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Published: 2017-08-13 14:53:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 68479; Favourites: 509; Downloads: 85
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Don’t ask me on what Vanessa is going to do. She doesn’t know, maybe I don’t even know.
But we both may have an idea...  
With people who peck, there is always a pecking order


Most of the clothes are from the spitfire contest in my DA journal so if you want to enter one of these days you have to have an eye on my journal
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Sisters Tremaine
Vanessa
Eric
Ariel



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Comments: 288

GhostRiderGirl In reply to ??? [2017-08-15 19:22:20 +0000 UTC]

Well I do Hope Sooner or later shes not going to win no matter how hard you try.

What about throw her in a water fountain that cover everything  

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Morloth88 In reply to GhostRiderGirl [2017-08-15 19:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Sounds perfect!
Water fountain sounds perfect

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GhostRiderGirl In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-16 14:47:04 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha

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hiddenbrokenheart In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 18:40:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh my! Vanessa you're a nasty vile person, that's why he doesn't like you! I love that Adam is chasing Meg for getting him soaked. 

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Morloth88 In reply to hiddenbrokenheart [2017-08-17 11:57:07 +0000 UTC]

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hiddenbrokenheart In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-20 02:26:14 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait to see her facade fall apart like Ursula did once she got speared. 

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Morloth88 In reply to hiddenbrokenheart [2017-08-21 12:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Blood thirsty ^^

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hiddenbrokenheart In reply to Morloth88 [2017-09-02 16:29:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm a homicidal chihuahua according to friends lol

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hiddenbrokenheart In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-20 02:22:51 +0000 UTC]

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Teehee100 In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 18:24:26 +0000 UTC]

Who is chasing Meg in the background? Anastasia is the smart one here and I think she needs new friends. Vanessa why did you think that this was a good plan????? Lying to start with is not great and he doesn't like you as a person. Also Eric's logic is flawed. Like dude dating someone because you like their singing voice and nothing else is a poor plan. Anyway everyone looks great and I am particularly awed by everyone's expressions and hair. 

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Morloth88 In reply to Teehee100 [2017-08-23 09:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Beast is chasing her because she squirted grape juice at him. it's all in good fun.

Is Anastasia the smart one? That s not what I was thinking when I made this trip but we each see thing differently.

Lying is a real bad way to start a relationship of any kind.

Thank you for the nice comment

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LadyDaliena In reply to Teehee100 [2017-08-13 20:35:58 +0000 UTC]

Meg is being chased by Adam, the human form of the Beast from 'Beauty and the Beast''.

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Teehee100 In reply to LadyDaliena [2017-08-15 16:00:29 +0000 UTC]

Ah, that makes sense. 

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glowworm56 In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 17:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Anastasia is quite adorable here! Also, I really don't think it's the smartest idea to talk about this while Eric and Ariel are both clearly within earshot.

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Morloth88 In reply to glowworm56 [2017-08-17 11:53:42 +0000 UTC]

She is?
I guess sympathy will colour peoples eyes.
  Me too. I have made her the pecked hen in the flocked.

They are busy with their stuff and it's not like the girls are screaming, maybe Anastasia, once ^^

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glowworm56 In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-17 12:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I always liked Anastasia for some reason as a kid out of the two stepsisters--even before the sequels made her out to be a decent person.

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Morloth88 In reply to glowworm56 [2017-08-17 13:07:31 +0000 UTC]

I am sorta drawn to Drizz now,
It just because she doesn't have her own story or all that developed personality, I can fill her with my own ideas.

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Merlinfangirl89 In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 17:18:13 +0000 UTC]

Oj! vanessa är hemsk! Men det var Ursula också såvitt jag minns. Ha ha! På sista bilden ser jag att Meg får rusa för livet! Men det förstod vi ju båda två! Stackars Petronella! Jag räknade antalet böcker och hon bär sexton stycken! Det är mer än jag orkar bära. Jag gissar att det är Vanessas böcker? Vilket kräk hon är! Hon kunde väl bära några, eller skaffa en kärra! Gabriella kunde också ha hjälpt till och bära.

Jag hoppas du inte har något emot att jag skapar teorier. Jag gissar att Vanessa kommer att lura Ariel till något dumt. Nu vet ju inte jag hur du har tänkt dig, men tänk om Ariel är en dålig simmare i den här versionen? Vanessa kanske lurar henne till någon pool och ser till så hon ramlar i ?

Det var bara en teori. Bra jobbat med bilden! Längtar till nästa serie!

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Morloth88 In reply to Merlinfangirl89 [2017-08-17 11:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Mobbare har en tendens att vara det.
Jag har diskuterat det, och Megs straff när Odjuret får tag i henne blir ett dop i en fontän ^^

Det är tungt att bäre tre pers böcker
De låter henne bära för hon är den som är lägst i rangordningen bland mobbarna. När ingen annan är där att mobba. hackar de på varran. Inte hälsosamt.


