should look more like the right foreleg is attached to the other side of the body, instead of the side we're looking at.
There is no real show of an upper portion on the legs either. As well, the bottom area of the foreleg shouldn't go from wide to skinny, it should all stay at relatively the same size.
The paw seem to immediately attach to the leg. Remember, don't be afraid to extend the length a bit; cat's feet are small, but not that small.

The curve of the stomach to the hind legs should really happen. It should stay, again, relatively straight, the curve you have here makes it looks as is it's suffering from a severe lack of food.
The back as well could use less of an arch. Cats only curve their backs like this when they want their fur to stand up and make them look larger and more intimidating, since this doesn't seem to be the case here, the back should not curve as such,

The joint on the hind leg attaching the thigh to the heel should not be so low. It should be a little higher up, considering the point the thigh and lower leg attach at.
The lower hind leg should, like the foreleg, not curve from wide to skinny, it should stay relatively skinny.
Problem with paw on hind leg, same as foreleg.

Now that tail looks okay except for the fact the it looks detached. Remember, the tail is simply an extension of the spine and the way you have it here makes it look like a very awkward position for the spine near the top of the tail.

References used for critique: [link] [link]

Good luck and happy drawing

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ascendingstars [2011-11-23 04:50:18 +0000 UTC]

That is so gorgeous! I love the idea behind it, you presented it well.

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apody-opsis [2011-11-23 03:35:26 +0000 UTC]

What a cutie! My name is Lily, too! c:

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NightBlueMoon [2011-11-23 03:29:18 +0000 UTC]

AMG OAO SO PRETTY <333

ITS WONDERFUL!!!

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Nekomichii [2011-11-23 03:29:00 +0000 UTC]

god, I love your shading here she looks so innocent and cute >W< <3~

Great work~ 8'D

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