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Continued from [link]Enter The Collective Part 2: The Proposition And The Primary Objective
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Okay...so what do I do now? I've found Gemma, however she's in the middle of undergoing some pretty extensive transformation into one of these cyborg women...what I'm afraid of is that if I remove the various wires, tubes, and other machinery that's invading what's left of her organic parts that it would kill her, not to mention that her complete lower half of her body is missing...yep, my scans of her vitals have deducted that it would definitely kill her if separated from the machines for a extended period of time, as her incomplete cybernetic additions are serving more as life support at this moment. She stirs a little bit and I see that she's actually conscious...she struggles a bit but manages to lift her head to look at me. Her left eyeball is missing and is currently replaced with a series of wires and tubes entering her ocular cavity, tubes have invaded her nostrils of her nose plus there's a giant tube that's in her mouth, her head had been shaven already and the base of her skull had been removed surgically...I could see where it looks like various implants and other machinery had been added. And on top of all of that, the little bit of skin that is left is riddled with various wires, nodes, plates, and other things that has made Gemma less human and more machine now.
She looks at me with tears streaming out of her still organic right eye and with a weak and murmured voice, her speech patterns hollow and digitized as she parts her lips and attempts to talk,
Wow...It's chilling to me to hear her say those words. She's in so much agony that she would rather just die than to endure another moment of her imminent transformation into one of these cyborg women. Not to mention that she wants me to be the one to put her out of her misery! Nobody told me that being a Superheroine involved and kind of shit like this! I don't wanna kill anyone, even if it is to put them out of their misery! No...snap out of it Nikki...get your head in the game and focus...don't fall apart now! It's been my mission to save Gemma since her disappearance; I said that I was gonna bring her home and dammit, that's what I'm gonna do! I don't know why I've been brought here, but since I'm here I might as well make good on my promise! My favorite thing to say is that pressure can either crack pipes or create diamonds....and it's time for me to shine!
She repeats her morbid request of being put out of her misery, but I ignore her. Hmm...I wonder if there's any kind of way that I can connect some of her wires to my body and keep her alive by splicing my energy source in my body with one of her wires. C'mon...think Nikki think! There's gotta be something that I can do to....
I turn to the direction of the voice to see a rather large cyborg woman smiling at me. I was so caught up in trying to rescue Gemma that I almost forgot that I was in the middle of unknown territory with all of these cyborg chicks! Arggh...stupid move Nicole, now she has the jump on me and it's painfully obvious that this was a trap! This new cyborg looks different from the others that attacked me and that are in all of the tubes in this giant chamber...she looked overly machine-like, her body looked more robotic, only loosely resembling that of a human...almost like a small mech or something. She's tall...about 6 feet 5 or so. Her limbs, as well as the major joints of her body, are segmented...said joints that connected one part of her body to another were visible. Her abdomen doesn't resemble anything like that of proper human anatomy...it looks like a big mechanical cylinder that tapers off from her upper torso and her legs. Her breasts, or whatever you want to call them, are rather large...why would a machine need such large boobs? Her neck consists of a series of tubes and wires with no covering connecting into various ports and jacks along the base of her skull.
Speaking of her skull...the entire right side of her head starting at the top of her skull was completely mechanical. Asides from her entire body schemata being entirely different from any of these other cyborg women, the other half of her head was covered with hair...which I find rather odd with all of the rest of the machinery and the fact that the other cyborg women were shaven bald. My scans of this giant cyborg woman tell me that 98% percent of her body is completely cybernetic...I can see via my X-Ray vision from my bionic eye that the other half of her head, face, and a little piece of her brain is all that's left of her organics. Despite the rest of her menacing almost monstrous appearance, her face is actually fairly attractive...she has surprisingly smooth ebony skin only a few shades lighter than my own and full luscious lips. She's quite an impressive sight, however I just can't shake the feeling of this woman looking very familiar to me.
She stares at me with her glowing pupil-less eyes with an evil smirk on her face as she walks closer to where I'm standing. Her body buzzes and whirrs with mechanical noises with each movement that she makes. She keeps her distance as she circles me, nonchalantly examining my tense frame, coiled and ready for an evasive attack....she's probably running a scan on me just like I'm doing to her...her power levels are off the charts! In some strange way, however, it seems more like she's checking me out as opposed to sizing me up for a fight.
It just hit me...I know where I know her from...this woman is, or was Dira Lane...former Triple F Ultimate Champion as well as former heroine that later turned rogue and joined the evil group Cybercom. She looks much different from the last time I've seen her! I interrupt her...