Alla gissar hej vilt. Jag tar lite isnperation av det och flinar åt andra och suckar djupet åt de tredje.
Vissa idear är bra, andra för komplicerade för min berättar stil, och vissa är inte specielt hållbara om man tänker igenom dem.
Ha kul med alla teorier ^^

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Merlinfangirl89 In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-18 12:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Om Meg ska få ett dopp i fontänen, får vi hoppas att hon har ombyten!

Angående böckerna och mobbningen: Förstår nu vad du menar. Skulle inte förvåna mig om hon  släpper böckerna rakt på deras fötter en vacker dag! Hehe!

Lycka till med nästa bild!

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Nara-Wolf In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 16:48:29 +0000 UTC]

May I just say that Anastasia is kinda of adorable here? I would like her to meet real friends and get away from those two, she deserves better.

Back to the point. Well, we all knew Vanessa would do something about it, not just sit back and wait. I may have an idea or two of what she might do, but I don't know if I'm right (or if my ideas are plain stupid), so I will keep my mouth shut.
And Adam chasing Meg is just too funny and cute.

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Morloth88 In reply to Nara-Wolf [2017-08-17 11:51:25 +0000 UTC]

I think she's a coward waiting to find a reason to realize she can do better. Love or being loved for the wrong reason will wake her up, probably after high school.

I don't mind stupid ideas, I've heard them before and most ideas are interesting even if not viable, and some are amazing but not possible.


I am now itching to draw him catching up to her but it wouldn't further any plot

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Nara-Wolf In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-17 18:56:34 +0000 UTC]

You mean Anastasia or Vanessa?

I've thought Vanessa may give Ariel something that will make it impossible for her to sing or try to embarrass her in public while having recorded Ariel singing another song and use it as dub. I'm not sure this would work (sure not in the long run), but it was one of the ideas I've had.

But it would be kinda fun and cute anyway XD

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Morloth88 In reply to Nara-Wolf [2017-08-17 19:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Anastasia is a coward. For now at least.


I like hearing the theories Someone is bound to be right or maybe many are ^^

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Nara-Wolf In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-17 19:36:18 +0000 UTC]

I think it depends on certain details of her situation that... From long and personal experience, I can say that loneliness can do awful things to people and toxic friends are like any other abusive relationship, they can be pretty "passive-agressive" and also manipulating, so it's not simple to just "wake up" and get away from them. In a way, it's like the abused wife that can't leave the husband because she still thinks he actually loves her. Like I said, depending of certain details, perhaps it isn't that Anastasia is being a coward, she may be just misguided and this is actually a pretty sad situation. I wouldn't be surprised if she hangs with them more due to fear of never making friends on her own than anything else, but she can't admit it even to herself.

If you spend too much time with people putting you down (even if in the passive, subtle way that I'm sure Vanessa knows how to use and maybe Drizella does at home too), you end up believing it, you just can't think in a different way. You end up taking it as a pure fact and you can't just walk away from the only friends you have because you're too scared to be alone.

Another point, Drizella is her sister. This may also reflect their relationship at home and how Anastasia is too used to it to see that this is not real friendship. Like they say, better the devil you know.
Like I said, I think she may need to grow up a little more to realize the truth or someone actually pointing this out to her. I actually would like to see her seeing Ariel with Belle and Rapunzel and gathering courage to face the true facts and leaving Vanessa and Drizella.

Like I said, I have no idea of what will happen, but I'm dying to see!

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EllaJPhotography In reply to Nara-Wolf [2017-08-13 18:17:11 +0000 UTC]

I was gonna say the same thing about Adam and Meg! It made me smile

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Nara-Wolf In reply to EllaJPhotography [2017-08-17 18:56:39 +0000 UTC]

Same here

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moreofafanficwriter In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 16:40:25 +0000 UTC]

Short, but I have a couple of things to say about this one.
1)God Vanessa so you've figured that one out all by yourself huh? Of course he doesn't like you! You haven't given him a single... Wel you haven't given him more than one reason to even pay attention and none to like you. Why do you want him in this way? Shouldn't you want a  guy who looks at you as though you are the sun to his world? I don't get you.
2) I can't believe Ursula of all people agrees with me on this one. And she is so blasé about the whole thing. She couldn't care less about Nessa's drama.
3) Anastasia is being super cute here I can't help it. She's just the 'I am secretly really nice but hang with the wrong crowd' type. We knew that already but you do a good job of showing this in every single frame she's in. Sure she was teasing quasi in the beginning but it looks like she discovered a different side of herself since then. And they ignore her for the most part! 
4) I love all the little details in the background. The graffiti on the poster, tasteful as it may be it still is graffiti. Herk talking to Eric even if it isn't clear and the continuity from previous comic with Adam still furious at Meg.
It is amazing how much you've grown since this comic started. I looked back on some of the first pages and the progress is astounding.

