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This is the new page 4 (formerly page 6), AND FINALLY WE CONFRONT JOREN YEAHHHHHHH. Kel's all like "STOP TIHS CHILDISHNESS" and Vinson (who I need to edit, he's meant to be long and gangly, but at least I got the pimples right, I guess??) proves her point by being like "hurhur says who?" and she's like "SO SAY WE ALL" (and again I am crying) and then Balduin (I LOVE BALDUIN????) is like "yeah bro stop being lame also you're making everyone agree with kel so there" and also he is super tall although I admit I may have overdone the height difference there with bb Kel.

Don't worry btw, I'm going to be labelling people in some way as they appear, since this scene has a lot of people turning up for like one line and obvs out of context it's difficult to know who they are, especially with everyone envisioning them differently. I'm currently playing with ways of doing that. Anyway, in other news, I quite like the flow of this page and the panelling, however rough it may currently be. Also I'm now much happier with the last two panels than I was with my thumbnails. Yeppp.

SO NOW WE CONTINUE WITH VOLUME 2 OF
Thumbnails
Roughs: page 1
Roughs: page 2
Roughs: page 3
Roughs: page 4
Roughs: page 5
Roughs: page 6

Advice/constructive criticism/opinions very welcome! And just ask if any of the panels/pages aren't clear, we're at the stage where I really need to know if anything doesn't work

Characters, story and idea (c) Tamora Pierce
Script, art (c) Me

Description
This is the new page 4 (formerly page 6), AND FINALLY WE CONFRONT JOREN YEAHHHHHHH. Kel's all like "STOP TIHS CHILDISHNESS" and Vinson (who I need to edit, he's meant to be long and gangly, but at least I got the pimples right, I guess??) proves her point by being like "hurhur says who?" and she's like "SO SAY WE ALL" (and again I am crying) and then Balduin (I LOVE BALDUIN????) is like "yeah bro stop being lame also you're making everyone agree with kel so there" and also he is super tall although I admit I may have overdone the height difference there with bb Kel.

Don't worry btw, I'm going to be labelling people in some way as they appear, since this scene has a lot of people turning up for like one line and obvs out of context it's difficult to know who they are, especially with everyone envisioning them differently. I'm currently playing with ways of doing that. Anyway, in other news, I quite like the flow of this page and the panelling, however rough it may currently be. Also I'm now much happier with the last two panels than I was with my thumbnails. Yeppp.

SO NOW WE CONTINUE WITH VOLUME 2 OF
Thumbnails
Roughs: page 1
Roughs: page 2
Roughs: page 3
Roughs: page 4
Roughs: page 5
Roughs: page 6

Advice/constructive criticism/opinions very welcome! And just ask if any of the panels/pages aren't clear, we're at the stage where I really need to know if anything doesn't work

Characters, story and idea (c) Tamora Pierce
Script, art (c) Me