Well, I was right in saying that she WAS Dira Lane. Okay, I need some answers.
I took it upon myself to lead the charge for my cyborg uprising...however, Cybercom's executive board said that I was a megalomanic...a madwoman to want to assimilate only women and create a world run by Gynoids. I no longer cared about their plans of being the world's leader in the manufacturing of cybernetics and technology...I wanted for Cybercom to be in full control of the world! The board continued to show their defiance and of course I didn't let that stop my plans; being that I had so much influence within Cybercom, I was able to get most of the female cyborgs that were products of Cybercom that were dedicated to the cause of complete gynoid rule to join my insurrection. Of course, the males were exterminated and the females that resisted were either assimilated by force or destroyed completely. Yet my legion isn't quite big enough...I need to assimilate more women into the Collective so that we are able to make our vision into a reality. That would explain the recent abductions of women like Gemma Kildare here...I need strong subjects to help complete the Primary Objective, as I see that we are going to have to use violent force for all to comply with achieving our primary objective. Some of these women are receiving just a few cybernetic additions, whereas some are being made with full mechanical bodies like myself. This is the new face of Cybercom."
I didn't expect any of that! Just then she walks up to me and strokes her hand softly across my face. I kindly swat it away.
I'm beginning to get a little pissed and annoyed by this chick.
This is your destiny, Adora-1. Denounce your humanity and embrace the Machine. Join me as my herald and lover and we will rule the world forever...I promise you all of the desires of your heart!"
Damn, this chick talks a lot!
Just then at that point, it seems like all of those pods that contained the fully assimilated cyborg women opened up and they all became fully activated. Damn it's a lot of them....looks like I'm in some serious shit now!!!
End Part 2
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This is the reintroduction and revamp to two old characters of mine combined into one (Sataria being one of my oldest characters of all). She's the brand new villain to hit the scene in Angel Falls and it looks like NO ONE is safe from the wrath of Sataria the Cyborg Queen and Cybercom...not heroines, not villains, NO ONE!!!
This is an story.
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Comments: 71
Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to ??? [2009-12-16 00:11:18 +0000 UTC]
Well, Nikki's never been one that believed in luck...but she is gonna need some kind of drastic intervention to help her out. She's far behind enemy lines, doesn't know where she's at, and heavily outnumbered...it doesn't look good for her at all. And as for saving Gemma...she's gotta figure out how to save herself at the moment! But you're right...it's situations like this that is the hallmark of a true superheroine! We'll see just how she handles the overwhelming force of the Collective!
As for Cybercom...I may change what I said and instead branching off from Cybercom she would have taken it over. I've always had it in my mind that Cybercom's main goal was for cybernetic domination...if Sataria's gonna attempt to take over the world, why wouldn't she start with her own company?
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cmryan58 In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-12-16 01:22:52 +0000 UTC]
Agreed no one should plan on luck saving them. But superheroes seem to get themselves in pretty darn deep with amazing frequency.
As for Sataria taking over Cybercom. I think it is a great idea. Brings whole new layers of meaning to the idea of using machines to increase efficency!!! Of course Sataria's evil plan to exterminate the entire male gender and convert the female gender into cyborg lesbians might be subtle hint that Sataria "IS OUT OF WHATS LEFT OF HER MIND." Sorry about the all caps I just thought a little extra emphasis was indicated
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to cmryan58 [2009-12-16 07:48:41 +0000 UTC]
Yeah...superheroes do seem to get themselves in pretty deep, yet somehow always overcome what seems to be insurmountable odds. We'll see if Nikki is able to tap into that same twist of fate that allows for her to come out on top!
Yeah...what I'm thinking about with the whole Cybercom business is that they were once a very powerful cybernetics/technological weapons corporation....Sataria/Dira Lane being one of their greatest creations and highest ranking members of Cybercom, goes off her gourd and is overcome with the idea of total female cybernetic domination. Of course, the male and non-cybernetic members of Cybercom's executive board would have no parts of it...yet Sataria had already at that point have made her connections with the other cyborgs and began her hostile takeover of Cybercom.
I was thinking about this story and Sataria today, and yes...her screws are very loose! What is left of her human mind is bonkers...as for why she's a bit whacked out, you'll find out why in the future.
I'll brainstorm some more about it all and hopefully tie everything together seamlessly!
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hotrod5 In reply to ??? [2009-12-15 21:27:52 +0000 UTC]
So Sataria wants Nikki to be her Silver Surfer?! Well technically Nikki already has the silver symbiote suit and she needs is a flying silver surfboard.