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Morloth88 In reply to moreofafanficwriter [2017-08-17 11:45:03 +0000 UTC]

1.Drizzilla wonders the same thing. But she just dosen't care enough to put any effort in to...anything.
She is pretty ISN'T THAT ENOUGH? *eyeroll*
He is handsome and popular and in a band. She is a shallow sea-witch.
You don't have to get her. It would be better if you didn't.
2.Ursularizzilla or is that her name in your country? The sisters' names are different around the world.
Yes, she is just not caring her way though high school, attached herself to popularity and power and is just waiting it out.
3. She isn't like that to me, I don't really mind others thinking she is though. She is the "Doesn't want them to bully me so I bully others with them in hopes of not being on the lowest pecking order" to me. A coward who has yet to fins a reason to stand up for herself and think. Love will make her brave later in life. The lack of it in the s-word 3 and the presence of it in the s-word 2 is my reference to this.
4.I like adding little things to make the school look "lived in" and not just a stage

Thank you

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DaisyDaling In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 16:23:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure how she's going to do that! Anyways, Anastasia and Drizella were really funny here

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Morloth88 In reply to DaisyDaling [2017-08-23 09:26:47 +0000 UTC]

Keep herself and Ariel from singing is one idea?
Thanks

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DaisyDaling In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-23 13:19:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yes it is! Really didn't think that trough! Maybe Ariel has a painful case of throat pain because of Vanessa (still not sure how she'll do that if that is the case), but that'll mean that Vanessa 'has it, too'  . I'm not sure if my idea even makes sense, but I thought about the talent show at this point. No matter how, Vanessa surely has many more plans.

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WishExpedition23 In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 16:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Loving the villain plot!

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Morloth88 In reply to WishExpedition23 [2017-08-17 11:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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WishExpedition23 In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-17 17:41:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Toongrrl In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 16:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh loving this : )

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Morloth88 In reply to Toongrrl [2017-08-23 09:26:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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cmara In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 15:56:19 +0000 UTC]

Let Anastasia be on Ariel's side for this

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Morloth88 In reply to cmara [2017-08-17 11:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Nope.
Anastasia will side with the power. She listens to her mother and the bully and does as she is told.
She only listens to Cinderella when Cindy is a princess.
She falls in love at first sight with the baker, sure but still. it's not like she talked to him.
She is just so starved of kindness, she isn't thought to give it to others.

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cmara In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-17 11:57:39 +0000 UTC]

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xxYorukoxx In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 15:50:53 +0000 UTC]

Oookaayy... first she acts like a fangirl now she's talking like she doesn't even like him that much. (If so why did she even WANT to be the one to date him outside of preventing Ariel from dating him?) Like we get it you're horrible.

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Morloth88 In reply to xxYorukoxx [2017-08-23 09:27:59 +0000 UTC]

She dosn't like him, she likes him on a stage adored by others.

Drizzilla wonders the exact same thing.

She sure is.

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xxYorukoxx In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-24 04:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Well at least I'll eventually have the entertainment of watching what your version of her getting what's coming to her will be. Just a note of curiosity... what's your take on Cinderella's step sisters? Are they just horrible like their mother or is it mostly just how they're affected by the way the woman raised them?

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Morloth88 In reply to xxYorukoxx [2017-08-28 13:32:23 +0000 UTC]

Affected by the woman who raised them and the company they keep.
When they get away from her, each other and Vanessa think they will grow as people.
As of now, they are bad.

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xxYorukoxx In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-28 15:39:57 +0000 UTC]

That's what I figured. Man Cinderella's stepmother is a horrid, toxic woman...

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bhut In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 15:36:55 +0000 UTC]

Vanessa is evil. Seriously. High school evil, but still.

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Morloth88 In reply to bhut [2017-08-23 09:28:07 +0000 UTC]

Evil none the less.

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LadyDesmoria In reply to ??? [2017-08-13 15:28:55 +0000 UTC]

The only way I see her actually pulling this off if she forces Ariel to sing for her, like I stated ages back. Can't exactly use a voice recording this time, it's a live performance.

She could go the Suite Life of Zack and Cody route and stick Ariel behind a curtain and she lip syncs. It could work for a time until someone *coughsBellecoughRapunzel* yank the curtain reveal the farce and Vanessa is humiliated beyond belief. Her reputation would be trashed beyond repair, which in all honesty, she deserves. Question is, what would she do to get Ariel to agree?

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Morloth88 In reply to LadyDesmoria [2017-08-17 13:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Singing in the rain.
That's the plot to singing in the rain.

I'm pretty sure I've told you (or maybe it was someone else)
that that is the plot to sining in the rain.
I have had this exact conversation before

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LadyDesmoria In reply to Morloth88 [2017-08-17 13:59:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it was ages ago so kinda forgot

I believe we did, discussing how Vanessa was gonna cope if Eric asked her to sing

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