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Published: 2011-12-09 00:41:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 2405; Favourites: 105; Downloads: 18
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some Whitewing art from the warrior cat books <3i drew this on paper in school first and my friends liked it .3. so i drew it on the computer.
drawn in gimp with my tablet~
you are allowed to use this in a video or anything like that~
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It's so cute and fluffy. c: The only thing I have the issue with is the fluff of the.. give me like 10 minutes, left leg? The leg in front. Maybe it's just me but it seems as though theres a bulging muscle or maybe she/he is just having a bad hair day. I'm not familiar with the books or your OC's, so suppose it's just a trait. But other than that, everything seems flawless.
Their expression gives me the idea that she/he is curious or ready for adventure, if it wasn't the expression you were going for, I suppose a tweak in the eyes/eyebrows would be in order. But suppose it's simply up to the viewer?
The tail is so cute and simple, just makes me want to brush it, same with the hind quarters. There's a little confusion as to how the foot is placed under her/his haunch, but that's me being too anal. xP
ANYWAYS. Beautiful work, I especially like the shades of grey and white, you could have simply been like "NOPE YOU GUYS DONT DESERVE SHADES" but it's beautifully colored. <3
4/5 on Originality because its from a book? Other than that it would be a 5, I just don't want to be all.. Oh my god you created this allll by yourself, just a way to give some credit to the author.
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thank you, and yes the hindlegs are a bit...umm over fluffed and weird looking X3 and yes this charcter is from the books called "Warriors" by Erin Hunter, they are very good.
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It honestly was my first critique, go ahead and go comment on some of my art. I can take the heat! *Braces self*
It's good work. Definately a favorite.
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I love the feather in the backround and your antomy is fine (mine antomy is horrabile just like my spelling every on laughs at the fact that im 16 and cant spell 
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umm please if you want to be "funny" go somewhere else
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Mkay, get ready for a critique. I don't mention what I like (much) on any of my critiques, because I'd feel bad if I didn't like a whole lot. I like this, so don't worry, I'm just being fair and all XD
The anatomy is OK, but it needs improvement.
-That left ear looks way too big.
-The left eye is a little akward. Maybe look at a few references of cats that are facing this position.
-WHISKERS, WHERE ART THOU WHISKERS? D: *le gasp*
-The neck should be way thicker, it looks so skinny. :C
-The front "shoulders" look nice, but the legs look too...straight, not anatomically correct.
-The back leg facing the audience looks broken almost. Make it face more to the front paws, or make the paw in a different possition...
-The tail looks like it's attached to it's leg. When sketching, make a "spine" and extend it past the cat's bottom. Tada, a tail. XD
-A cat's skull is very small compared to it's body. The fur just evens it out....Make the head smaller is what I'm trying to say.
-Make the chest a little bit more outward. Leeetle bit.
Ok, got that out of my system.
Everything else:
-The feather is a ery nice touch, maybe just make it's lineart a lighter shade. If not, that's perfectly fine. It just brings the feather to attraction and may be distracting. But that's all for the feather. C:
-The shading is very nice. Maybe practice it a bit more by looking at refs, but otherwise, very nice.
-The cast shadow isn't correct. It should be slanted the opposite way, as in behind the cat. There is a tiny dark shadow, with a great amount of value in front of the cat. Your lightsource appears to be facing the cat directly. Correct me if I'm wrong!
Um, yeah. Mostly just work on anatomy. Otherwise, good job. Maybe try doing textures or something, like fur, or woodgrain. C:
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This is astounding some of you best work yet. I adore feather
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wjtkewjtkjwlk thank you ;U;!
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Aww she is super cute! Great work! 
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thank you so much! ;U;
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thanks, and i have your comishen sketched out and outlines just need to color it C:
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OH GAWD THE CUTENESS jasdxjgvzkujdfghvkjrdfhbnusetg *Dies*
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YOUR SO VERY WELCOME QUQ
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