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------FULLVIEW PLEASE------Yay I made an art \o/ Worked hard with shadows and highlights this time. I feel like much of my work was for nothing once I needed to slap on the extra blue shades, though ;w;
I'm not sure what this is about, yet. I have ideas for a story but there's still so much missing. Somehow I'm scared to even start writing. Drawing I feel comfortable with, since I've been doing it so much for such a long time <3
Thanks everyone for your comments and critiques while I was working on this. You're a big help!
Bubble brushes: [link]
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Rani is my character so no stealing :3
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Yes! We can see that you put some real work in the shading and all the "flow" of the drawing!
Rani looks so beautiful and serene in the middle of all that blue e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l⦠" width="26" height="17" alt="
I really apreciate the hair and all the effects you made.
But I have to point on that bubble brush you used: while it's beautiful and well made, it's a bit repetitive as most of the bubbles are the same. So I think you could edit a little more these or make the bubbles yourself as it isn't a really difficult effect. Or you could do both to save some time e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
Anyway, great work! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you for your comment and critique! I added some different shaped bubbles. Not sure if there are too many now, though. I agree it'd been cool if every bubble was hand made by me *nods* Might try doing that someday when I have the energy for it
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No problem!
I have to use this critique feature more times too.
Yeah, using a greater variety of effects helps to make it work more natural
... but it does require more energy too XD
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Yup XD Thanks again for your input <3
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Tack sΓ₯ jΓ€ttemycket! Nu blir jag glad~
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the (under the water) view is really good! and the bubbles is very nice (Y)
totally awesome
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Sjukt snygg!! Du Γ€r ju hur begΓ₯vad som helst ju...
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Tack XD Glad att du gillar den.
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Aaah it's finished. I am really impressed! It's like your style has grown, this looks so mature. I love the flowy hair and to see how much attetion you paid to the single strands with alle the well placed shadows and highlights. I hope you're proud of this drawing, since you've always complained about drawing hair...
I like the background. Did it take long to actually think of it? It is very simple yet not boring (probably because of the brightness gradient). Good job
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Thank you! I am proud of it
About the background, it did take some time to think of something. I wanted it to be related to my story somehow, but since I have yet to figure out most of it, it was hard.
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This is absolutely gorgeous. I'm glad I was able to see your WIP art - I thought that was amazing, and to see this in full color is just stunning. The way you colored this is very eye-pleasing. :3 Rani's hair must have taken a long time just to draw, but to color it and shade it...well, I take my hat off to you!
Definitely one of my favorite pictures of yours. You can see just how much time and effort you've put into this!
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Thank you! The hair did take quite some time. I wish It wasn't so time consuming for me to make things look decent @_@ Maybe I'm using unnesseccarily tricky techniques. Everyone else can finish their stuff so quickly.
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Well you've gotten my critique already, so anything I say here will be repeating myself. I like the underwater theme you went with though, gives a cool vibe to the thing.
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Thank you! And thanks again for helping out!
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No problem. How long did it take you to make this?
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I started on it almost a month ago. I work slow, haha. If I'd count together all the time I'd say maybe 4-7 days Γ³wΓ³ wow I'm slow....
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Still, it's a beautiful piece of art.
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Glad you think so
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Cute . I would love to make a critic X3
but...its too good XD. *lazy*
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