Sataria is certainly a whole lot of machine, Nikki has her work cut out for her.
Love the pic, Marcus. I'm looking forward to the colour version.
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to hotrod5 [2009-12-15 21:47:53 +0000 UTC]
You know...I didn't even think about the connection of Silver Surfer and Nikki being both chrome!
Yeah, I guess that if she had a flying surfboard and let her symbiote cover up her head completely, then she would be a nice female Silver Surfer! Only thing is, Sataria would need to grown to giant size...big enough to eat a planet!
I'm infringing on so many copyrights with this story....Sataria's body design has lots of influence from Robocop, the Collective is like a whacked out version of the Borg from Star Trek, Nikki's symbiote is loosely based on the liquid metal Terminator, Venom, and Nira-X....and those chicks in the tubs at the bottom look a lot like my own character Deuce!
And yes, Sataria is a whole lot of machine....let's hope that Nikki can stop, or at least slow down her evil plans. Looks like she's got a lot of fighting to do...and that doesn't even include Sataria herself!!! I'm sure that Sataria would love to add LFP, Rin, Poison, Det. Angie, Dark Inferna, and Dragon to the Collective along with all of the rest of the heroines and villains of Angel Falls...so we're counting on Nikki in this one!!!
Thanks Dwight...glad you enjoy it!
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hotrod5 In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-12-15 22:41:46 +0000 UTC]
"To me my board" I can see Nikki as the female Silver Surfer. I think Sataria could inspire to be Unicron (Transformer planet eater instead of Galactus)
I think I know something about infringing *cough* La Femme Punisher *cough* Like LFP, it works for you.
All my ladies whether they are good, bad or neutral are not safe!
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to hotrod5 [2009-12-15 23:08:46 +0000 UTC]
Nah...Nikki's having too much fun being "Diamond". She'll leave the surfing to Norrin Radd himself! (I think that's his name! ) But I would imagine that she would be a fan of his comic...being that he's decked out in chrome like she is!
Sataria being like Unicron could work. Only thing is that she wouldn't be so much concerned about eating planets as opposed to assimilating females...and having "cyber-sex" with some of them! Truthfully, she's pretty much just like the Borg Queen from Star Trek at this point.
And I guess you're right with the infringement thing...LFP is pretty much the spitting image of the Punisher...just in female form! :yeehaw:
And NO ONE is safe from the Collective...not any of your gals, not any of mine, not Lin, not UW or UV, not SS.....and don't forget that they wanna wipe us males off of the face of the planet completely!
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hotrod5 In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-12-16 01:21:41 +0000 UTC]
Poison: You mean I can carve Poison Lines into all the men I want! I think about it.
Rin: Poison, no. You are not going to be into a cyborg just for that.
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to hotrod5 [2009-12-16 07:30:51 +0000 UTC]
Sapphira: (To Poison) "I saw that picture of you with the cyborg arms and the green plasma flames...if these cyborg bitches get their hands on you, you'd wipe out all of the men by your damn self!"
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hotrod5 In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-12-16 13:57:20 +0000 UTC]
Poison could be Sataria's killing machine.
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to hotrod5 [2009-12-16 15:41:46 +0000 UTC]
Sataria would make Poison one of her Elite Killing Machines! Oh, she's very familiar with the art of death that Poison deals! She's also very impressed with the finesse style of Rin as well! Needless to say, Sataria has her bionic eyes on Double Trouble!
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robogirls In reply to ??? [2009-12-15 20:40:14 +0000 UTC]
dead or alive you're coming with me
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to robogirls [2009-12-15 20:45:48 +0000 UTC]
Ah...you see the Robocop influence with her design!
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vince3 In reply to ??? [2009-12-15 20:31:07 +0000 UTC]
Sataria knows of the two that is always fighting, but there may be even more powerful females in Angel Falls that she might not know about yet........
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to vince3 [2009-12-15 20:33:53 +0000 UTC]
Oh...she knows ALL of them (Lin included)...she just mentioned those two.
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vince3 In reply to Mr-Marcus-81 [2009-12-15 20:39:17 +0000 UTC]
Then she knows that she may need more than just Diamond for the top 5: Genocide, Walkiria, UW, SSW, and Lin.........
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Mr-Marcus-81 In reply to vince3 [2009-12-15 20:44:33 +0000 UTC]
Oh...Sataria wants to assimilate them all....but Diamond is who she wants most....for sexual reasons! With all of the heavy hitters in her control, that will only make her vision of a planet ruled by female cyborgs come true even quicker!
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