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MoonlitBrush — Unintentionally Spreading Happiness, Part 5
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Published: 2015-02-22 06:06:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 23204; Favourites: 174; Downloads: 0
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prev / nextPonyville, like Canterlot, has not advanced far in terms of architectural design. This is speculated to be the result of immortals preferring things the way they remember them. It is also cheaper to repair.
Lets hope this tree doesn't get exploded anytime soon.
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This story's looking good so far.
*adds to watch list*
I'm looking forward to the next part.
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I like where this is going. Also, the way you draw Spike... I'm all over that.
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Did you ever consider investing in a means of delivery that doesn't cost large gemstones every time?
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The Tree Castle will only remain unexploded so long as Michael Bay doesn't get near Pony...
*Bay is seen watching the castle through binoculars* Ooooo! I wonder how much C4 I'd need to blow that up!
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Looking good so far man.
Now we really need someone to animate it.
Perhaps in the style of Winnie the Pooh style narration (aka the kids friendly Stanley Parabola) for the first few pages...
... anyway keep it up! Looking forward to the next part.
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Really love the style here I guess you earned a watcher so I can keep up with the comic.
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I like the captions on the pages. It's like alt text on a webcomic, and adds a bit of humor to every page.
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I agree. The shading and details are top notch.
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Thank Celestia they did not see the two ponies behind them. Or maybe the other way around. Messing with time is a delicate operation.
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Good thing the page is two different panels, right?
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(shifty eyes) is the doctor sending luna secret messages or something? hmm im interested now
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I think immortals would want a change so they could forget past.
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I doubt Twilight would want to forget anything, just in case she forgets a friendship lesson.
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I would like to recommend having a complete table-of-contents list of links on your comics instead of just previous/next links. It would allow for faster and more versatile navigation.
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If they just make a gallery for the comics then they won't have to even bother with a table of contents.
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Well, sure, whatever works. It just makes sense to have it easier to view and navigate than this.
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That is easier once the comic is completed, since it requires updating each older page every time the next one is added. If I keep this system until I finish and then update them all in one go it will save time.
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I have doubts that that would save much time. Just pasting another line to each comic's description would only take a minute or two, I would think.
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If there are twenty pages and each page is a minute of editing, the first page alone is nineteen minutes of edits. If I make one glossary and insert them into each page when I'm done, that takes a total of 20 minutes. One minute more than the first page, but then the other method has each page edited as well.
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Oh come on, copy-pasting a link to the newest comic would not take an entire minute per page. It would take a minute or two to do them all. And considering all the views you're going to get now that EQDaily has linked to you, it makes sense to give your visitors an easier time navigating what you've done so far.
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Now that there is a castle with a princess in residence I can kind of see Ponyville growing into a city. One that just might replace Canterlot one day. I mean who wants to live on a mountainside?
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Grumble. He's probably petitioning for a more accurate cutie mark.
Anyway, this looks great. Your shading is spot on, the gradients are subtle enough to really give their bodies a sense of roundness and texture. Looking at this page right here, I might suggest "ghosting" more empty space around Derpy and the "Doctor" so that they stand out a little better. Standing back, they get lost a bit amongst the scenery.
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I wonder if the Ponyville Home Owners Association, the local Zoning Board, and the Equestrian Historical Registry have complained to the Princesses about that stonkin' glowing crystal tree in the middle of town?
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Whoah. Gorgeous artwork.
Time to go back and read this from the start.
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If that's Derpy and the doctor in the background then you forgot about Derp's wings
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Seriously, this must be influenced by Doctor Whooves and Assistant however small it may be.
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