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This is the new page 3 (formerly page 5), hope you like it and everything, if you want anything explaining just ask. Neal is now like "LEAD US KEL WE LOVE YOU" and she's like "what no i am a child" and then the prince is like "okay fine we're all older and you're still better so lead us, WE JUST REALLY LOVE YOU OKAY" and she's like -_- "fine ugh so stubborn" and then EVERYONE FOLLOWS KEL AND SHE'S TWELVE AND I CAN'T FREAKING DEAL UGH KEL BABY I LOVE YOU SO MU-HU-HUUUUUCH.

In general, I'm pretty happy with this page although WTF THEIR FACES LIKE PLS. Faleron is meant to be 13??? Hush, I always imagined him super princely and beautiful and everything but I have this strange feeling I may have to edit their designs yep. Also Cleon is wrong and it's very upsetting but at least he actually looks like a young person. Although he manages to look younger than the 14 he's meant to be. OH MY GOD AGES HOW DO YOU??

SO NOW WE CONTINUE WITH VOLUME 2 OF
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Roughs: page 1
Roughs: page 2
Roughs: page 3
Roughs: page 4
Roughs: page 5
Roughs: page 6

Advice/constructive criticism/opinions very welcome! And just ask if any of the panels/pages aren't clear, we're at the stage where I really need to know if anything doesn't work

Characters, story and idea (c) Tamora Pierce
Script, art (c) Me

Description
This is the new page 3 (formerly page 5), hope you like it and everything, if you want anything explaining just ask. Neal is now like "LEAD US KEL WE LOVE YOU" and she's like "what no i am a child" and then the prince is like "okay fine we're all older and you're still better so lead us, WE JUST REALLY LOVE YOU OKAY" and she's like -_- "fine ugh so stubborn" and then EVERYONE FOLLOWS KEL AND SHE'S TWELVE AND I CAN'T FREAKING DEAL UGH KEL BABY I LOVE YOU SO MU-HU-HUUUUUCH.

In general, I'm pretty happy with this page although WTF THEIR FACES LIKE PLS. Faleron is meant to be 13??? Hush, I always imagined him super princely and beautiful and everything but I have this strange feeling I may have to edit their designs yep. Also Cleon is wrong and it's very upsetting but at least he actually looks like a young person. Although he manages to look younger than the 14 he's meant to be. OH MY GOD AGES HOW DO YOU??

SO NOW WE CONTINUE WITH VOLUME 2 OF
Thumbnails
Roughs: page 1
Roughs: page 2
Roughs: page 3
Roughs: page 4
Roughs: page 5
Roughs: page 6

Advice/constructive criticism/opinions very welcome! And just ask if any of the panels/pages aren't clear, we're at the stage where I really need to know if anything doesn't work

Characters, story and idea (c) Tamora Pierce
Script, art (c) Me